No system/male protagonist/slow pace
An ordinary person who travels to Naruto without Sharingan, Byakugan, and other extraordinary powers, how can he survive in the cruel world of Naruto?
There will be some setbacks, which may not look good to some people. The protagonist will slowly grow up.
If you are tired of watching Naruto fandoms that are mindlessly killing people, you might as well give it a try. I will try my best to show a more realistic Naruto world.
Reader comments
The writing is good, and the protagonist has a very delicate heart, but is the protagonist a time traveler? Why do I feel like a child? Or was he just a ten-year-old child when he traveled through time? [What]
It's well written, 10,000 times better than some novels written by some self-proclaimed civilian ninjas that beat Kakashi in Chapter 20 of Graduation and Chapter 40. Invincible writing has the routine of invincible writing, and civilian writing has the writing style of civilian writing.
If the author can grasp a certain scale and control the intensity of the protagonist, then this book will be a rare good book. It is also just right to have a small talent for illusion. After all, he has been born in two lives and has a higher mental intensity. There is no problem with the control of details, the children's condition, and the handling of emotions.
Overall, if you want to read civilian ninja literature, this book seems reasonable and logical at the moment.
Another point is that if you want to increase the rating of a book, the most important thing is to update it. If you update it more, you will naturally have more readers and book reviews. Otherwise, the book will die.
He is a real commoner, and finally no longer a fake commoner. His mentality was a little worse in the early stage, but he was not disgusted. He also grew up without taking too long, and the transition was natural. It's not a cool article, but for me who reads a lot of cool articles, it's actually very satisfying. As a book that hasn't been rated yet, I must keep it alive.
It's really good, but after reading a few chapters, I feel there's a slight problem, because as an adult soul, the ability to withstand pressure is indeed a bit low. If you are a normal adult male, and have a rough plot memory as a basis, you will analyze the pros and cons as soon as possible after half an hour of fear, and quickly think of the best plan, instead of being depressed for almost a whole day.
I read it in one go. It is a very exciting story. You can read it as a Naruto fanfic. It has its own story line. Naruto is just the framework. The content is indeed a story of mortal ninjas. It has a unique flavor and a strong sense of life. It is very life-like. The supporting characters are not that dedicated, but they are indeed above passing standards. There is no poison at the moment. I may hope to change my mind where I can. For example, whether the only Uchiha in the class can be redeemed and remain a peaceful Uchiha. Otherwise, he will really be a mortal here. This is a point that is not easy to grasp for many mortal themes.
Qingliu in the civilian stream, it would probably be like this if I traveled to Naruto. The struggle of the low-level ninjas is very well written, and the pace of the protagonist's gradual progress is also very good. It is very suitable to my taste. I give it a ten points and hope the author can keep updating it.
Personally, I think it is a good masterpiece among tomatoes and is worth a look. [Like] I just hope the protagonist can be a little more open-minded. [Laugh]
For those whose combat power has collapsed, the system's Naruto novels are much better. The protagonist only briefly read the Naruto novels before traveling through time. He doesn't know the general plot at all. It adds a lot of fun to watch, and there is no invincible plot.
Anyway, this book is not bad for civilians [like]
The author writes with a sense of ordinary people. The struggle to survive in the ninja world and the helplessness of ordinary little people. The segmentation may be improved. I can give it a subjective rating of 5 points.
I really like this story about ordinary ninjas in a familiar Naruto worldview. This kind of fanfic is really enriching the world of Naruto. I am very grateful to the author.
It already has 5 stars, so where can I read the 500 chapters that haven't been released yet?
At first I didn't take it seriously, thinking it was some cool article, but after reading it I felt good about it, and then I was gradually attracted to it.
First of all, the writing of this Soul Transmutation is not that systematic or exciting. Then the protagonist gradually grows up from a commoner, from a "crane tail". This feels like watching an anime, rather than reading a tomato novel.
