[It doesn't matter whether you don't know Harry Potter or haven't played the DND series]
[Hogwarts Magic + DND + some private settings]
Single female protagonist
In the final battle with the Mind Flayer psionic master, the magic web was torn apart and Snape returned to his sixteenth year.
Magic, Hogwarts, the chaotic and inefficient surge of magic in the body, everything has a cause.
Faerun mage?
Hogwarts wizard?
Okay... It's time to pick up that simple wand again and teach these frogs in the well what the real art of spellcasting is.
"They all say that the Dark Lord will kill all non-pure-blood wizards. Is this true?"
"The Dark Lord that everyone fears once started a bloody war that swept the entire wizarding world."
"Then what if he encounters the nine-ring law command under the magic network and dies?"
"???"
Reader comments
The plot is very interesting, but instead of making a leather suit Snape, it would be better to just create a new character. Snape, who was a little uncomfortable with being a playboy, accepted everyone he saw.
In fact, the content is pretty good. The premise is not to think of Snape as Snape, but just think of Snape as having been possessed by a human soul. This is more appropriate. Under this premise, this book is quite good, but if you really want to be strict about it, occ doesn't need to run away.
Give a unified reply to several questions about this book:
1. Regarding the heroine issue, we can be sure that there is only one heroine. The ones currently closely related to the protagonist include Bella, Nagini, Lily...
Let me talk about Lily first, this belongs to White Moonlight, but like those plots that start with dog-licking, Snape's change only makes her regret... And they will not get together in the end...
Next, let's talk about Nagini, a human being who was cursed to turn into a snake... The plot is closer to the companion, there is an ambiguous plot, but it is impossible to become a human before the curse is lifted...
Finally, there is Bella. When we first got acquainted, we used it because of the relationship between the Black family and the Dark Lord. Because of the relationship between the Black family and the Dark Lord, we deliberately approached her and chose this family as an entry point. As for whether she will develop into a heroine in the future, I don't know... I still have to focus on my career!
2. The protagonist Snape, this Snape has been completely reconstructed and can be used as a Faerun mage to travel into Snape's body.
The character's personality and the logic of his behavior have all changed.
3. Power system. As mentioned above, Dumbledore is a level 12 mage, but there are also strengths and weaknesses at the same level. Dumbledore is considered the top among level 12 wizards.
Although there will be level 12 mages in the future, the values still depend on the operation.
Of course, this comparison of the power system is just a rough and reasonable speculation. When describing, there are actually bugs that can be pointed out so that adjustments can be made during the description.
Above.
It's not easy to fight by hand, please support me!
It's so cool. He is a Snape with a sound personality. The experience of another world makes the protagonist more sinister and cunning, and fuller than the original character. I can accept many relationships, but I can't accept many relationships at the same time, so I only give 4 stars, regardless of the gender of the protagonist. I don't like the plot of a harem.
I know you must have your own ideas when reading book reviews. If you want to get the most pertinent answer, my answer is that you can read it.
As an HP fan, it is a brand new answer that breaks the rules. As someone who knows a little about running groups, this is also a very interesting content. My rhythm is more comfortable, and the content is not so procrastinating. Compared to other times, there are always some inexplicable things involved. Today I will talk about something and tomorrow I will talk about something else. This book basically does not have a running account. It is written with its own ideas and its own purpose.
So after talking about the part worth watching, let's talk about the possible poisonous points. The first point is the so-called OOC, because I don't care about this. I don't care whether you don't fit the original image of Snape, because it is a second-person costume and you have to be Lily's licking dog like the original, that would be really fatal. So if you want to watch the 300-round prohibited scene of Half-Blood Prince vs. Lily in Rebirth, you basically don't have to think about it. Why focus on talking about this? There are crazy people in every fanfic, and they will impose their own ideas on the author.
OK, let's get back to the subject. This book is worth reading, but it's a little short of words. There are too few words. Unfortunately, I don't know when the next time I open it, I will throw you into my bookshelf and let you eat ashes.
Frankly speaking, this book definitely doesn't deserve five stars.
The purpose of giving five stars is to hope that it can play a small role in raising the rating, attract more people to read, and thus have a positive motivating effect on the author. It would be a pity if the author abandoned the book because few people read it because the rating was too low.
The biggest flaw is not the deviation of the character's personality from the original work. On the one hand, in this type of book that travels to another world, experiences some relatively intense events, and then comes back, it is not surprising that the protagonist has a major personality change; on the other hand, I have always been relatively tolerant of the magical transformation of characters in fan fiction. As long as it is not too anti-human and the protagonist is still pan-good and chaotic, usually I pay more attention to the plot itself, whether it can continue to stand up after the magic transformation, and whether the story is interesting.
