(I like to climb towers and play with porridge, and I was inspired by similar works on the site, so I read this book on a whim) (The protagonist does not know the plot of Porridge) (Multiple female protagonists) (The identity of the time traveler will not be hidden very tightly, and will not be hidden from those who know more, such as doctors, etc. If you mind, you don't need to read further)
After Mo Mo elbowed Da Luck on a whim, he gained the power of an armored warrior and came to the land called Terra. The story of how to win this game of NoSL.
This work includes: How about fighting for the future?
I said... Do you understand?
Chicken Pot Joke
Kaka!
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Reader comments
This is a very promising Arknights second creation without using AI. It is really well written. Will the protagonist gain the card abilities of the other four in the future? I'm looking forward to it, after all, I remember an event where you can get other people's cards.
The language is relatively fluent, a little tainted with Riqing's word order, but not much, and it's acceptable. At least I can find the subject, predicate and object accurately, the sentence structure is complete, and different people speak slightly differently, which is commendable.
Editor 2: I have read batch after batch of fanfics, and the most troublesome issue is the use of language. The order of the words is confusing, the words do not convey the meaning, the emotions are fragmented, complaining for the sake of complaining, embarrassing for the sake of embarrassing, the main line is unclear, and I write where I dreamed. Those things can get a score of 9 or above. I would say that this book has a score of 9.5. It is not an exaggeration.
Use the building to curse those fanfics. I have always believed that fan fiction is articles first, and fan fiction second. The article must have the appearance of an article. If it fails to meet the basic requirements of word choice and sentence making, I won't be able to read it at all. There is no need to talk about whether it conforms to the original work or whether the research is strict or not.
The card system is well done and not as abrupt as most of the Spire stories.
It's okay, but it's hard to accept that my identity was revealed too quickly to someone I just met a short time ago [Thinking]
Good job! Let me talk about the conclusion first. The plot of this book is exciting and the logic is self-consistent. It is a super book. Especially my fourth favorite Iron Armor Brother (Bushi) can also participate in the starring role. I hope the author will update it soon.
Oh no, no, no, doctor, male, female
Support me, come on
It's for Warrior Pigeon, it's in Waku area, so let's transfer the intensity to Warrior Brother [laughing]
It's not bad to have potential, I'm talking about fighting for the future
I said that the warrior brother starts with two, one bloodletting and one whirlwind, and then he positions himself in the campfire store and directly takes the x potion. Does anyone understand? [Laugh][laugh][laugh]
A rare masterpiece
After watching it for a while, it felt good, so I continued to taste it.
Pure-blood Kimi who seems to like endless pursuit of novelties
As long as I have a whim, I can open my eyes
Take it! Bring more!
It's surprisingly good. I'm really looking forward to the next plot.
Hao Chi, write more, bro loves to eat😋👍👍👍
I enjoyed watching it, the plot is excellent, there is no poisonous point, and the most important thing is the author's ingenuity!
This is a very promising Arknights second creation without using AI. It is really well written. Will the protagonist gain the card abilities of the other four in the future? I'm looking forward to it, after all, I remember an event where you can get other people's cards.
The language is relatively fluent, a little tainted with Riqing's word order, but not much, and it's acceptable. At least I can find the subject, predicate and object accurately, the sentence structure is complete, and different people speak slightly differently, which is commendable. Editor 2: I have read batch after batch of fanfics, and the most troublesome issue is the use of language. The order of the words is confusing, the words do not convey the meaning, the emotions are fragmented, complaining for the sake of complaining, embarrassing for the sake of embarrassing, the main line is unclear, and I write where I dreamed. Those things can get a score of 9 or above. I would say that this book has a score of 9.5. It is not an exaggeration. Use the building to curse those fanfics. I have always believed that fan fiction is articles first, and fan fiction second. The article must have the appearance of an article. If it fails to meet the basic requirements of word choice and sentence making, I won't be able to read it at all. There is no need to talk about whether it conforms to the original work or whether the research is strict or not.
The card system is well done and not as abrupt as most of the Spire stories.
It's okay, but it's hard to accept that my identity was revealed too quickly to someone I just met a short time ago [Thinking]
Good job! Let me talk about the conclusion first. The plot of this book is exciting and the logic is self-consistent. It is a super book. Especially my fourth favorite Iron Armor Brother (Bushi) can also participate in the starring role. I hope the author will update it soon.
Oh no, no, no, doctor, male, female
Support me, come on
It's for Warrior Pigeon, it's in Waku area, so let's transfer the intensity to Warrior Brother [laughing]
It's not bad to have potential, I'm talking about fighting for the future
I said that the warrior brother starts with two, one bloodletting and one whirlwind, and then he positions himself in the campfire store and directly takes the x potion. Does anyone understand? [Laugh][laugh][laugh]
A rare masterpiece
After watching it for a while, it felt good, so I continued to taste it.
Pure-blood Kimi who seems to like endless pursuit of novelties As long as I have a whim, I can open my eyes Take it! Bring more!
It's surprisingly good. I'm really looking forward to the next plot.
Hao Chi, write more, bro loves to eat😋👍👍👍
I enjoyed watching it, the plot is excellent, there is no poisonous point, and the most important thing is the author's ingenuity!