Moreover, the characters in it, whether they are opponents who appear in one or two chapters or "Ai, Taro, etc." In the "protagonist group", are all tangible. Yes, tangible, I can imagine what they look like through the author's description.
It took me two days to catch up on the latest chapter. This is the second better fanfic I have seen. The first one is The Locke and Death Jellyfish Pirates.
Next, I am more curious about whether the protagonist will change the plot of Naruto? The next big plot is the genocide of the Uchiha. What can the protagonist change? At present, it is difficult for the protagonist to protect himself. He is a little pstd scared. Also, I don't want Uchiha Izumi to die! (‡▼Benefit▼)
Finally, I write so much just because of me! Want to! The author should not be a eunuch! !
Five-star praise is given, the author cheers
This is a good book. The protagonist is well portrayed and the plot is smooth. It is my favorite type. Good review!
After reading it for so long, I looked at the latest chapter and it turned out to be an AI-translated novel from an external website. . . . When I first looked at it, I thought it had a bit of an AI flavor, but later on I felt it was okay. Did you never expect that AI is so powerful now? The level of AI translation is quite high. Can you tell me in detail how much plot you added yourself as the author? Which plot did you add? Or are most of them translated?
Come on! Looking forward to updates
I'll give you 5⭐️, can I write 8,000 words a day? [Laughs]
It's beautiful. Is there a female protagonist? The author is big [blowing kiss][licking the screen]
Finally let me see the masterpiece of Naruto again.
It's really well written, it's not the kind of genius young protagonist who is cloaked in civilian literature and the efforts of the protagonist can be seen with the naked eye.
The plot design is very reasonable, and the protagonist's physical and mental growth process is clearly written.
It's super nice, but why is this book gone?
I just found something to watch. You told me it was no longer possible. No
The book is very good, thank you two authors! The author's Pokémon fan writing is also great.
You can take a look, it's okay
It would be nice to have more
The author makes me happy
Does the author recommend any other books?
Quite a novel setting
It's pretty good. I can write my own stuff, and it's not the type of hacking the system.
The book here is very unique. You can feel that a time traveler has come to a new world and re-understood some situations in this world. It is very realistic. I am looking forward to the subsequent updates.
Keep it up, the civilian article is really good, it's starting to get better, more to come
The writing is good, and the protagonist has a very delicate heart, but is the protagonist a time traveler? Why do I feel like a child? Or was he just a ten-year-old child when he traveled through time? [What]
It's well written, 10,000 times better than some novels written by some self-proclaimed civilian ninjas that beat Kakashi in Chapter 20 of Graduation and Chapter 40. Invincible writing has the routine of invincible writing, and civilian writing has the writing style of civilian writing. If the author can grasp a certain scale and control the intensity of the protagonist, then this book will be a rare good book. It is also just right to have a small talent for illusion. After all, he has been born in two lives and has a higher mental intensity. There is no problem with the control of details, the children's condition, and the handling of emotions. Overall, if you want to read civilian ninja literature, this book seems reasonable and logical at the moment. Another point is that if you want to increase the rating of a book, the most important thing is to update it. If you update it more, you will naturally have more readers and book reviews. Otherwise, the book will die.
He is a real commoner, and finally no longer a fake commoner. His mentality was a little worse in the early stage, but he was not disgusted. He also grew up without taking too long, and the transition was natural. It's not a cool article, but for me who reads a lot of cool articles, it's actually very satisfying. As a book that hasn't been rated yet, I must keep it alive.
It's really good, but after reading a few chapters, I feel there's a slight problem, because as an adult soul, the ability to withstand pressure is indeed a bit low. If you are a normal adult male, and have a rough plot memory as a basis, you will analyze the pros and cons as soon as possible after half an hour of fear, and quickly think of the best plan, instead of being depressed for almost a whole day.
