Arknights: The Mage of the Northern Frontier

The idea is really good Ursus' high-end combat power was transferred to the Southern Icefield Division after the Major to join the integrated movement. As a result, the captain went crazy due to the transfer of the vice team, and a conflict broke out in the locker room. After that, he decided to leave to play brother CS. But this book is too AI-flavored Don't you think AI's writing style ruined such a good idea of yours? AI has to write a lot of psychological actions and detailed descriptions of each supporting character that it can save, and AI is completely a single-threaded creature. The dialogue performance of each character is exactly the same, which gives me the feeling that Ursus is full of philosophers. But this is wrong, brother. How can there be so many philosophers in the Southern Icefield with the highest level of education per capita in elementary school? Let me give you a trick Treat the generated article as a sample article and just make changes on it. Delete subordinate clauses and metaphorical sentences, the most important thing is the parallel complex sentences of the groove Change the dialogue. Add "..." To the Patriot's dialogue. Tallulah, Froststar, and Hengha will not need to be changed. The most important thing is to change the dialogue of the supporting characters. Make the people who should be vulgar and vulgar. If you are willing, I will see the sentences that I think need to be changed again and comment below this comment. Then there are no suggestions One last thing Your ideas are really good. Among the articles I have read, you are the best at writing about the Ursus region. Come on.

The lack of traffic is Tomato's problem. The book is very good. I hope the author can stick to it.

The writing is okay, but the traffic is low. After all, Zhou's articles are like this. I hope the author can continue to write more [Bookshelf plus one]

I just finished reading the first volume. It's very engaging and well-written. I'd like to cheer you up.

Very good, keep up the good work

I only watched the beginning. There are various detailed descriptions that are obviously polished by AI. If you can accept AI, you can read it.

This is a very good book. The image of the protagonist, the war sorcerer, is well created. The narrative and plot are very natural, and it fits the plot of Ursus very well.

Boss, is [Tallulah] in the introduction the heroine?

Take a look and see