Kuthra's Invasion of All Realms Journey

What I've seen: "Become Human" and "The Holy Mother": the two biggest thunders ·Transformation/human transformation: Many readers watch Alien Beasts because they want to see the protagonist "not a human being". Once the protagonist turns around and turns into a human being, the reader will feel "cheated". Some readers even said that they abandoned the novel immediately after seeing the protagonist struggling to be reincarnated as an adult. · Virgin mentality: In the name of devouring evolution, the protagonist is too timid and reluctant to kill. Or they pick up a child for no reason and raise it, or they are soft-hearted towards their enemies (especially humans) and don't dare to kill them. · Sluggish pacing: The protagonist talks about wanting to devour evolution, but in the end he only eats three of the lowest level monsters in a week. Evolution is as slow as squeezing out toothpaste, and the reading experience is very frustrating. "Double standards" and flatness of worldview · Excessive "nationalization" and stereotypes: The villains (especially the United States and Japan) are portrayed as inferior, insidious vase or cannon fodder, and the plot is forcibly devalued for the sake of "enjoyment", lacking logic and depth. Good guys and bad guys are made distinct, and the complexity of the real world is erased. · Supporting characters are reduced to tool men: The meaning of supporting characters' existence is to "attack the protagonist collectively for no reason", or to wait to be slapped in the face by the protagonist, without any soul. —————————————————————————— What I think: · Deepen characters and conflicts: Let the villain's actions have reasonable motives, elevate the "country-to-country" conflict to the level of a battle between civilizations, races or ideas, and avoid low-level blackmail. · Control the rhythm and logic: Find a balance between "invincible" and "suffering", and add some restrictions to the swallowing skills (such as doubling the energy consumption). At the same time, ensure that the basic logic is self-consistent and make an outline to avoid collapse later. · Improve the depth of the story: In addition to upgrading and fighting monsters, you can try to explore deeper themes such as human nature and the conflict of civilizations to make the story more enjoyable and more memorable. In the final analysis, what readers are disgusted with is never the "swallowing" or "alien beast" itself, but the awkward feeling of wearing animal skins but full of human thoughts, shouting about being invincible but being timid, and relying on belittling other countries to gain a sense of superiority. A truly good novel should dare to let the protagonist go all the way to darkness on the "inhuman" road, and use a solid world view and reasonable conflicts to support the pure "exhilaration" of a predator.

Author, can you change the protagonist's habit of leaving words?

This book by the author Tomato can be used as a reference. I hope the author can read this book: Eating Aliens into Perfect Creatures

Support the author, it was so hard to find the book