The Day I Brought My Girlfriend Home, My Sister Discovered That There Was Something Wrong with Her
带女友回家那天，我姐发现她有问题
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- Completed
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- 22k Words
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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New Writers Come In.
It's really uncomfortable every time I look at the data that hasn't changed at all. The number of people hasn't increased at all. There aren't a single comment. Very few readers have read the entire book. By the last chapter, almost no one has read it. New writers should help each other.
A Short Story That I Have to Read Until I Die!
I want to read a book like "Before My Father went bankrupt, he gave me two bride options".
Looking for Good Short Stories That You Can Read in One Sitting
I want to see content similar to "Re-examination on the seventh day of the Lunar New Year, parents of naughty children cried and gave me a banner". "On the day of the miscarriage, he was discussing projects with others"
New Books, Mutual Reviews, Reminders for Updates, and Additions to Each Other's Bookshelves
I want to read a book similar to "Guo Zhan Wushuang". New books, mutual reviews, reminders for updates, and additions to each other's bookshelves
Personally, I feel like it's a well-written short suspense attempt. There are also shortcomings. Some of the content is not mature enough. I hope that the overall sense of suspense and atmosphere are in place. There is still room for polishing and improvement in the lines and characters. In addition, I feel that there are still a few reversal points in the text. Feng Wanqing feels that there is still room for improvement in the fullness of her characters, and she will try to avoid "coincidental clues" and "deliberately created accidents" in her subsequent writing. Overall, I think this is still a readable short story. The review can give a score of 3.8/5. [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]