Wake Up! I've Become the Evil Daoist Partner of the Immortal Lord in a Danmei Novel

The capital letters are so awesome [admiration], and the jokes are also fun. "The hateful enemies actually disguised themselves as husband and wife" really made me laugh. I really like Qiu Xian's character who uses the mad man to make himself grow. Killing Qingsi is great, invincible hehe

I feel that the writing is very good. I don't want to read it because it has a very female protagonist. It will be a little frustrating. But I think this process has enriched the characters. It is still acceptable for now. I hope that I can become a non-CP heartthrob in the future. I feel that none of the characters who appear now are worthy of the protagonist. I can feel Sister Bao's determination to become stronger. I also hope that he will not be hindered by love. I look forward to the new plot in the future.

Okay, okay, it looks good. It's just that the plot is a bit frustrating, so don't read it if you want to read something exciting. This little Lu is a star. Because of his appearance, our heroine gets into trouble every day. Most of the men want to fall in love with him. Before I regained my memory, I was still suspicious of this and that, and I was afraid that there was someone outside the heroine. After recovering his memory, he used any means to achieve his goals, and even threatened the heroine and used some despicable means. Qiu Xian, our perseverance, had no choice but to fight with this villain in order to learn our skills. It was pity for Qiu Xian, and he provoked a broom star. Most of the other men are not nice. Our autumn leisure will definitely get better and better.

I think this book is very good, and I strongly support it. The heroine is always sober and does not indulge in the inexplicable preferences of other men. She is very independent and independent. All the single arrows are delicious 😋😋😋 Now it feels like the heroine's true identity is about to be revealed, it's very sacred (purely a compliment).

I know how to use the word " jealous" to describe the heroine, and I use the word "young boy" to describe the heroine, and I know how to use the word "boy". The story is written in a way that people can follow it, but the pace is a bit too slow, and the system only comes out after 50 chapters, which makes the heroine's character very vague and the emotional pressure is too heavy. At the beginning, the heroine recalled that she had gone through a lifetime and was killed by her ex-husband. At the beginning, when facing her ex-husband, she was in the most hateful mood. She kicked him out of bed and then her ex-husband seduced her. The mood calmed down again, and the heroine was ready to run away. Here we can actually describe the transformation of the heroine (who knows that she has been judged to have no talent for cultivating immortals in her previous life, but still wants to become stronger in this life. This kind of portrayal is actually more charming, with a tenacity that refuses to admit defeat or accept fate). There is no need to wait for more than forty chapters where the ex-husband Taoist monk who abandoned medicine and turned to the sword commented on the heroine before writing about the heroine's inner thoughts. After all, the heroine has lived a real life. In addition to remembering some small techniques, she should also have a clearer understanding of herself. Speaking of living a life of hardship, she must have hated her ex-husband and his Taoist monks so much that she couldn't kill them. She and her ex-husband had to collect money and run away. The longer she wrote, the more she felt for the heroine. . . (As I write this, I feel that I can kill my ex-husband directly before he recovers his memory.) I have been suppressing this emotion ever since. No matter how much I write that my ex-husband was jealous of the heroine at this time, it cannot change the fact that he killed the heroine. In the first 50 chapters, the heroine is really pitiful. She has no allies, no friends, and no resources. She still finds reasons to learn acupuncture and sword skills from her enemies and their Taoist companions. The more she writes, the sadder she becomes. 😨 The hatred at the beginning slowed down quickly, but then it became too slow, and it suddenly came to a daily novel. In the middle, the two characters, X Wei and Sao Zhengtai, who had a crush on their ex-husband and came to harm the heroine, could actually be written briefly. Although the plot of X Wei stealing the chicken and losing the rice was a bit funny, it actually slowed down the heroine's goal and was a bit overshadowed (after all, I read the introduction for the plot of the heroine being a mortal cultivating immortality ➕ a heartthrob). Goldfinger was released too slowly, and it's already been 50 chapters and I haven't even come to Cultivation yet.

It's a very interesting plot. The lack of love in the past life and the pain of refining the pill furnace are still vivid in my mind. How can I make myself forgive myself in the previous life for the changes in this life. I also thought that Er Niu/Lu SW was a different person with different intentions from the previous life, but Er Niu is Er Niu, and Lu SW is Lu SW. It will be different when he recovers his memory. When he said that he would marry the heroine as his equal wife, he was the real Lu SW, but with a little more reluctance. What is the difference between this and him in the previous life. I'm glad that the heroine is a person who is easy to give up on feelings and knows how to give up. I see that now I think she has many advantages. Her personality is very charming, and her beauty is her plus point. At the end of this life, I hope she can realize herself, achieve herself, and become the person she most wants to be.

I have read Chapter 13. The beginning is very interesting and delicious. I really like this heart-throb single arrow setting. It is shocking and delicious. The character of the beautiful man described is also good. He is gentle, serious and beautiful before he loves an outsider, but he is humble before his wife and only gives green tea for nothing. Hehe. The back part is a bit awkward, the content later uses the NPC to praise Lu, and then scolds the protagonist for being tough, and sticking flowers in cow dung. This part can be used once or twice. Once or twice, you will know Lu's attributes for nothing, and the protagonist's charm is infinite. If it is too much, it will not be good. I also feel that Lu, a dark and scheming person who likes to pretend to be a pretty girl, is not worthy of the protagonist and is blocking the protagonist's way! Then there is this Mr. Lu who is speculating on the protagonist, trying to trick the protagonist, over-interpreting it, and even trying to control the imprisonment play. Although it can be explained that he has no sense of security and worries about gains and losses, I really want to give him a few big mouths after reading it. I hope the protagonist will not be passive. It will be more fun to imprison him later. Hehehe. I still give it five stars this time. I will continue to read and comment later. Come on.

It's pretty good. I use words like young men to describe the female characters, and young men to distinguish the male characters. Good reviews.

I'll give it four stars first. The heroine is still too frustrated at the moment. I hope the heroine can become very powerful in the future. Even if she can't kill the two arrogant men, she still has to stab them severely. Then it will be OK to arrange some sympathetic men for the heroine who are physically and mentally clean and have never liked a man. The heroine must not keep her cyber virginity! It would be even better if the heroine had a romantic relationship with Lu Zhidou 😄😄😄

In fact, I had a bit of a misunderstanding when I read the introduction, thinking that it was a kind of awakening to please. In fact, it is very well written. After reading it, I really can't wait to see the heroine fight back fiercely, leaving no room for anything and never being soft-hearted!