My new short story is complete. Ensemble cast + two male leads + spiritual qi revival + light supernatural suspense + campus life. This is a practice piece, so my writing will gradually improve as it goes. I hope you’ll leave lots of feedback and suggestions.
This book is a treasure that has been discovered recently. The opening scene is laid out naturally, without any stiff setting. The plot progresses layer by layer, the foreshadowing echoes before and after, and the logic is complete. The author pays special attention to the character creation. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters have independent personalities and growth lines, and are not stereotyped or tool-like. The writing is smooth and delicate, the fighting descriptions are well-measured, and the rhythm is tight and balanced. There are famous scenes that make people's blood boil, as well as delicate and touching scenes of warmth. There are no logic bugs in the whole process, and the plot twists are surprising and not abrupt. I still have more to say after reading it. I sincerely recommend it to fans of the same genre and look forward to subsequent updates! And I particularly like silence 🥰🥰🥰
The description of the scenery is very delicate and beautiful, and it can be seen that the author has a solid foundation in prose and poetry.
Like Chapter 22
This book is a treasure that has been discovered recently. The opening scene is laid out naturally, without any stiff setting. The plot progresses layer by layer, the foreshadowing echoes before and after, and the logic is complete. The author pays special attention to the character creation. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters have independent personalities and growth lines, and are not stereotyped or tool-like. The writing is smooth and delicate, the fighting descriptions are well-measured, and the rhythm is tight and balanced. There are famous scenes that make people's blood boil, as well as delicate and touching scenes of warmth. There are no logic bugs in the whole process, and the plot twists are surprising and not abrupt. I still have more to say after reading it. I sincerely recommend it to fans of the same genre and look forward to subsequent updates! And I particularly like silence 🥰🥰🥰
The description of the scenery is very delicate and beautiful, and it can be seen that the author has a solid foundation in prose and poetry. Like Chapter 22