
Da Qin: the Law-Abiding Pavilion Chief, Ying Zheng Asked Me to Open the Door
大秦:守法亭长,嬴政求我开门
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 396k Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Subgenre
- Historical High-Concept
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
58Reads
127Chapters
7Listens
771Reads · all time
I've read a few and the plot is pretty good. The reason why I'm rating this so early is because I want to give the author some suggestions. The content of the article is quite good in my opinion, but there are still major problems with the details of this article: 1. Chapter names. There are no chapter names in the entire text of this article. They are all in the form of Chapter 1 Chapter 1. Some chapter names appear very abrupt even if they appear in the text. 2. Punctuation. The punctuation problem in this article is a bit serious, especially the problem of double quotation marks in dialogues. I often quote the first sentence of a bunch of words, which makes it feel a bit tearing. 3. Typos and omissions are also common in the text. For example, the year, month and day written by the protagonist when registering to Qin Shihuang are really these three characters, not a certain year, a certain month and a certain day. There are others behind, which are also quite obvious. To be honest, these problems are not big problems, but they do affect the reading. For the part of the plot that I watched, I am willing to give it 5 stars. I hope the author will consider the others carefully.