Western Fantasy: They're All Good Girls

I have read more than 100 chapters, so let me share my thoughts. Plot and Pacing The plot of this book does not develop very quickly and is quite steady. A big advantage is that in terms of content, the plot and characters are very solidly written. The descriptions of the protagonist group and each heroine are good, but they are not too slow, they are very smooth and smooth. Moreover, the protagonist of this book is a transborn child, but the weak development period is skipped directly - starting from Chapter 1, the protagonist already has quite good strength. A small problem. However, I also discovered some problems: starting from Chapter 1, there are many characters and various settings, which may make people confused and confused for a while, and may be a bit discouraging for some readers. But it gets much better when you look at it later. About the heroine Then let's talk about the heroine. There should be about 4 or 5 at the moment, and there should be more in the future. The male protagonist is really a pure succubus in human form. But I have no problem with the heroine, as long as she can be written well. There is nothing wrong with the writing of the heroine in this book, there is nothing to complain about, and even some of the heroine's settings are quite interesting. Power System Although there is a potion system, potions do not account for a large proportion in the power system of this book. There may be a hint of "mystery", but there are also many differences.

So far it looks pretty good, multiple girls, classic mysterious potion type, no green and no bulls, I haven't seen those mindless plots that are pretentious and slap in the face so far, the protagonist is pretty good

So far, it is a magical book. There are no enemies who are mindless and malicious towards the protagonist. The characters' behavior is quite normal. As long as the writing style remains the same in the follow-up, it can still score nine points even if some people can't read it. There are no obvious mistakes in the extraordinary system. There are no problems with the boundary between the normal world and the illegal world. It is very comfortable to read. I don't know how to write about fighting, and the different levels of combat power are also vague.

4.3-4.5 Stars (maybe higher, it's still interesting after all) On August 9th, I read the latest chapter. There are no particularly stupid idiots, at least I don't see any that are obviously not very smart. The background worldview is relatively classic, but classic means high and low limits, right? The main line is quite clear and logical. There are quite a lot of characters to describe. Some of the long sentences are a bit clumsy and read a bit strangely, but you can clearly see the traces of human error, and the author corrected the typos fairly quickly (at least the @ one was corrected). There is a system panel (purely for viewing data), but it is of little use and has very little description. One star for tomatoes.

Very good. There is a hint of the Lord of Mysteries. It is a good read.

A very good-looking work. The writing is very good so far. The tasks are gradually progressing. There are interesting things to watch. The heroines also have distinct personalities. It is a very delicious book [The God of Bird Food][The God of Bird Food][The God of Bird Food]

A+! Pure western fantasy harem novel, good points 😋

The design of the road is like a god, and it is extremely clever. The farther a knight goes in the path of knighthood, the more things he has seen and experienced, and "justice" is exhausted. You can no longer move forward on the path of knighthood.

Although there are some flaws, I can give it five stars. First of all, the introduction of the protagonist's strength is not clear at the beginning. Secondly, the performance of the combat power is not obvious. Then the plot is too slow. It has only been a week after more than 100 chapters and the protagonist's sub-career has not been opened. It is too slow. Finally, the update needs to be accelerated.

It can be seen that the author's construction of the world view is relatively mature, the plot is smooth, the character settings are interesting, and the language style is unique and excellent. But there are some problems. First of all, the level of combat power is not clear. Chapter 20 divides the levels of rare objects, but until more than sixty chapters, there is no clear explanation of the level of the path of the blessed. In addition, unlike most novels, which usually go from point to point and gradually expand the world view and other settings, the protagonist is already relatively mature at the beginning of this article, which is equivalent to missing a growth line that is easy for readers to substitute, and the main line unfolds relatively slowly, making it a slow-burning book.