An Ordinary Person's World of Naruto

The writing is good, and the protagonist has a very delicate heart, but is the protagonist a time traveler? Why do I feel like a child? Or was he just a ten-year-old child when he traveled through time? [What]

It's well written, 10,000 times better than some novels written by some self-proclaimed civilian ninjas that beat Kakashi in Chapter 20 of Graduation and Chapter 40. Invincible writing has the routine of invincible writing, and civilian writing has the writing style of civilian writing. If the author can grasp a certain scale and control the intensity of the protagonist, then this book will be a rare good book. It is also just right to have a small talent for illusion. After all, he has been born in two lives and has a higher mental intensity. There is no problem with the control of details, the children's condition, and the handling of emotions. Overall, if you want to read civilian ninja literature, this book seems reasonable and logical at the moment. Another point is that if you want to increase the rating of a book, the most important thing is to update it. If you update it more, you will naturally have more readers and book reviews. Otherwise, the book will die.

He is a real commoner, and finally no longer a fake commoner. His mentality was a little worse in the early stage, but he was not disgusted. He also grew up without taking too long, and the transition was natural. It's not a cool article, but for me who reads a lot of cool articles, it's actually very satisfying. As a book that hasn't been rated yet, I must keep it alive.

It's really good, but after reading a few chapters, I feel there's a slight problem, because as an adult soul, the ability to withstand pressure is indeed a bit low. If you are a normal adult male, and have a rough plot memory as a basis, you will analyze the pros and cons as soon as possible after half an hour of fear, and quickly think of the best plan, instead of being depressed for almost a whole day.

I read it in one go. It is a very exciting story. You can read it as a Naruto fanfic. It has its own story line. Naruto is just the framework. The content is indeed a story of mortal ninjas. It has a unique flavor and a strong sense of life. It is very life-like. The supporting characters are not that dedicated, but they are indeed above passing standards. There is no poison at the moment. I may hope to change my mind where I can. For example, whether the only Uchiha in the class can be redeemed and remain a peaceful Uchiha. Otherwise, he will really be a mortal here. This is a point that is not easy to grasp for many mortal themes.

Qingliu in the civilian stream, it would probably be like this if I traveled to Naruto. The struggle of the low-level ninjas is very well written, and the pace of the protagonist's gradual progress is also very good. It is very suitable to my taste. I give it a ten points and hope the author can keep updating it.

For those whose combat power has collapsed, the system's Naruto novels are much better. The protagonist only briefly read the Naruto novels before traveling through time. He doesn't know the general plot at all. It adds a lot of fun to watch, and there is no invincible plot. Anyway, this book is not bad for civilians 👍

Personally, I think it is a good masterpiece among tomatoes and is worth a look. 👍 I just hope the protagonist can be a little more open-minded. 😄

The author writes with a sense of ordinary people. The struggle to survive in the ninja world and the helplessness of ordinary little people. The segmentation may be improved. I can give it a subjective rating of 5 points.

I really like this story about ordinary ninjas in a familiar Naruto worldview. This kind of fanfic is really enriching the world of Naruto. I am very grateful to the author. It already has 5 stars, so where can I read the 500 chapters that haven't been released yet?