But there's one thing I really can't stand. It's the same as those pirated online books that have been dealt with by the anti-crawling mechanism: confusing interchange of persons, negative words changing to positive words, and positive words changing to negative words... It feels like this book crawled directly from somewhere else.
I believe there is a bug in Tomato, or it is simply a mistake by the author who did not check it. I hope it can be improved!
I watched it for two hours and it was okay. The cold storage version of Snape was pretty good. It ranks among the top five Harry Potter fics in the past two years.
This book is very good, with a traditional British stereotype. The relationship between Snape and his potions teacher has a feeling of Qi Tongwei and Gao Yuliang, although it is only a small fragment.
Snape did not follow Lily's route. This writing method is actually quite excellent. He was also hazy when he was young, but the Snape in this book gives people a calm, self-possessed and humane feeling. It is actually very good to be able to write this point, and what is even better is to be able to derive some desire from it. Human desire comes from Bella.
When I first saw Bella in the movie version, I felt a little crazy, but her appearance was really nothing to say. Bella is a complete pus-eating villain in the original book. This book has an interaction between Snape and Bella, which I personally can barely accept, but I have to consider it carefully due to my moral obsession.
Bella, the evil and beautiful crazy loyal dog, is also okay. Most people are not born bad. Let's wait and see later. As long as you don't do anything particularly damaging to your outlook on life, you can continue to watch.
Why does it become more and more cloudy the more I write about it? Regulus is still in school. If you get a previous Horcrux, you can know through the memory that should not be shared that the locket that may not have been made yet is placed in the Inferi Cave? Then I found out after I went there that it wasn't there.
Moreover, the writing is quite perfunctory. Several times, the third person pronoun appears in sentences with double quotation marks.
And I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw what happened next. A level 12 wizard, a wizard at the level of Voldemort and Dumbledore you set yourself, is working in a wizarding gang in an unknown small country? How about setting him up to be a coward who would shrink from killing a gang boss, and then be easily killed by the protagonist in half a chapter? ? ?
They have always said that it has a single female protagonist, and it is totally fine if the single female protagonist does not write about pure love. But isn't it obvious that you are in two different situations? This has nothing to do with a single heroine. You should say that there is a single heroine, one lover and one first love.
A good hp fan, Slytherin
The flavor is quite special.
It's pretty good, and Bella can eat it too [laughing]
It's okay, but updates are too slow.
It's good for people who haven't read the original work.
A small group of people, they seem to be okay, they are not just following the boat and reborn to make a career |
The plot is very interesting, but instead of making a leather suit Snape, it would be better to just create a new character. Snape, who was a little uncomfortable with being a playboy, accepted everyone he saw.
In fact, the content is pretty good. The premise is not to think of Snape as Snape, but just think of Snape as having been possessed by a human soul. This is more appropriate. Under this premise, this book is quite good, but if you really want to be strict about it, occ doesn't need to run away.
Give a unified reply to several questions about this book: 1. Regarding the heroine issue, we can be sure that there is only one heroine. The ones currently closely related to the protagonist include Bella, Nagini, Lily... Let me talk about Lily first, this belongs to White Moonlight, but like those plots that start with dog-licking, Snape's change only makes her regret... And they will not get together in the end... Next, let's talk about Nagini, a human being who was cursed to turn into a snake... The plot is closer to the companion, there is an ambiguous plot, but it is impossible to become a human before the curse is lifted... Finally, there is Bella. When we first got acquainted, we used it because of the relationship between the Black family and the Dark Lord. Because of the relationship between the Black family and the Dark Lord, we deliberately approached her and chose this family as an entry point. As for whether she will develop into a heroine in the future, I don't know... I still have to focus on my career! 2. The protagonist Snape, this Snape has been completely reconstructed and can be used as a Faerun mage to travel into Snape's body. The character's personality and the logic of his behavior have all changed. 3. Power system. As mentioned above, Dumbledore is a level 12 mage, but there are also strengths and weaknesses at the same level. Dumbledore is considered the top among level 12 wizards. Although there will be level 12 mages in the future, the values still depend on the operation. Of course, this comparison of the power system is just a rough and reasonable speculation. When describing, there are actually bugs that can be pointed out so that adjustments can be made during the description. Above. It's not easy to fight by hand, please support me!
