A Once in a Lifetime Copy? Come! Lighthouse Jellyfish!

After reading it, I caught up with the latest chapter. I feel that the author's writing is a bit immature, but the overall structure and plot are still quite good. It can be said that there are basically no surprises at all. The protagonist's character is not the common savior with boundless love, but is unfolded from the perspective of an orphan. It is a very novel perspective to see the protagonist's struggle and growth. Moreover, the protagonist Goldfinger is also very reasonable. He is not a mindlessly strong character. He is strong but not sinister. In the current copy of the college entrance examination, the other secondary characters are more vivid, which I feel is quite impressive. Some group portraits have that feeling. I hope the author will continue to work hard. The author's writing style is relatively immature. After all, it is the first book. It is very good to write like this. It is understandable. Let's change it to five stars to encourage it.

The author is amazing, it's so good, please update three chapters every day, 🤩. Your other stories are all related to China, but why is Adam the protagonist? 🤔◔‸◔?

Get up and update it quickly

Give five stars to support the author, the writing is pretty good Regarding some of the problems that others have mentioned, I can only say that you need to read the book yourself. No matter how many problems others say about the book, it is only what they see and what they think are problems. You can choose not to read it. If you don't read it, in your eyes, this book will always be what others tell you, just like there are ten thousand Hamlets in the eyes of ten thousand people. Even though I have a little bit of Akaashi Shennong, I also have books that I don't like, and there are still a lot of people reading those books. Even in my opinion, the problem is huge. They still have a high rating of 9.6, And there are even some books that are quite unreasonable in their settings, and there are still people reading them. Let's talk about the plot. It's like a puppet on strings. You are unfamiliar with this world, and you don't have any bonds. You have no family or friends, and you are pushed step by step by others. Later, I met Chen Li, my first friend, and gradually started a new life. I was no longer being pushed around, but for the people I care about, and for myself. Finally, the author is a novice writer. Why do you demand so much from novice writers? Why don't you ask your children to be able to run when they are born, to outperform Bolt, to fly, and to be able to beat Tyson with one punch? If you read a new book with less than a million words, just pick and choose. You don't even read the new book, so you just believe what others say. What others say is what you read. Which book doesn't have negative reviews [face covering] It's okay now. As soon as I saw the climax, the author stopped updating. I looked at it and it disappeared. It's not that it hasn't been updated yet, it's that the author stopped updating.

The plot is not slow and the protagonist has a brain. I can't write book reviews, but I can read books. This is a flesh-and-blood novel. I hope the author can break free from external shackles as soon as possible like Chen Li and Wu Meng in the "College Entrance Examination" (｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡)

Very well written [laughing] I just don't know why there are so many saints criticizing in the comment section

I can feel that a lot of effort was put into writing this story, and the characters and world are fully created. The reading process is a very enjoyable experience. Thank you for being willing to write this story. I will continue to follow it.

Okay, okay, the author's first book is okay.

The author's writing is not good enough, but he has some ideas. I won't continue watching, and I'll give you a five-star encouragement.

The work is beautiful! ! ! The author insists on updating,

I have read many books. This one has the smallest number of words so far. But I have a feeling that if I write it down, it will be very powerful.

It's good to read. I don't think this novel has any bad points. The plot is well developed and I quite like the characters.

One word, absolutely; two words, beautiful; three words, extremely beautiful

His writing is just a little immature, but the plot is very interesting. Please be patient for newcomers💓

I feel it's a bit biased towards female videos. You wrote the copy for me. It's already a group favorite.