[Unlimited streaming copy + ghost escape + no plug-ins + partial group portrait + thriller and micro-terror]
One day, after Lin Xuan was fired from his job, he accidentally clicked on a game website and was subsequently involved in a horror game...
When he learned that players need to go through a horror game that involves real death in order to escape from this game...
Lin Xuan narrowly escaped death in each dungeon, and gradually discovered...
He seems to be an old player?
Ps: It's the first time for a new author to write about the infinite flow of supernatural ideas. The early stage is not a cool article, it mainly lays out the world view, and the overall focus is on plot and group portraits (in human words: the protagonist in the early stage is a maggot)
Reader comments
This book is an unlimited flow type, with ghost escape and dungeon breakthrough.
It's not a story about the protagonist being invincible, it's more plot-oriented. I carefully conceived each copy. But after all, I am a new author, so my writing style may not be very good, but I think it should still be readable.
Powering for love, readers who like it hope to leave a book review to encourage me, thank you~
(Why give it five stars? Give your book a bad rating [smile]. Jpg)
Read everyone's feedback.
In the early outline of this book, the protagonist is growing up in the early stage, so it is not a cool article (the protagonist was once a player, but I still prefer plot in the early stage, so I did not cheat on the protagonist)
Then there is the issue of the title of the book. The book test gave me the original title, so I can only use this title, or I can take another book test with 1 million words.
The title of the book may lower everyone's expectations for the protagonist, but I did carefully conceive the plot. After all, I may have written a bit of a group portrait.
Finally, readers, can you please stop giving negative reviews without any reason? I am inexplicable. If there is any reason for dissatisfaction, I will read it carefully and correct it. Please read the introduction carefully, okay?
The plot is okay, and the author must have tried his best to conceive it. The protagonist is not cheating. He may act too new in the early stage, but in the later stage, he has a vague sense of a big boss. It suits my taste. It feels like I was chasing horror novels in school. I hope I can control the intensity of the ghosts and not make it into a fantasy. It is not bad for a new author to write like this. I hope that ten updates a day will not be enough.
I have caught up with the fifth dungeon. Currently, only the first dungeon is not that exciting, but compared to other works of the same type, it is considered average and has no poisonous points. Maybe the author thinks it is a novice copy and does not want to write too difficult? The subsequent copies are indeed more exciting than the last, especially the one in the Slaughterhouse. It's quite confusing to see that there are only a few thousand readers. I can only say that the author should work hard. Maybe the title or introduction of the book is really not attractive, and the plot and imagination are really useless.
It's not bad, at least it's above seven points. I've read five chapters and there's nothing sinister about it. It's been more than a month since the book started and the author updates it five times a day [face covering] You can't get this amount of updates recommended, it's just basic push streaming.
Very nice.
But who is the heroine? Is it the woman in the dream or Jiang. If it's the former, then just don't engage in ambiguous scenes with Jiang. The latter will be treated as if I didn't say anything.
Hope to stick to [single female protagonist]. Thanks 🙏🙏.
Very pretty.
As for the protagonist, he is affectionate and righteous. In the beginning, he was very innocent and cute, and he paid the price for his innocence. However, after the change, he became more wary of others while still maintaining his true heart, instead of turning into a black man and becoming a Jiahao and Chuunibyou. The arc of such a character has surpassed that of many protagonists.
As for the supporting characters, most of the characters in the dungeon are still in the stage of facial expression. After reading a few chapters, you can roughly understand whether this character will die or live. However, this is not considered a shortcoming, and the evaluation is stable [heartfelt].
In terms of important supporting roles, the current teammates are very lovable, especially Jiang Xiaomei, who is cute.
In terms of writing, it's average to above average, and the look and feel is very good, and it's getting better and better.
In terms of the most important copy, the fifth one is currently completed. Speaking separately, purely subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. (Based on five levels of evaluation: unqualified, qualified, good, good, and excellent)
The first dungeon (passed): Newbie dungeon, the design is relatively linear, basically just run the process to find clues. If the supporting character does not go crazy and has a save file, it is easy to pass the level. But the supporting character went crazy (). However, the reasons why the supporting character caused trouble are also clearly written, which is good or bad.
