You Call This Frail? He's Shoving His Flute in My Face

This setting is really good. Gudan's tactics are a fairy tale, especially when both sides have strong trump cards, it's even more delicious. It can be seen that the author is still a novice, and the writing style is a bit immature. For example, there are too many names at the beginning and it looks a bit confusing, or some plot transitions are too blunt, and some transitions can be made appropriately, etc. (I'm just giving my opinion, it's just my personal opinion, don't read it if you don't like it) I am now particularly looking forward to the love line and world layout in the future, and I will work hard to write it. I hope to see the bking career line and sweet love line of the young couple.

It's quite good to read. I haven't read such a comfortable book for a long time. The plot is not compact. It is not a particularly vigorous plot. The pace is relatively slow. The two protagonists are a bit ambiguous and have a long-lasting feeling. The protagonist has a slight feeling in his own personality. It feels great to be able to write so well for the first time. Don't feel pressured. Just write at your own pace.

It's so beautiful. The author is great. Do you dare to update 100 chapters? It scares me to death. I haven't read this type of book for a long time. It really attracted my attention. It's very beautiful. It's still being serialized [sad][sad][sad]

It's good to read, I hope the author can slowly become popular. Double strong nb 😘 😘 😘

I've read a few chapters and it's extremely delicious. I'll give it five stars first, and I'll follow up with comments later 😳

The character setting is very good, using a variety of rhetorical techniques to vividly write the characters in the story.

Damn, the settings are very good. It's my favorite meal [Admiration]

Very, very, very beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

So far, everything seems to be fine. The author's writing is good and the characters of the protagonists are good. It makes me feel XP.