It's so cool. He is a Snape with a sound personality. The experience of another world makes the protagonist more sinister and cunning, and fuller than the original character. I can accept many relationships, but I can't accept many relationships at the same time, so I only give 4 stars, regardless of the gender of the protagonist. I don't like the plot of a harem.
I know you must have your own ideas when reading book reviews. If you want to get the most pertinent answer, my answer is that you can read it. As an HP fan, it is a brand new answer that breaks the rules. As someone who knows a little about running groups, this is also a very interesting content. My rhythm is more comfortable, and the content is not so procrastinating. Compared to other times, there are always some inexplicable things involved. Today I will talk about something and tomorrow I will talk about something else. This book basically does not have a running account. It is written with its own ideas and its own purpose. So after talking about the part worth watching, let's talk about the possible poisonous points. The first point is the so-called OOC, because I don't care about this. I don't care whether you don't fit the original image of Snape, because it is a second-person costume and you have to be Lily's licking dog like the original, that would be really fatal. So if you want to watch the 300-round prohibited scene of Half-Blood Prince vs. Lily in Rebirth, you basically don't have to think about it. Why focus on talking about this? There are crazy people in every fanfic, and they will impose their own ideas on the author. OK, let's get back to the subject. This book is worth reading, but it's a little short of words. There are too few words. Unfortunately, I don't know when the next time I open it, I will throw you into my bookshelf and let you eat ashes.
Frankly speaking, this book definitely doesn't deserve five stars. The purpose of giving five stars is to hope that it can play a small role in raising the rating, attract more people to read, and thus have a positive motivating effect on the author. It would be a pity if the author abandoned the book because few people read it because the rating was too low. The biggest flaw is not the deviation of the character's personality from the original work. On the one hand, in this type of book that travels to another world, experiences some relatively intense events, and then comes back, it is not surprising that the protagonist has a major personality change; on the other hand, I have always been relatively tolerant of the magical transformation of characters in fan fiction. As long as it is not too anti-human and the protagonist is still pan-good and chaotic, usually I pay more attention to the plot itself, whether it can continue to stand up after the magic transformation, and whether the story is interesting. But there's one thing I really can't stand. It's the same as those pirated online books that have been dealt with by the anti-crawling mechanism: confusing interchange of persons, negative words changing to positive words, and positive words changing to negative words... It feels like this book crawled directly from somewhere else. I believe there is a bug in Tomato, or it is simply a mistake by the author who did not check it. I hope it can be improved!
I watched it for two hours and it was okay. The cold storage version of Snape was pretty good. It ranks among the top five Harry Potter fics in the past two years.
This book is very good, with a traditional British stereotype. The relationship between Snape and his potions teacher has a feeling of Qi Tongwei and Gao Yuliang, although it is only a small fragment. Snape did not follow Lily's route. This writing method is actually quite excellent. He was also hazy when he was young, but the Snape in this book gives people a calm, self-possessed and humane feeling. It is actually very good to be able to write this point, and what is even better is to be able to derive some desire from it. Human desire comes from Bella. When I first saw Bella in the movie version, I felt a little crazy, but her appearance was really nothing to say. Bella is a complete pus-eating villain in the original book. This book has an interaction between Snape and Bella, which I personally can barely accept, but I have to consider it carefully due to my moral obsession. Bella, the evil and beautiful crazy loyal dog, is also okay. Most people are not born bad. Let's wait and see later. As long as you don't do anything particularly damaging to your outlook on life, you can continue to watch. Why does it become more and more cloudy the more I write about it? Regulus is still in school. If you get a previous Horcrux, you can know through the memory that should not be shared that the locket that may not have been made yet is placed in the Inferi Cave? Then I found out after I went there that it wasn't there. Moreover, the writing is quite perfunctory. Several times, the third person pronoun appears in sentences with double quotation marks. And I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw what happened next. A level 12 wizard, a wizard at the level of Voldemort and Dumbledore you set yourself, is working in a wizarding gang in an unknown small country? How about setting him up to be a coward who would shrink from killing a gang boss, and then be easily killed by the protagonist in half a chapter? ? ? They have always said that it has a single female protagonist, and it is totally fine if the single female protagonist does not write about pure love. But isn't it obvious that you are in two different situations? This has nothing to do with a single heroine. You should say that there is a single heroine, one lover and one first love.
A good hp fan, Slytherin
The flavor is quite special.
It's pretty good, and Bella can eat it too [laughing]
It's okay, but updates are too slow.
It's good for people who haven't read the original work.
A small group of people, they seem to be okay, they are not just following the boat and reborn to make a career |
Good looking, dnd elements and the right taste
Not many people saw it, but it was really pretty.