Do You Call This Being Sick? His Flute Almost Hit My Face

This setting is really good. Gudan's tactics are a fairy tale, especially when both sides have strong trump cards, it's even more delicious. It can be seen that the author is still a novice, and the writing style is a bit immature. For example, there are too many names at the beginning and it looks a bit confusing, or some plot transitions are too blunt, and some transitions can be made appropriately, etc. (I'm just giving my opinion, it's just my personal opinion, don't read it if you don't like it) I am now particularly looking forward to the love line and world layout in the future, and I will work hard to write it. I hope to see the bking career line and sweet love line of the young couple.

It's quite good to read. I haven't read such a comfortable book for a long time. The plot is not compact. It is not a particularly vigorous plot. The pace is relatively slow. The two protagonists are a bit ambiguous and have a long-lasting feeling. The protagonist has a slight feeling in his own personality. It feels great to be able to write so well for the first time. Don't feel pressured. Just write at your own pace.

I've read a few chapters and it's extremely delicious. I'll give it five stars first, and I'll follow up with comments later [shy]

It's good to read, I hope the author can slowly become popular. Double strong nb [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]