
Reborn: The Emperor's Daily Life Protecting His Children
重生之皇阿玛的护崽日常
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 335k Words
- Updated
- 28d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
162Chapters
149Reads
127Shelves
14Listens
24.9kReads · all time
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Pure AI article, the bean buns taste too strong "The laughter of little swallows is heard in the distance" This shot has a very good atmosphere and can be regarded as a universal antidote. As soon as I finished writing the heavy, depressing, past life memories, I immediately called: the voice from Shufangzhai to bring back my emotions. Repeating it later will cause conditioned reflexes in the reader: Qianlong began to think about his previous life → he would definitely hear Xiao Yanzi laughing in the next second. In less than 10 chapters, there are 3 versions of the original version with almost identical plots. 1. On the Imperial Chariot Road: Shufangzhai's laughter passed through half the palace wall 2. Returning to the palace at night: the laughter behind you is scattered in the night wind 3. By the lotus pond: Her laughter can be heard across half of the imperial garden. The universal transition section loops repeatedly (the most serious) Fixed formula: Qianlong fell into painful memories of his past life → forcibly suppressed his emotions → the loud laughter of Little Swallow floated in the distance In just a few chapters, the exact same shot has appeared three times: - The royal chariot passed by: Shufangzhai's laughter passed through half the palace wall -Beside the lotus pond: I heard laughter across half of the imperial garden ‑Returning to the palace at night: Laughter drifted across the palace wall in the wind AI will treat a very effective shot as a universal mood regulator. When it needs to ease the heavy atmosphere, it will immediately bring out "The laughter of a little swallow is heard in the distance". A real author would only use it 1-2 times at most, and then change the details: smelling the aroma of the food, seeing the figure shaking on the window paper in the distance, the eunuch whispering back, and not clinging to the same scene over and over again. The emotional logic is right: Qianlong was healed by the liveliness and excitement. But hearing only takes the form of laughter, and it is always transmitted from a long distance in space, and it has become routine.
AI article, the plot is outrageous and messy, and the characters are all OOC
Great, looks great!
It's Tai Yanwen, the introduction and content don't match