Duo Ocean Survival: Matched with the Campus Belle I've Known Since Childhood

After reading dozens of chapters, it should be an AI text that has been manually overhauled. The advantages and disadvantages are obvious. I was confused whether to give it three stars or four stars. I finally gave it four stars. I would like to encourage the author to use AI less and write more by myself. The advantage is that the introduction is very well written and very attractive, the main content of the equipment and the plot of opening the gift pack are very interesting, and the writing is also very good. The shortcomings are interesting. First of all, the love line unique to AI novels is slow and restrained. This one is a classic. I have read many two-person survival books. If it were a normal two-person survival, they would still be childhood sweethearts. They would have been together for dozens of chapters. However, after a long time in this book, we still get along like ordinary friends. Just because I was afraid of the enemy, I fell asleep in my arms. Don't brag about the relationship in the comment section. It made me embarrassed and felt that you were just asking for help. Whether it's a two-player survival or a single female protagonist, isn't it just to see the emotional line? This is obviously meant to be heated quickly rather than slowly. Secondly, the plots on public channels are too lacking, too lacking! The super important point of a two-person survival story is the public channel, which can draw out the villain line, the supporting character line, the classmate and friend line, the transaction interaction line, etc. It is an artifact to stimulate emotions and push the plot. As a result, the author ignored this important point! The author gave up on the refreshing point of being alive! If these two major shortcomings are corrected, this book will be perfect. The writing style is really better than other two-person survival novels. It is a pity that there are these two major flaws. If the author sees it, I hope to correct it as soon as possible. I hope the book will be a hit!

It's pretty good, the plot and setting are very solid

Talking is like a human-machine conversation

Beautiful. So beautiful

It feels good so far

The data and plot are rigorous, and the relationship between Qingmei and Qingmei has been advancing. It feels very good.

It looks good, I love reading it, I will read more, and I hope the author will write better and better.