Comprehensive Manga: the Beginning and Kasumigaoka Come to the Strange Room

It's pretty good to watch, but the main character could be gentler. He doesn't even need to be gentle. He should be more normal. I think the main character is too awkward. I can't explain it. As for the opening of the game, after all, it's his first time, so he should be calmer. This doesn't count as licking. It's just a normal human reaction. After all, people I think it's normal for my family to lose control of my emotions for no reason for the first time. After all, girls watch this very seriously, but the pressure of the protagonist to be directly followed later feels too cs. The rest is okay, it's pretty good-looking, just speed up the update, and the emotional line with Shiyu needs to be developed quickly, it can't be a waste of time [face covering]

Get the first good review, no need to press the score, just trust the author's technique Let me talk about it here. You may think that my protagonist is a bit of a beast, but this is a trade-off. The beast will not be scolded so badly, but the turtle man will be chased and scolded, which will affect the quality of the work.

Hao Chi, Hao Chi, okay, okay, I even cried when I saw it

Speaking of rooms, I thought of a game adapted from a room, with a male protagonist and several female protagonists, and then go in to complete tasks. In short, it is very heavy [thinking][thinking][thinking]

Lao Da, can we live to 100,000 words?

I feel like the protagonist is a bit CS and could be a little gentler.

No doubt, this is the movie Author, stay calm, don't be sanctioned

The author is Liu Bei, and this is the emperor's uncle (dog head)

Understand everything, look at it and cherish it

Give me a good review and cheers for the author.

Come on, brother, don't die, I support you

It's super pretty, keep updating.

Must be five stars, update quickly

Supreme Bone unresponsive Signed as: Artwork

Stick with it until you reach 100,000 words and see what the push is like at that time. Maybe you can attract people.

Yes, yes, very yes, especially yes!

It's okay, author, cheers. No stomachache,

You can tell the plot by reading the title of the book. If you like this type of book, read it and cherish it. This kind of article is sent quickly.

Why is it the same as the room in another manga? Same author?

I have really forgotten everything in the past, so I opened a trumpet [Salute]

Come on, don't give up

Mark it, it looks very nice

I was originally waiting and watching, but after reading the reviews and saying that you are not afraid of pushing the score, I will give you five stars.

My power has greatly increased, I can understand everything

It would be nice to update soon

Just trust the author, he has written a good one before

The novel born from this will teach you how to write