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Let's put it this way, high-quality Verity fanfics are highly recommended among many V fans. Pevls is an insensitive protagonist and has little reaction to Verity's intrusion. And this V is not a mob v. The difference is quite big. Sisters in the same circle who are interested in Veritymob can definitely enter! I really like the author's way of writing separately, and the feeling of finishing one chapter completely and then starting the second chapter. At least the cp of v and pevls is very comfortable for me and I don't feel any weird. The author is also super cute. The small questions and answers at the end of each chapter show that he really puts his heart into it [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] The following are some dissatisfactions: The other descriptions are all very good, and everything about the characters is written thoroughly, but why is the text so sloppy... Why is Verity's confession so short, and why is Pevls's promise so bland? I know he is an insensitive and lonely protagonist, but at least give him some time to be surprised and think... It's so uncomfortable to read it all in one sentence... Finally, come on, author, your verity article is the best among many articles, at least four and a half stars. It's a pity that Tomato doesn't have half-star function. It's a complete five-star review. You are also the best person. Sure enough, the more sloppy the cover, the better the article...[Face covering][face covering][face covering]

Teacher, I was so happy that I forgot to rate you. Sorry. But, author, you showed me the brilliant future of this book. It's really great. Author, please continue to work hard and update it. This author has been trying to shape himself, it's a bit cute, but it's not working anymore

(Feelings after reading more than ten chapters) The pace is not draggy, and the character of the protagonist is also very interesting [heartfelt]! The content of the article is very relaxed, and the relationship between the two protagonists is also very sweet [heartfelt]! Although there are sometimes some word order or language errors, the author's name admits that he is a cat [grieved]... Everyone should be tolerant to cute kittens [send heartfelt]! Finally... Come on Duck [blows a kiss], cat! Keep up your update speed [blowing kiss]! (Quietly) But don't rest for too long... Or you won't have anything to eat...

It looks so good, it makes me happy to read it, it's totally the love letter of my dreams! Perfect experience of "fighting and fighting to get zero~" delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious!!!!!!

🥺😢The author writes so well that it's crazy🥺, the characters are very vivid and concrete, not too many gorgeous words and sentences, but they are also very interesting, wow, the ps is super cute, okay🥺The interaction with verity is also very delicious🥺🥺, the author is also very cute, and will answer the readers' questions seriously, wow😢In short, it's very good-looking, and you won't get tired of it [Love][KISS][KISS][KISS] It's so beautiful [love] [crying] I've been crying. . .

Author, you write so beautifully! I finished three brushes in two days! Now I want to start four brushes! I am a rather impatient person myself. When reading other novels, I would jump at the ones I am not interested in, but I savored every sentence of this one! There are more than 20 notes alone! It makes my heart warm when I see it, it's such a delicious cp. The author himself is also one of the cutest books among the more than 900 books I have read! Cats are angels! I have completed eight brushes and am about to start my sacred nine brushes. [Shy] So pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The boss has a super cute protagonist and the CP of verity is really delicious (//∇//) Boss, this book is the most beautiful novel about verity that I have read so far.

Teacher, this is one of the best Verity books I have read (✪▽✪). After all, many people, including myself, started writing it as soon as they got excited (although I am still writing the plot myself and haven't published the first chapter yet). The protagonist written by the teacher is quite cute. Now the protagonist and Verity get along very sweetly (he has tooth decay) [heehee]

