I have read a lot of Pokémon fanfics, and I feel very good about this one so far. There are no big problems with the plot. The only thing is that the level of the Pokémon increases too slowly. The Pokémon only increases by one level after twenty or thirty chapters. I feel that the growth mechanism may collapse in the later stages of writing. Of course, I just give the author a suggestion.
It's still very interesting. You must keep writing, author! Come on!
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I have read a lot of Pokémon fanfics, and I feel very good about this one so far. There are no big problems with the plot. The only thing is that the level of the Pokémon increases too slowly. The Pokémon only increases by one level after twenty or thirty chapters. I feel that the growth mechanism may collapse in the later stages of writing. Of course, I just give the author a suggestion. It's still very interesting. You must keep writing, author! Come on!
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It would be nice if the elves had more feelings.