The second copy (excellent): The simple mechanism creates a bold ending. After reading the second copy, I knew that this book was suitable for me [send my heart] [send my heart]. Not much to say, my personal evaluation is very high.
The third dungeon (qualified): It is obviously a dungeon used to create characters (both protagonists and supporting characters). It is also a linear design. The trap design is a bit tricky. More people died in the first few chapters than in the following chapters combined. There is no good trick design. Overall, it can be summarized as relying on props to fight hard. Maybe I am not very interested in this type of way to pass the level. But there are no obvious poisonous spots, and it can pass the test itself.
The fourth dungeon (good): When Jiang Xiaomei appeared, she thought she was a cold goddess, but she turned out to be cute [laughs][laughs][laughs]. Needless to say, the design is relatively self-consistent, the evolution mechanism of ghosts is interesting, and the protagonist still has his true intentions after his transformation, he is not stingy in helping others, and he will double down on those who cheated him. He is a very healthy protagonist. The rhythm is also well controlled and feels comfortable.
The fifth dungeon (good) has the potential to be great. The first half has a sense of mystery and atmosphere. The players' spontaneous investigation and discovery of information is also very enjoyable. It even made me feel like I was reading the excellent books of "Charlie IX" when I was young. In terms of the sense of oppression, Daozhong's repeated back-and-forth saves also reflected the danger of this dungeon. But in the second half, after a certain special node, the release of information was a little out of control. It felt like I was busy rushing to finish the dungeon, so I sent an NPC to tell all the information. The weird and mysterious feeling created in the first half was gone, and it turned into a prop match again (the author Xiao Heizi also lost our protagonist's chicken brother, and was very angry). In the end, the protagonist's choice was well written, but it could not cover up the imbalance of the rhythm in the second half.
Is the author writing a pure horror genre? It's a bit like Hell Apartment. After reading a little bit, the plot is still very suitable for my appetite. It's not like those stories about supernatural protagonists and invincible characters. You need to add bookshelf first, then fatten up and then read slowly.
It looks pretty good
I don't want to cheat the protagonist a lot. But I still have to give five stars for encouragement.
It's at least the best among similar works, and every story is well thought out.
The author must work hard [laughing][laughing][laughing]
Worth a look Very good
Very good, I hope the author will update it soon
The writing is very good. I love watching it. The plot is also very novel.
I just finished reading the first copy and it feels a bit rough, but the author's conception and script design are pretty good. I plan to support it and will follow up on it later. At present, I feel that this book has potential.
This book is an unlimited flow type, with ghost escape and dungeon breakthrough. It's not a story about the protagonist being invincible, it's more plot-oriented. I carefully conceived each copy. But after all, I am a new author, so my writing style may not be very good, but I think it should still be readable. Powering for love, readers who like it hope to leave a book review to encourage me, thank you~ (Why give it five stars? Give your book a bad rating [smile]. Jpg) Read everyone's feedback. In the early outline of this book, the protagonist is growing up in the early stage, so it is not a cool article (the protagonist was once a player, but I still prefer plot in the early stage, so I did not cheat on the protagonist) Then there is the issue of the title of the book. The book test gave me the original title, so I can only use this title, or I can take another book test with 1 million words. The title of the book may lower everyone's expectations for the protagonist, but I did carefully conceive the plot. After all, I may have written a bit of a group portrait. Finally, readers, can you please stop giving negative reviews without any reason? I am inexplicable. If there is any reason for dissatisfaction, I will read it carefully and correct it. Please read the introduction carefully, okay?
The plot is okay, and the author must have tried his best to conceive it. The protagonist is not cheating. He may act too new in the early stage, but in the later stage, he has a vague sense of a big boss. It suits my taste. It feels like I was chasing horror novels in school. I hope I can control the intensity of the ghosts and not make it into a fantasy. It is not bad for a new author to write like this. I hope that ten updates a day will not be enough. I have caught up with the fifth dungeon. Currently, only the first dungeon is not that exciting, but compared to other works of the same type, it is considered average and has no poisonous points. Maybe the author thinks it is a novice copy and does not want to write too difficult? The subsequent copies are indeed more exciting than the last, especially the one in the Slaughterhouse. It's quite confusing to see that there are only a few thousand readers. I can only say that the author should work hard. Maybe the title or introduction of the book is really not attractive, and the plot and imagination are really useless.