Oh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Beautiful! ! ! Totally in line with my xp! ! ! ! ! Both sides firmly choose each other! This is so good! ! ! ! ! To make up for Tomato not having a long series of fanfics! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Author sαma! ! ! ! Love you! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Warning before reading: My evaluation of this book is not just a compliment. I will use my personal way of speaking to point out the problems that I think exist. However, because "I personally think there are problems", there will be some deviations and subjective colors. The right to adopt specific suggestions belongs to the author. Let me begin. NO 1: Character creation. Regarding the characterization, the characters of PS-Verity and PS are very stereotyped. At least when I published it (the 14th movie viewing memory), their characters fit the male ghost 1 and "idiot 0" I saw (sorry). Looking back on watching the movie, I think the biggest role it played is that the image that PS originally used to be summarized as a poor "idiot" has become... A person with dissociated personality, miserable life experience, no one loves, and rich - "idiot". (Supplement: Because the official PS IQ setting is good, you are not a fool in the secular sense, but you just lack common sense - and you have congenital brain neurological diseases, so you don't need to call yourself a fool) As for ps-verity? The double standard of gentle man and ghost 1 (at least for now), and yes, there is also a lack of love. So far, this is all I think about the two of them. As for CP, two abnormal people are quite compatible with "people" (in the secular sense). 99. NO 2: Writing problem So far (pevls chapter 14), my biggest evaluation is: average. I have not read other verity fanfics on Tomato. From what I have seen, the writing style of the author and teacher can only be considered average. It's not a matter of article arrangement: it's understandable that the text is short – there are few settings related to verity in the original drama, and it's not enough to support a sufficiently good worldview. Therefore, the only, best, and most convenient way to write about verity is to write about the "love, hate, and hatred" between the protagonist and V. There is nothing wrong with this. It's a bit of a tangent, let's get back to the point. Teacher, you like to write articles - he picked up the book from the bookshelf, opened it, and then... Wrote like this (a little bit), or added the person's name before a sentence, and wrote a sentence or paragraph starting with the person's name - OK, The only drawback is that writing this way will make people think the article is protracted, especially if you are writing a short story (text). Use more paragraphs, less modal particles, and more written language. Do not format the article in one paragraph or one paragraph, but use middle paragraphs and short paragraphs. Use the same word less often. (You can change synonyms, but don't use too many), Transitions can connect things, such as rain (same rain and different people), liquids (light to dark colors), etc. As for the specific method to improve the writing skills of articles - I don't know this, but I think the best way to improve the writing skills at present is to write more, write boldly and read all kinds of famous works. But teacher, your article is very good as a verity fanfic (OS: at least I can read it happily without stepping on the thunder). The above is my serious evaluation and suggestions. The following is completely personal color I think: Teacher, your behavior of opening up the question area and seriously accepting readers' needs is very enthusiastic and normal behavior. There is nothing wrong with this behavior itself But I don't support This is strange - wouldn't more extra chapters be a benefit to you readers? But not to the author I have been writing novels for 5 years - from the enthusiasm in the fourth grade to the randomness now. The novel I am currently writing about my OC is the "transformation" version (incorporating the innocent nature into the collection). I think maybe I am qualified to say the following words. Teacher, you are very enthusiastic and sincere But that's hard to do for long. You have promised too many extras - if you don't want to write anymore in the future, will your commitment and sense of responsibility make you stop? Maybe. Maybe not. But that will be accompanied by a struggle, and it may be at the expense of your rest time, and maybe you will say "Baby, I can't finish writing." This is not a very easy task. Teacher, I suggest you stop agreeing because of your soft-heartedness, self-confidence, and maybe sense of responsibility—in short, don't agree. Currently there are only about 30 (the actual number of films may be ×2), but the future may not be certain. All in all Teacher, your article is good, and you are also a good person - it is Liangbaikai with jasmine (this is a personal preference). Come on. As long as I can get my cell phone, forget about the wish that may not come true if I don't make it - I now want to pay attention to your works for a long time and praise your personality. It is now 0:13 in the morning on August 18, 2026. Good night teacher, I wish you all your wishes come true I wish you a pure heart good night

This article is delicious. . The only flaw is that the confession of Verity was briefly brushed off (I was looking forward to a long oath and PS performance). I still regret that I didn't discover this book earlier. It can be said that this book is very well written in the Verity fan series. After reading this article, I have a lot of questions to ask the author. To sum up, I still give it full marks (this is the first time I write my review). In short, it is highly recommended.

Actually, I think the boss used words like "then" a little too much when writing the article. That is to say, when you listen to the book, the impression is not very good. In fact, if you remove some of these words, it will still read smoothly. But because the subject matter of this book is quite new, I still like it very much. I give the boss a five-star review. I wonder if the boss can see this HH of mine. If possible, I hope the boss can reduce the use of some repeated words, because you can basically see 2 to 3 identical words in a small paragraph.

The author is very nice and very cute [flying kiss] [flying kiss]. He will answer some questions from readers. I really like the interaction between PS and V in it. However, I still recommend watching some videos about V before jumping in. Maybe V's settings are not to your taste, so enter with caution. The author is still a novice. If there is anything wrong with it, you can point it out tactfully and don't hurt me with harsh words.