I read it in one go. It is a very exciting story. You can read it as a Naruto fanfic. It has its own story line. Naruto is just the framework. The content is indeed a story of mortal ninjas. It has a unique flavor and a strong sense of life. It is very life-like. The supporting characters are not that dedicated, but they are indeed above passing standards. There is no poison at the moment. I may hope to change my mind where I can. For example, whether the only Uchiha in the class can be redeemed and remain a peaceful Uchiha. Otherwise, he will really be a mortal here. This is a point that is not easy to grasp for many mortal themes.
Qingliu in the civilian stream, it would probably be like this if I traveled to Naruto. The struggle of the low-level ninjas is very well written, and the pace of the protagonist's gradual progress is also very good. It is very suitable to my taste. I give it a ten points and hope the author can keep updating it.
Personally, I think it is a good masterpiece among tomatoes and is worth a look. [Like] I just hope the protagonist can be a little more open-minded. [Laugh]
For those whose combat power has collapsed, the system's Naruto novels are much better. The protagonist only briefly read the Naruto novels before traveling through time. He doesn't know the general plot at all. It adds a lot of fun to watch, and there is no invincible plot. Anyway, this book is not bad for civilians [like]
The author writes with a sense of ordinary people. The struggle to survive in the ninja world and the helplessness of ordinary little people. The segmentation may be improved. I can give it a subjective rating of 5 points.
I really like this story about ordinary ninjas in a familiar Naruto worldview. This kind of fanfic is really enriching the world of Naruto. I am very grateful to the author. It already has 5 stars, so where can I read the 500 chapters that haven't been released yet?
At first I didn't take it seriously, thinking it was some cool article, but after reading it I felt good about it, and then I was gradually attracted to it. First of all, the writing of this Soul Transmutation is not that systematic or exciting. Then the protagonist gradually grows up from a commoner, from a "crane tail". This feels like watching an anime, rather than reading a tomato novel. Moreover, the characters in it, whether they are opponents who appear in one or two chapters or "Ai, Taro, etc." In the "protagonist group", are all tangible. Yes, tangible, I can imagine what they look like through the author's description. It took me two days to catch up on the latest chapter. This is the second better fanfic I have seen. The first one is The Locke and Death Jellyfish Pirates. Next, I am more curious about whether the protagonist will change the plot of Naruto? The next big plot is the genocide of the Uchiha. What can the protagonist change? At present, it is difficult for the protagonist to protect himself. He is a little pstd scared. Also, I don't want Uchiha Izumi to die! (‡▼Benefit▼) Finally, I write so much just because of me! Want to! The author should not be a eunuch! ! Five-star praise is given, the author cheers
This is a good book. The protagonist is well portrayed and the plot is smooth. It is my favorite type. Good review!
After reading it for so long, I looked at the latest chapter and it turned out to be an AI-translated novel from an external website. . . . When I first looked at it, I thought it had a bit of an AI flavor, but later on I felt it was okay. Did you never expect that AI is so powerful now? The level of AI translation is quite high. Can you tell me in detail how much plot you added yourself as the author? Which plot did you add? Or are most of them translated?
Come on! Looking forward to updates
I'll give you 5⭐️, can I write 8,000 words a day? [Laughs]
It's beautiful. Is there a female protagonist? The author is big [blowing kiss][licking the screen]
Finally let me see the masterpiece of Naruto again.
It's really well written, it's not the kind of genius young protagonist who is cloaked in civilian literature and the efforts of the protagonist can be seen with the naked eye.
The plot design is very reasonable, and the protagonist's physical and mental growth process is clearly written.
It's super nice, but why is this book gone?
I just found something to watch. You told me it was no longer possible. No
The book is very good, thank you two authors! The author's Pokémon fan writing is also great.
You can take a look, it's okay
It would be nice to have more
The author makes me happy Does the author recommend any other books?
Quite a novel setting
It's pretty good. I can write my own stuff, and it's not the type of hacking the system.
The book here is very unique. You can feel that a time traveler has come to a new world and re-understood some situations in this world. It is very realistic. I am looking forward to the subsequent updates.
Keep it up, the civilian article is really good, it's starting to get better, more to come
Let me ask politely, who is the heroine?