[Elegy] [Transmigration] [Daily life] [Travel] [One female lead] [Even I don’t know]
In 2026, Zhang Peng, an unemployed construction worker, and his troublemaking friend Zhou Shun were traveling in Yangzhou when they unexpectedly came across a strange cosplayer who took her role far too seriously.
She said her name was Lin Pianpian, and that she had transmigrated from the night the city fell in 1645. She didn’t recognize traffic lights, couldn’t use a phone, was frightened by the words “food delivery,” and knew nothing about modern life.
The police station confirmed that she really existed: Lin Pianpian, twenty-three, an orphan, with a public household registration. She had an identity, but no records of education, employment, or social connections, like a ghost who had never left a trace in the modern world.
He taught her how to adapt to this world, and she wrote down every debt on paper. Two people who seemed to have nothing helped each other keep moving forward.
This isn’t a hero rescuing a beauty. Two people thrown off their separate tracks are trying to build a place for each other called “home.”
(Chapters 1–6 set things up and help readers get acquainted with the story. Feel free to skip them if you like. The main story begins in Chapter 7.)
Evaluate yourself, the first floor is mine
After reading the Yangzhou chapter, I feel a little melancholy, as if I have become an impetuous person... I dare not look back, my mood is very complicated, the ordinary words are like a dull knife cutting flesh, I don't know what happened, I don't know what will happen, I am afraid that she has changed, and I am also afraid She hasn't changed. What's hidden under this blank space? I don't know. You wrote very well, but I'd better read less words like this in the future. It's sad... It's revealed between the lines that she will leave alone. The Chang'an chapter is more like the author decided to add it later. It's sad...
The body is neither jade nor clean, and the beauty is in ruins and is left to the frost. Although I don't have the pure bones of ice and snow, I have a loyal heart to avenge chaos and separation. Smiling stains the jade bones and burns them with sickness, and secretly carries the plague and poison to destroy the arrogant barbarians. The one hundred thousand well-dressed guests in the Southern Ming Dynasty were not as good as one commoner in a brothel.
Limited by the author's writing style, the expressions are a bit repetitive at certain times, but the article is a good article. The author did not write those touching plots but started from all aspects of daily life, giving Lin Pianpian enough respect and freedom while not forgetting to give her appropriate help and care. It is recommended that the author appropriately increase the dialogue content in the middle and later stages, so that Lin Pianpian can truly come out of that tragedy and her love can be responded to.
The author's writing feels very good. I personally don't have any literary background, but I personally feel that the author wrote "he" and "she" a bit too much. I could use their full names instead. It feels okay when reading, but once I listen to the book, I can't tell the difference between the two people.
It's very well written, and the emotions and psychology are very real. 😄 Some of the text can be seen as borrowed from some places, but the look and feel is still very good. Come on, the author, I'm really looking forward to the next story [Sending my heart]
There are already very few Aihong creations, please give it a try😘
The writing is okay. In addition, can the paragraphs be divided into one large paragraph? This is simply a challenge to our reading habits. 🤭
Looks good, will get up
Life seems to be like this, dull and smoky. The characters in the novel are very three-dimensional and the characterization is quite good.