Moon and Dawn

1. Content perception This book adopts the starting point of the original growth of a baby and the classic pairing setting of childhood sweethearts. It has a full sense of atmosphere and is fully worthy of five-star praise. However, judging from the suitability of the theme, the story begins with couples interacting from the junior high school stage, so the overall traffic is not expected to increase explosively. But the sweetness of the work is very pure, natural, and overall gentle and healing. If the story is given a narrative shell of overseas rebirth, the popularity and spread in the later period will most likely be higher. The overall style is gentle and delicate, and the texture can perfectly match the pure sweetness of "Tamako Love Story". 2. Plot logic The narrative rhythm of the whole book is gentle and gentle, there is no fierce conflict, but the sweetness is well-founded and very natural. Each chapter has delicate and sweet interactions, the plot is clean and pure, and there are no messy branches or redundant surprises, making the reading experience comfortable and decompressing. 3. Character design Although it is a rebirth theme, the protagonist currently does not rely too much on the golden finger of rebirth, and the character design is very restrained and natural. The characters have no obvious labeling and stereotyped design, they are not exaggerated or suspended, and the overall shaping is mainly about spreading sugar delicately and getting along with each other in daily life, which makes the look and feel very comfortable.

I have read too many cool articles, sadistic articles, urban articles, system articles, and immortality articles. It is really healing to read this one again. The writing style is also good and the writing is very warm. Thank you to the author for taking your time at this pace. The more people watch, the higher the rating will be.

So sweet, so sweet, so sweet. It's so sweet to me. The heroine is so cute. This kind of daily routine has the sweetness of a young couple. It's so cute that I can't stand it. It's so beautiful. The author will update quickly. The male protagonist seems to be a little talkative. I want to see the male protagonist take the initiative. As for the supporting characters, I feel they are also to promote the development of the plot. However, it is only about forty chapters. I hope the author can also make the supporting characters more vivid. The plot of the childhood is also very interesting. The two children are cute and lovable. I like it very much.

The writing is very nice, the plot is not ink-filled, and there is no hint of content like other male videos. The male and female protagonists are well portrayed, but the male protagonist is not three-dimensional in the early stage, and his character is reflected in the later stage when he talks a lot. The female protagonist is a very cute little girl, with a good personality. In short, they are two very cute children [crying] I like it very much, come on.

The sweet mountain spring water does not have an unpleasant smell and is gummy and irritating like some tap water with saccharin added. Buyers and sellers show the same performance, you can watch it

The rhythm is okay, but it's too short. It's very comfortable. Come on.

Too aloof and too mature

So innocent, so youthful, so beautiful, so gentle.

Ahhhhh it feels so sweet [laughs]

It's pretty good, the writing is not bad, and the subject matter of the novel is not the usual rebirth system or anything like that.

Not Like to Talk reminded me of Yan Qiu, which is a bit similar to that book.

I have read countless rebirth stories. The male protagonist is most worthy of being reborn. He is not mentally retarded and is not a dog. It is very comfortable to watch.

It feels a bit real. It's not an adaptation of the author's autobiography.

Come on, author! ! Love watching🥺🥺

Looks good, looking forward to the follow-up

It looks good, I love it, I will update it soon [laughs][laughs][laughs]

😁Good job, author, come on

Okay, high quality but not popular

Very beautiful, real, childhood sweetheart It's very good, the plot is smooth, not industrial saccharine, childhood sweethearts, growing up slowly, but very sweet and healing, without any malicious plot. I gave you the only gift I have left, please update soon [laughing]

Very good, nice looking

Push. Daily sweetness

I downloaded Tomato just to watch this [Bookshelf Plus One]

Eat some small desserts appropriately to cheer up your mood

A very warm and healing novel

This is the love I expected, but I know I really can't find it

It's really beautiful. The author works hard to update it.

It's good-looking, a bit like a baby's marriage to Qingmei when a person is just born. However, the pace of this book is faster. Although the other book is good-looking, the pace is too slow and I can't read it.

It's a good read, a very warm daily novel, not too poisonous, and has a good grasp of the tone.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a book in Tomato that appeals to my appetite. I can only say that the description is very delicate and sweet. It's so sweet that I giggled and rolled over in bed (•ᴗ•)♡

Who said this book can't work? This book is so beautiful! Sweet daily life