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The writing is not pleasant enough, but it is too good for the person named Xu. The so-called morbid love of Xu is more like a self-salvation in which he enjoys torturing the person he "loves". It is hard to tell how much he loves the protagonist. Everything he says and does is self-centered. Whether during the relationship or in captivity after the breakup, he did not take too much care of the protagonist. When he and the protagonist had a disagreement when they were children, it was the protagonist who took the key step to reconcile first. There is a misunderstanding with the protagonist in the process of falling in love, he breaks the defense inexplicably after saying a few words, and goes crazy regardless of the situation. If you really love the protagonist and want to get him back, there is absolutely no need to do this. Of course, this is the perfect and holy love in our hearts imagined by the general public. I don't know what love is in the eyes of a person named Xu, but it can be seen that his love is not stable and not deep. The initiative of forced love is in the hands of the person named Xu. The person named Xu can give up at any time, but no matter whether he keeps entangled or gives up, the only one who really suffers is the protagonist. To sum up, in the plot, the person named Xu is always in the upper position, has the initiative and control, and can withdraw at any time, which is inexplicably unpleasant to watch. If possible, this sick love can be more sick, and use love to fuse them, so that the person named Xu can also suffer irreparable damage in such a sick love, and he can taste the decadence and entanglement of sick love and the pleasure of this kind of sick love. What I mean is that when he gives injections to the protagonist, he can also give himself injections. When he wants to make the protagonist a human penis, he can also make himself a human penis. He can even write that he lost his mind and made the protagonist miserable because of "love". Then he wakes up and looks at the miserable appearance of the protagonist. He sighs how beautiful it is, but at the same time he can't help but feel distressed. So he hires someone to beat him in front of the protagonist, or injects himself with something. The drug for mental confusion (and other plots like this) seems to have a deeper connection, and it can also be seen that he is in love with the protagonist. It is a two-way love, not a selfish love. "I would like to be a winged bird in heaven, and a twig on earth." What a morbid love eats is this entanglement in deep emotions. Now the person named Xu seems to be addicted to love, but objectively he is still alone and can withdraw at any time, which makes him drown deeper in this love. I hope that when the two of them are together, they will abuse the protagonist while also abusing the person named Xu to achieve a love balance and promote this morbid love relationship. In fact, it will be more enjoyable and delicious, and it can also be seen that the person named Xu is deeply in love with the protagonist. When it comes to this aspect, I feel so cruel that I lose my life. The general direction of this book is good, and the characters' ecstasy and morbidity are well depicted, but in some aspects it is not exciting enough. This review may be meant as a writing guide, I'm sorry! But I hope to have such a plot, and I want the two of them to reach a lose-lose ending in their morbid relationship. In short, I don't want the surname Xu to be too happy. Great writing by the boss! Come on! I hope it can strengthen their relationship on a deeper level or let the protagonist escape!

The author's writing style is not bad. The advantage is that the writing is very immersive, and you can feel the horror of the time personally. However, the disadvantage is that the character of the protagonist is not full. He went from a small county to a prestigious university, and in a very stressful and competitive education environment. I particularly understand this sense of urgency. He should be tough, self-controlled, self-aware, longing for the love of others, and insecure. I think this should be the background of the character. But the protagonist can easily be led by the barrage. The barrage is indeed half-truth and half-false, but I think the protagonist should use it as a reference, not as a prediction.

It's very enjoyable to write. If you like this kind of thing, you should like it, but it's still too scary for me. I'm going to be scared to death by that promise 🤦 I was wrong😭I shouldn't take the introduction seriously. If you are being controlled, you better not read it. You won't be able to accept it.

Is it allowed to join the table? I was really annoyed in the early stage, and I kept describing how beautiful he was, and kept trying to get pure highlights.

If you like forced love, you can join it. Overall, it's okay, but there are a few things I don't like. The first is that after the protagonist is imprisoned, it is almost equivalent to taking a leave of absence from school. In fact, I hate this kind of plot. I can accept imprisonment, but I am not so selfish as to drag the protagonist into the quagmire. I really can't accept love; secondly, although the author did not say whether the university where the protagonist is in is a famous university, but the three central characters are all in this university, it can be seen that this university is definitely not bad. The protagonist grew up in his grandmother's house, and the material conditions were not very good (compared to Gong Lai) (speak), so I think the protagonist will definitely be very independent, resilient and assertive, but the author writes that the protagonist will be led by the barrage as soon as he sees the barrage, with almost no doubt, so I think this aspect is a bit bad for the protagonist; thirdly, I think it is better to be cautious in extreme control. A little bit like the underworld, the two attackers appearing now feel like they are seriously ill, one seems to be really mentally ill, and the other is venomous and narcissistic (these points given are just for everyone's convenience, and do not mean that the author's writing is bad. Of course, I also hope that the author can read my opinions) I give five stars and hope that the author can continue writing and that the plot can be better.

So delicious. . If you can't stand it, just leave. Just complain about what lightning protection means here. The specific introduction is also marked. Don't affect other people's mood, okay? The author is really awesome. It's so cool to watch. . The supplement 🥩 is also very satisfying. What's going on. Obviously this person is unknown to me, but the products produced are what I like to eat. . Shocking and delicious There seems to be no crematorium in this book, so some people may not be used to it. It also targets the underworld. Maybe it's because I often watch Korean comics. I think it's okay and acceptable. After all, I've read the more disgusting and underworld ones, and there are some malicious reports. . It's really not necessary. Just forget about low-star lightning protection. After all, this book is the author's hard work, because some book fans reported it even more awesomely. . Everyone has different opinions and concepts. If you don't like it, it's normal. Just swipe left and abandon the book. You all reported me and you still want to see what my goddess has to say. Goddess, you have to be good!!

It has such a perfect underworld flavor, I almost thought I entered the wrong software. If some Tomato readers can't accept it, they just click "X" silently and keep saying in the comment area that it affects their perception.

Well, after reading the entire book, let me talk about one of my opinions after reading it. Let me talk about its advantages first. In fact, I think the character description is actually quite exciting. The second thing is about the sense of satisfaction. Kuangbiao's description is very good. Let me talk about the shortcomings. I don't know if it is the character, but it is shaped like this or what. I think Xu's description is a bit too much. The second thing is about the protagonist. , I feel that the self-judgment of the protagonist is too weak. I think he really lacks the ability of self-judgment. Generally speaking, to be honest, it is still a bit heartbreaking and a bit sadistic. Well, I don't recommend Controlled to read it. I think Controlled can avoid lightning, because I don't think it is particularly good for Shou, but I think the author's plot descriptions are really refreshing and it is really exciting to watch 😳

It's suitable for the underworld mother (unfortunately, I'm not one). I felt uncomfortable watching it at the beginning. Xu was really scary. Then when I saw the story behind it that my wife posted, I thought it wasn't suitable for me. But overall it's really good-looking and the setting is also very good. I hope my wife will get better and better.

I think the underworld mother focuses on gazing at Shou's spirit, demeanor, and sense of fragmentation. Misery is the carrier, and the focus is the feeling itself. Write about his fear, tolerance, numbness, and despair. Even if the situation is tragic, the character's will and emotion come first. Then I like this style very much, come on 🥰🥰🥰