[1V1 pure love, non-traditional sour text]
Xie Fusang✘Pei Yiliu/Ruan Yue
Patients with mental illness are attacked by psychiatrists
Original title: "Drowning"
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In the middle of the night after the first snowfall, there are not only budding plum blossoms, but also notebooks covered with thin snow that carry thoughts and love.
It snowed for three days and three nights, and the thin snow turned into thick snow.
Strange, why is the notebook frozen when there is no water in it?
It turns out that it was Ling's memories that came back to him.
The first rays of spring sunshine shine and the ice and snow melt. The notebook was soaked by the snow that melted in the spring.
The words on it are no longer legible.
Until spring, wrapped in warmth, blows the last leaf.
A few scattered words express strong love and thoughts.
At the end of the story, the janitor picked up the notebook and threw it into the trash can without thinking. Destiny will prompt them to meet again in another world.
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"Auspicious snow heralds a good year."
"Fusang embraces the first clear day."
Reader comments
Generally speaking, there is still a lot of foreshadowing here, but the depth is different, and the characters are relatively distinct. Wei Han, in particular, gives people a feeling of being both stupid and smart, which is a bit hard to describe.
The confession part is really sweet. Diabetes is going to be sweetened! ! !
Forgive me for my lack of words to describe it, but it's really beautiful!
However, there are many places where words are repeated, but this can be ignored, and you won't even notice it if you don't look carefully!
Anyway, it's still very nice! Come on! ! Looking forward to the completion!
I wish your writing will get better and better!
Generally speaking, there is still a lot of foreshadowing here, but the depth is different, and the characters are relatively distinct. Wei Han, in particular, gives people a feeling of being both stupid and smart, which is a bit hard to describe. The confession part is really sweet. Diabetes is going to be sweetened! ! ! Forgive me for my lack of words to describe it, but it's really beautiful! However, there are many places where words are repeated, but this can be ignored, and you won't even notice it if you don't look carefully! Anyway, it's still very nice! Come on! ! Looking forward to the completion! I wish your writing will get better and better!