Hpthe Day the Gods Came to My House

I read all the updated parts before commenting. The overall writing style is actually good. The heroine's previous experiences are not detailed but the overall clarity is clear. Some parts are too far-fetched. A common problem among many fandoms is that they get too involved with the protagonist trio, or are extremely involved, especially the heroine who is a Slytherin. Because she is on good terms with the trio, she becomes hostile to Slytherin, no matter how indifferent she is, she shows that she doesn't care. The most uncomfortable thing among them is the female rivalry. It seems that the only girls in Slytherin are Pansy and Millicent, so Pansy is responsible for stirring up trouble. Even though Draco has almost no contact with the heroine, Pansy still stirs up trouble. Moreover, there is almost no content in Slytherin Academy. It is as if she has been in the cellar office as before enrolling. It is either the alchemy teaching of the twins or the main plot of the protagonist group or the cultivation of relationships in the cellar. There is absolutely no one else to do anything else. The heroine is a mortal cultivating immortality, but her past experience is very strange. She is constantly reincarnated in life and death, so how does she have time to practice? There are so many names written about her past that it is almost complete enough to open a novel. The more entangled the cause and effect, the harder it is to see the destiny, but she is hesitant about whether to interfere with it or not. After her spiritual realm was restored, she said that heaven in the magic world could no longer control her, but she decided not to interfere too much when it came to Sif's life and death in the future. However, the scope of the interference was too wide. Technologies that did not belong to the magic world, such as the alchemy talismans and seals taught to the twins, would have been buried if they had not been buried. It would be a waste to use the line for them to fight. The changes in appearance caused by Silver's training during the critical period of Voldemort's resurrection in the fourth grade were not completely covered up. Even Silver himself did not intend to pretend to be the same as before. As an undercover agent who could go back at any time, he would not be able to hide himself. Redemption should be two-way. Sif saved the heroine initially because of his soft-heartedness without asking for anything in return, but there was nothing else to do after that. His lack of material ability and lack of help from the heroine is not something that should be blamed, but emotionally and psychologically it is difficult to have a clear feedback, even if he There is no problem with being cold and pushing people away. It is undeniable that she is still a complete inferior. The current part is all the heroine's home field. Even if it is not laborious for the heroine, the emotional progress in this situation is very vain. There is not much love between men and women, but a lot of kindness. Severus should have a clear opportunity for the heroine to seriously choose him. It is not that she repeatedly confirmed that she likes this kind of life before entering school, but that she chooses this person. In addition to possessiveness, she often expresses her attraction by tying red threads to others. Maybe it is His vision is different. Sif, who has never seen so much of the world, is so addicted to preference. He has seen too many female protagonists and has never been able to detect some of his hidden differences. Draco even feels that something is wrong. She has not felt it yet. It would be difficult to end this if it were not for the abuse later in the article.

I was surprised to read this book. There are few updates, but the writing is okay, and the character of the protagonist is also very good. The plot is not exactly the same as the original book, but the heroine still tacitly helps the protagonists grow together with the adults. The whole logic is reasonable, and it is more comfortable to read. I I really don't like the content where the original plot must have changed because of the heroine's appearance, and then the original protagonist group still misunderstood Snape. It's completely based on the plot and makes the original protagonist group stupid. This novel handles it well. There are misunderstandings, but they will be analyzed and eliminated according to the actual situation. Give the author a thumbs up. It was updated not long ago, but there are no comments [blowing kiss]. The whole story is relatively new, so the author should work hard to update it.

Yes, yes! Nice! It suits my taste very well [Adore] I like Eastern fantasy and Western magic, and I am also a Situ, so this article is very friendly to Situ [lick the screen] [lick the screen] The writing is online, the heroine is strong, and the Situ finally has someone he can rely on. The three little ones are also very cute, the twins are as lively as ever, young master Draco is still the same arrogant and arrogant person, Neville's parents have recovered, and Sirius also knows that his brother is a hero, which has filled up a lot of regrets [Send heart] [Send heart] Come on, author!

The setting of the heroine is so interesting and she has her own personality