The God of War Prince asks for marriage but refuses to marry him The cold-faced prince asks for marriage but refuses to marry him The arrogant prince asks for marriage but refuses to marry him After returning, she rejected everyone who proposed marriage. In this life, she will definitely live up to the regent who is infatuated with her. "That's the Living King of Hell!" Others advised the ancestor with earnest words. She did not comment, stepped on the broken porcelain pieces on the ground, and slightly raised her lips: "In this life, I will let the author update ten chapters every day~"

This book is a very good book from my personal point of view. I feel that the character's personality is very well grasped, and the plot is relaxed and moderate. Especially V's character, it feels like V himself. It doesn't feel a bit OOC.

This is the first fanfic I read after learning about this topic. Personally, I think it's okay. The young couple is very sweet. I have to say that it's really a two-way disease. The protagonist's reflex arc can go around the equator. He usually feels stupid, but at the critical moment, he feels like he has become smarter. After posting questions in the comment area, the author will answer them. This mode is quite novel to me. This is the first time I have seen it. According to the author, he still has 12 or 14 to write, some of which are spin-offs and some of which are small theaters. Reminds me of whether long comments can be pushed? So the following is the word count. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhing. Also, I hope the author can be faster. One page a day is simply not enough.

It's very beautiful, and the food fed by the author is very delicious. I wish the author good health and all the best. The writing is really beautiful. I hope more people will support the author greatly [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [asking for more explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates ][Ask for more explosive updates][Ask for explosive updates][Ask for explosive updates][Upvote][Uppost][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Ask for explosive updates][Original Party][Original Party][Original Party]

I think it's very good-looking, and the author updates it every day, which I really like. There are two chapters updated every day. Well, it's very good-looking. I hope to update more ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з

The author writes very well and has rich characters. The author is very cute and active. He can answer readers' questions and is very tolerant and a good person (the author is so good, you must be an angel). The main text is relatively short, and there are some extras (there are many extras). This article is written by he. Although PS's childhood and spirit are a bit rough, it is overall sweet and worth reading. I love you the author greatly [love]

I'll go, I'll go, I'll go. If I rely more on a head chef, does that count me as greedy? But it's really delicious! I am directly inhaled by a storm, I eat, I eat, I eat, eat, eat, eat, eat, eat, eat, eat, eat, eat! [Adoration]

Delicious, very delicious. I have never seen such a delicious fanfic. I can't believe how I can see such a masterpiece. I downloaded Tomato just to see this. This boss is so good. You didn't tell me that I can see such good literature by buying a mobile phone.

Looks good, loves to watch, watch more. Every time I fall into that trap, the articles that are recommended to me are delicious, delicious, delicious. The author's portrayal of the protagonist is very vivid and distinctive.

Super pretty! ! ! What you wrote is very good, but it was also very sweet beforehand, and V's setting and character are also very unique! ! ! PS is also very cute and super friendly! ! ! ! !

Second brush, high-quality work in the second creation circle, the protagonist is cute [already planted]

The main text is very short, I just finished reading the main text and stopped reading. Overall, it's pretty good-looking. It feels fast-paced, but also quite harmonious. What makes me feel unhappy is that this thing is too short. I actually want to read more daily chapters. But this is my first time reading this kind of fanfic, so I'll give it a five-star review.

It's good to read... The best book to read... The author is so awesome...[Love][love][love][love][love][love][love][love][love][heartfelt][heartfelt][heartfelt][heartfelt][heartfelt][heartfelt]

It's really beautiful! The cuteness of ps and the interaction with verity are really awesome~ It's my first time to come across this kind of article, so I searched for videos related to verity and found that it really impressed me. I hope the author will work hard! ! If you watch the movie, hey, I'm really looking forward to other verity's reactions.

I like this very warm one. It has less text, but it is still very interesting. I like it very much, it's sweet and reassuring. I like it very much. The author will continue to update it well, okay. I like sweet little sweet articles. I like it very much. I want to watch the movie. When can I get it? I like it so much ꒰^ↀωↀ^꒱❤❤

Ahhhhhh! It's really, really, really pretty! Very very beautiful! (Run out of words)

I like you... (I rack my brains and don't know how to praise someone who silently spit out the four-character mantra) I really like what the author wrote... Interactive Cute...'ㅅ՝♡ The author must persist until the end...🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