It's not bad, at least it's above seven points. I've read five chapters and there's nothing sinister about it. It's been more than a month since the book started and the author updates it five times a day [face covering] You can't get this amount of updates recommended, it's just basic push streaming.
Very nice. But who is the heroine? Is it the woman in the dream or Jiang. If it's the former, then just don't engage in ambiguous scenes with Jiang. The latter will be treated as if I didn't say anything. Hope to stick to [single female protagonist]. Thanks 🙏🙏.
Very pretty. As for the protagonist, he is affectionate and righteous. In the beginning, he was very innocent and cute, and he paid the price for his innocence. However, after the change, he became more wary of others while still maintaining his true heart, instead of turning into a black man and becoming a Jiahao and Chuunibyou. The arc of such a character has surpassed that of many protagonists. As for the supporting characters, most of the characters in the dungeon are still in the stage of facial expression. After reading a few chapters, you can roughly understand whether this character will die or live. However, this is not considered a shortcoming, and the evaluation is stable [heartfelt]. In terms of important supporting roles, the current teammates are very lovable, especially Jiang Xiaomei, who is cute. In terms of writing, it's average to above average, and the look and feel is very good, and it's getting better and better. In terms of the most important copy, the fifth one is currently completed. Speaking separately, purely subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. Pure subjective without objective. (Based on five levels of evaluation: unqualified, qualified, good, good, and excellent) The first dungeon (passed): Newbie dungeon, the design is relatively linear, basically just run the process to find clues. If the supporting character does not go crazy and has a save file, it is easy to pass the level. But the supporting character went crazy (). However, the reasons why the supporting character caused trouble are also clearly written, which is good or bad. The second copy (excellent): The simple mechanism creates a bold ending. After reading the second copy, I knew that this book was suitable for me [send my heart] [send my heart]. Not much to say, my personal evaluation is very high. The third dungeon (qualified): It is obviously a dungeon used to create characters (both protagonists and supporting characters). It is also a linear design. The trap design is a bit tricky. More people died in the first few chapters than in the following chapters combined. There is no good trick design. Overall, it can be summarized as relying on props to fight hard. Maybe I am not very interested in this type of way to pass the level. But there are no obvious poisonous spots, and it can pass the test itself. The fourth dungeon (good): When Jiang Xiaomei appeared, she thought she was a cold goddess, but she turned out to be cute [laughs][laughs][laughs]. Needless to say, the design is relatively self-consistent, the evolution mechanism of ghosts is interesting, and the protagonist still has his true intentions after his transformation, he is not stingy in helping others, and he will double down on those who cheated him. He is a very healthy protagonist. The rhythm is also well controlled and feels comfortable. The fifth dungeon (good) has the potential to be great. The first half has a sense of mystery and atmosphere. The players' spontaneous investigation and discovery of information is also very enjoyable. It even made me feel like I was reading the excellent books of "Charlie IX" when I was young. In terms of the sense of oppression, Daozhong's repeated back-and-forth saves also reflected the danger of this dungeon. But in the second half, after a certain special node, the release of information was a little out of control. It felt like I was busy rushing to finish the dungeon, so I sent an NPC to tell all the information. The weird and mysterious feeling created in the first half was gone, and it turned into a prop match again (the author Xiao Heizi also lost our protagonist's chicken brother, and was very angry). In the end, the protagonist's choice was well written, but it could not cover up the imbalance of the rhythm in the second half.
Is the author writing a pure horror genre? It's a bit like Hell Apartment. After reading a little bit, the plot is still very suitable for my appetite. It's not like those stories about supernatural protagonists and invincible characters. You need to add bookshelf first, then fatten up and then read slowly.
It looks pretty good
I don't want to cheat the protagonist a lot. But I still have to give five stars for encouragement.
It's at least the best among similar works, and every story is well thought out.
The author must work hard [laughing][laughing][laughing]
Worth a look Very good
Very good, I hope the author will update it soon
The writing is very good. I love watching it. The plot is also very novel.
I just finished reading the first copy and it feels a bit rough, but the author's conception and script design are pretty good. I plan to support it and will follow up on it later. At present, I feel that this book has potential.
Very well written