We Talk About Pure Friendship, Why Does Qingmei Always Want to Knock Me Down?

Lezi, you look at your daily life and feel emotional [face covering]

1. Content style This is a very well-positioned daily love article. Although many love stories on the market are labeled as daily, they are actually long-term plot narratives. The fragmented plot processing in this article is the most suitable presentation method for daily sweet pet stories. The overall sweetness is natural and comfortable, and the look and feel is good. The only small regret is that the existing content stock is relatively small. If there is no way to maintain high-frequency daily updates, article traffic will easily decline, and the number of subsequent raters will most likely be limited, making it difficult to break through. In addition, the title of the article is relatively ordinary and does not fit well with the content of the text. The core of the text is the setting of a straight-ball girl chasing a boy. This type of subject is very popular on the Tomato platform. It is recommended that the title be fine-tuned to fit the core plot and more easily attract readers to click and read. 2. Plot logic and rhythm issues The pace of the plot of the article is slow, and there is a slight contradiction in the emotional logic of the characters. Later in the story, it is revealed that the male protagonist did not dare to accept this relationship because he was worried that he would not be able to give the female protagonist a good future. However, in the early stages, he always created the setting of treating the female protagonist as a brother, but he calmly accepted the ambiguous interaction of intimate hugging with the female protagonist. The character design and behavior before and after were not consistent enough. This small flaw does not affect the short-term reading experience, but it will weaken the reader's desire to follow up. If the article is in a completed state and the reader reads it through, it is easy to abandon the article because of the logical inconsistency. 3. Character design optimization suggestions The heroine's straightforward and candid character is very lovable. It is a relatively rare and fan-attracting character highlight on the Tomato platform, and it is easy for readers to develop a favorable impression. In contrast, the male protagonist's character is somewhat contradictory and the look and feel is not unified enough. It is recommended to stabilize the cute and dull setting of the male protagonist in the early stage, and follow this personality to promote the interaction between the male and female protagonists, which can not only avoid logical loopholes, but also amplify the sweetness of the two-way interaction and make the overall sweet and pet atmosphere more satisfying.

I will die if I can't fall in love like this in this life [angry] I came here just to see this! This is how the world should be! Psychological committee member, I feel so good, oh oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (dancing) Oh oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (dancing) oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (dancing) oh oh, so good ╰ 🤓╯ (Dance oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (Dance) oh oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (Dance) oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (Dance) Oh oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (Dance Dance) Oh oh oh, it's so exciting╰🤓╯ (Dance) Oh oh oh, it's so exciting ╰🤓╯ (Dance) Oh oh oh, it's so exciting ╰🤓╯ (Dance) Oh oh oh, it's so exciting╰🤓╯ (Dance Dance) Oh oh oh, it's so good ╰🤓╯ (Dance) Oh oh oh, it's so good ╰🤓╯ (Dance) Oh oh oh, it's so good ╰🤓╯ (Dance) Oh oh oh, it's so good ╰🤓╯ (Dance)

It's so sweet and cute. If I can't have this kind of love in my life, I won't die.

It's so sweet, but I want to watch the education and training [laughs]

It's so heartwarming, I envy the protagonist to live such a life [crying] The corpse is warm [crying]

Although it is very sweet, it is so sweet that I need to use a knife to neutralize it.

The first few chapters are boring, but the later chapters are really amazing and sweet. [Laugh]

It's so sweet, my teeth can't help but come out, and they can't even come down from the corners of my mouth☺️

Although I was dancing and watching, my senses were very good. It was the first time I saw a woman chasing a man. This is the third time I've seen a woman chasing a man.

So pretty\(≧▽≦)/It's so sweet to me~

Very sweet and very pretty

It's really good, not toxic at all

Okay, I didn't know how the heroine won at the beginning, but halfway through I realized that the heroine won.

It's impressive, beautiful, has a song by Jay Chou, and the author is very classy. It should be appreciated [smile]

The writing is quite good, but I felt a bit uncomfortable when I saw the part about raising a cat (in real life, I am allergic to cat hair, and I was scratched by a cat while feeding the kitten [petrified]). Good luck, author.

Awesome, no need to say more

Bad news: tied

Long live pure love, long live long live

Do you know the despair of finally finding a good book only to find that there are only 82 chapters?

It's really worth watching. Although similar words can be seen in a few places, the flaws do not hide the flaws. It is a very sweet and warm niche masterpiece. I hope it will become popular as soon as possible!

Beautiful and sweet! ! The author will update soon! ! !

Haokan, very sweet and not overly stretched [please update]

Pure love is right!

I will never die like this in this life [angry]

Looks good, I'll give you a long review after a while.

Although it is a small sweet article, it is really sweet.