Warhammer: Blood Angels with a Good Attitude

The author's big words are very delicious! 🥰🥰🥰The protagonist is like a succubus! This is the charm of the straight ball system! So delicious patriarchal battle bro that my brain is spinning! 😋Author, we love you so much!

It's very interesting to watch, the overall rhythm is very comfortable, and the plot development feels gradual, reasonable and smooth, and it does not suppress the protagonist's combat power. The difficulties that can be encountered are due to situational constraints or the enemy itself is stronger, rather than causing the protagonist to lose or forget his own abilities. The only disadvantage is that sometimes the sentences are too long and cumbersome, and it is easy to pile up too many descriptive words, which makes it look bloated. An example is: "The core goal of their legion is to reach the core area as soon as possible to conduct defensive operations after destroying various devices on this satellite closest to the core area that are needed to sustain the lives of the locals." If this sentence could be simplified and divided into paragraphs, it would probably look smoother: "The core goal of their army is to destroy the life-support device near the core area on this satellite and reach the core area as soon as possible for defensive operations." However, the above shortcomings do not appear frequently, so overall it is still well written.

It feels pretty good, but it's a little lacking. Ruth has just returned in the plot, and I don't know when Angel will be available. But the protagonist is really pretty good. Sure enough, because he traveled through 2K, he has a higher sense of morality? Moreover, the people under his hands don't have a strong sense of being naughty. The protagonist is also the type who speaks out when he has something to say. His direct attack is so fierce that it already feels like he is going to attack everyone. Beautiful and powerful, they may even have wings at the back. Wow, Bai Yueguang and her mother are the chosen ones of the Ninth Legion. If they save the angels during the Horus Heresy, they will really be enshrined.

It's broken. I've eaten too much shit and it really made me read a good book. It's well written and it downplays the cruelty of Warhammer a lot. It still has a slight sense of warmth. It's super delicious. Teacher, come on! I will always follow you.

After watching it for a while, I think it's okay. The writing is average to a standard newcomer's level, making it difficult to immerse yourself in it. It has a strong sense of fragmentation, as if you are watching it through a layer of frosted glass. There aren't any other bad points. The protagonist's personality is good, but the author's writing power easily smoothes out this advantage. I hope the author will continue to work hard,,,,

At present, it can be determined that it is purely hand-written. This kind of immature writing is precisely what AI is least likely to write. Judging from the changes in my tomato novels in the past few months, the author with good writing style will be closer to AI in terms of writing style and vocabulary description. A novel like this that can clearly see the shortcomings but is understandable is definitely not written by artificial intelligence [OK] [Read carefully]

Generally speaking, it seems okay. The setting is relatively new, but it can be seen that the author's writing style is not good. I hope he can improve his writing style in the future. It can be seen that it is not written by someone who hates intelligence. Come on, author.

A very good book of Blood Angel, it made my body spin wildly and spiral up to the sky😋 Non-toxic and edible, a very good one with the little angel Ye Feng who has great love!

Big cheers for the author~ Pay attention to your health and don't be too tired. Very nice work. I like it. [Bookshelf plus one]

Not enough, please give me more! Live up to the blood of Sanguinius!

The writing is smooth and delicate, and the plot unfolds naturally. The protagonist Xiao Feng, as a calm, reliable, passionate and sincere straight ball monster, is simply a torch in the dark night of Warhammer. It's just that the number of words is still too few, so look forward to it and don't stop updating it [Love]

Good looking [like] In my time period, the author has updated it to more than 1,000 pages, and it will be almost 1,100 pages later. It's not toxic, but there are a lot of knife mines buried deeply. I actually can't tell whether the ones buried in the early stages are knives. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ It feels warm now and there are no knives The protagonist is a heartthrob who looks a bit like a male mother [Personal evaluation] (*╹▽╹*) Overall, it's well worth it [Like]

Very well written, a book with great potential

Nice! The image of the protagonist is well created, he is a warm-hearted man😊

It's already a very good one among the Warhammer fics I've read. Good work, author.

It's very interesting, good luck to the author

It's delicious out of ten or even nine points, and it's worth 8.9 Points

Very well written! Don't stop updating it

It's pretty good to watch, the plot is relatively smooth, I hope there will be more

It looks very good so far. Good luck to the author.

It's good-looking and the protagonist is really likable (//∇//) He's a very charming person 🥰

It's very interesting, I look forward to the follow-up plot.

Come on, come on, author, I believe you will definitely become popular, don't stop updating [Shy][Sending Hearts]

The she-wolf of the legion has the entire legion under control.

It's okay, just a little dry.

Not bad, keep working hard

When will the protagonist's big wings come out? You can't carry two meat bags on your back every day.

I'm at a loss for words but this is really delicious! Mouth!

The author's writing skills are really good, please update more [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses]

Not bad, and I feel like the protagonist can't remember the plot of Warhammer because of his own abilities [Thinking]