Eye of the Boundary

The first part of the game was not handled very well. The protagonist didn't do anything, but they all listened to the protagonist. And in the first dungeon, there were actually 12 people, which felt too much, and the names were not introduced in detail. The readers couldn't tell who is who. You don't have to use their real names. You can give them code names based on their characteristics. For example, if a man is Mediterranean, you can call him a bald man. If a woman wears a peaked cap, you can call him a girl with a peaked cap. The rest are fine.

The worldview of this book feels similar to "The House" and after reading the latest updated chapters, I feel that the male protagonist and the female protagonist are not simple. They should have known each other before. This is quite a foreshadowing. Continue to update, the first copy now feels almost complete. Overall there is no big problem!

Xue Fuhe works hard to write a new novel, and Zhu Qingshuo supports him in real name [Love]