Two Gods******

After watching it, it was okay. The advantage is that it has its own plot, which mainly introduces the daily life of Luo Qixi and the protagonist. It is quite leisurely. The shortcoming is that there are too few battles, and the battle theme of the dual divine power is not reflected. I am a bit disappointed. I thought I could show my holiness in front of people, but it is a pity that it did not.

The plot is quite good, but the author, uh, his writing style and style are a bit like writing a diary, not like writing a novel. Of course, it can still be read despite these, but I still think the author can improve it a little bit. The plot develops too fast, the plot is too simplified, and it easily becomes a fast food article, or a fast food article, or a plot. The word "I" appears too frequently in some descriptions. This word can be omitted in some descriptions, or it can be replaced by "self", other words or the protagonist's name. This word appears too frequently, coupled with the description method, it makes this novel feel like "writing a diary" very strongly [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] Come on, learn! Author

The dialogue has a human-machine feel, so cold ૮₍ ˊᯅˋ₎ა

It's beautiful, thank you to the author!

The writing style is rather peculiar?