Huang Ama was reborn on the day he recognized Xiao Yanzi. He directly sent someone to bring Ziwei into the palace. Xiao Yanzi recovered from his injuries and held a banquet to recognize his daughter. At the dinner, his two daughters toasted him, one on the left and the other. His hands were shaking while holding the cup - it was from here in his previous life that Zhi Hua came in, the Fang family's old case was revealed, and Xiao Yanzi left Yunnan in eight months of pregnancy. It was not until his death that he found out that he had personally chopped off Xiao Yanzi's whole family. In this life, he put down his wine glass, dug out Fang Zhihang's files that night and re-examined them, and called Xiao Jian into the palace overnight to acknowledge his marriage. When the Queen Mother mentioned that she was looking for a good fortune for the fifth elder brother, he interrupted directly: "Huang'e Niang, don't bother with that girl named Zhihua." The fifth elder brother was still happily thinking about marrying Xiao Yanzi, but Qianlong slapped him on the back of the head: "You made her suffer in the last life. How much grievance is it? If I can't protect her in this life, I'll take care of you first!" Xiao Yanzi tugged at his sleeve in confusion: "Why do you keep talking about the past life?" Qianlong hugged her and said with red eyes, "Because I lost your pistachio in the past life."
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Pure AI article, the bean buns taste too strong
"The laughter of little swallows is heard in the distance" This shot has a very good atmosphere and can be regarded as a universal antidote. As soon as I finished writing the heavy, depressing, past life memories, I immediately called: the voice from Shufangzhai to bring back my emotions.
Repeating it later will cause conditioned reflexes in the reader:
Qianlong began to think about his previous life → he would definitely hear Xiao Yanzi laughing in the next second.
In less than 10 chapters, there are 3 versions of the original version with almost identical plots.
1. On the Imperial Chariot Road: Shufangzhai's laughter passed through half the palace wall
2. Returning to the palace at night: the laughter behind you is scattered in the night wind
3. By the lotus pond: Her laughter can be heard across half of the imperial garden.
The universal transition section loops repeatedly (the most serious)
Fixed formula: Qianlong fell into painful memories of his past life → forcibly suppressed his emotions → the loud laughter of Little Swallow floated in the distance
In just a few chapters, the exact same shot has appeared three times:
- The royal chariot passed by: Shufangzhai's laughter passed through half the palace wall
-Beside the lotus pond: I heard laughter across half of the imperial garden
‑Returning to the palace at night: Laughter drifted across the palace wall in the wind
AI will treat a very effective shot as a universal mood regulator. When it needs to ease the heavy atmosphere, it will immediately bring out "The laughter of a little swallow is heard in the distance".
A real author would only use it 1-2 times at most, and then change the details: smelling the aroma of the food, seeing the figure shaking on the window paper in the distance, the eunuch whispering back, and not clinging to the same scene over and over again.
The emotional logic is right: Qianlong was healed by the liveliness and excitement.
But hearing only takes the form of laughter, and it is always transmitted from a long distance in space, and it has become routine.
AI article, the plot is outrageous and messy, and the characters are all OOC
Great, looks great!
It's Tai Yanwen, the introduction and content don't match
Pure AI article, the bean buns taste too strong "The laughter of little swallows is heard in the distance" This shot has a very good atmosphere and can be regarded as a universal antidote. As soon as I finished writing the heavy, depressing, past life memories, I immediately called: the voice from Shufangzhai to bring back my emotions. Repeating it later will cause conditioned reflexes in the reader: Qianlong began to think about his previous life → he would definitely hear Xiao Yanzi laughing in the next second. In less than 10 chapters, there are 3 versions of the original version with almost identical plots. 1. On the Imperial Chariot Road: Shufangzhai's laughter passed through half the palace wall 2. Returning to the palace at night: the laughter behind you is scattered in the night wind 3. By the lotus pond: Her laughter can be heard across half of the imperial garden. The universal transition section loops repeatedly (the most serious) Fixed formula: Qianlong fell into painful memories of his past life → forcibly suppressed his emotions → the loud laughter of Little Swallow floated in the distance In just a few chapters, the exact same shot has appeared three times: - The royal chariot passed by: Shufangzhai's laughter passed through half the palace wall -Beside the lotus pond: I heard laughter across half of the imperial garden ‑Returning to the palace at night: Laughter drifted across the palace wall in the wind AI will treat a very effective shot as a universal mood regulator. When it needs to ease the heavy atmosphere, it will immediately bring out "The laughter of a little swallow is heard in the distance". A real author would only use it 1-2 times at most, and then change the details: smelling the aroma of the food, seeing the figure shaking on the window paper in the distance, the eunuch whispering back, and not clinging to the same scene over and over again. The emotional logic is right: Qianlong was healed by the liveliness and excitement. But hearing only takes the form of laughter, and it is always transmitted from a long distance in space, and it has become routine.
AI article, the plot is outrageous and messy, and the characters are all OOC
Great, looks great!
It's Tai Yanwen, the introduction and content don't match