New book, maybe the rating will go up, maybe
Ye Xing, who traveled through time and became the Lord of Minecraft, only has an empty island?
Fortunately, there is another alternate world of swords and magic.
What? No magic? Really medieval?
Then sign a contract, spread magic, and become the master of another world!
From enchanted armor to the Age of Mystery, from ice and fire to iron magic.
The mysterious twilight forest, the scorching hell, and the end where all things end.
Magic will be woven into the world by Leafstar's own hands!
[Revival of Spiritual Energy][Western Fantasy][Spreading Extraordinary][Group Portrait Article][Lower Presence of the Protagonist]
Reader comments
For the variant creation flow or the extraordinary invasion of the Middle Ages, it is best to increase the absolute dominance a little bit, but the rest is pretty good.
The overall script is a bit fast-paced, including the MC original version which has too little impact. The unit narrative is a bit slow, and the distribution of priorities is not very good.
However, the Mysterious Age has received good reviews. Although I am an adventure dog at the bottom of the MC players' disdain chain, it can be seen that I am either blindly working on machines (referring to mechanical power) or I have some ideas.
Overall, 4 points, +1 for encouragement.
And since the painting style is magical, I recommend Root Magic [laughing]
After watching it, MC + medieval + behind the scenes + extraordinary creation. Overall, it's pretty good, but the MC's plot and ingenuity are too little, and the protagonist hasn't shown up for a long time. And as a behind-the-scenes novel, the protagonist's arrangement and intervention are too little, and things are completely allowed to grow wildly.
I have read 21 chapters, and I feel it is very good so far. It is suitable for old bookworms to read.
I consider myself a rather harsh critic, at least on Tomato, but I can't find anything wrong with this author at the moment. If I have to say something, I have some questions about military strength:
How many people are needed to support 120 knights in a territory? From some data, it can be estimated that the kingdom has at least 20,000 standing troops. However, the data in this regard are not very outrageous. The author has an idea. Compared with some hundreds of thousands of troops attacking a small town, 1,000 armored knights cannot defeat 6,000 hungry mobs.
The key advantage is that the character image is very three-dimensional. Just because he is an important character, he will not be treated like a native and a modern person, nor will the old king be labeled as a good person just because he restricted the nobles from helping the common people. The prince is brave and treats his subordinates well, but he turns a blind eye to the suffering at the bottom. This is the limitation of the times. After finally seeing a living person, the protagonist jumps from the sky impatiently, which makes the plot full of vitality.
Just being able to look at things from the perspective of a character and think about what kind of environment can create such a person is already a first-class online writer!
The subsequent story is a bit labeled
Some personal comments
The protagonist of this book is a background board, and it is a big background board. The protagonist basically has no role. It is not a clone flow. The protagonist just hands over the magic and lets the magic grow wildly. Mc is not important. The protagonist just adds a MC module. There should be arcana and Song of Ice and Fire modules in the future. Personally, I feel that there should be ice and fire modules, because the dragons should also come out. Of course, it is just a personal idea. The protagonist will not interfere with the choice of characters. It will purely grow wildly and will not play anything. For example, if you create a few avatars to play the role of seniors in the occult, it won't work. The world view of MC will be disappointing, because the MC itself has no effect. The function is limited to magic, and it can be done without MC. The protagonist is one. The background version of the protagonist is not important, but the characters inside are important.
After reading so many behind-the-scenes articles, this is the first time I have seen such a protagonist, but to me, it is still very good. If it is for MC, it may be disappointing, because the core is not related to MC. The core is magic and the Middle Ages. The protagonist does not show his face at all, and will only show up a few times in the previous plot. He will not interfere with the choice of characters. Personal evaluation should be able to give it a four-star rating. Overall, it is not bad.
But I really like this series. I can give it five stars. After all, this is the first time that magic was introduced in the Middle Ages.
After watching it, it was very good. It gave me the feeling of raising all human beings. It is normal for the protagonist to appear less in this kind of rhythm. The negative comment in the comment area turned out to be this, which almost made me miss it. At present, the only online reading is only one thousand. There is no problem with the quality of one hundred thousand. Come on.
No, buddy, are you going to stop updating now?
At present, this book can only be said to have a bright future. Although it is behind the scenes, the speed at which the protagonist obtains new modules is still too slow to speed up. You can not release them first, but hold them in your hands first to make the world more diverse. The modules in MC can be sorted out and split into small modules. Add some elixirs from Cultivation, ghosts from Mysterious Resurrection, some rules and ghost stories, things like those from Lord of Mysteries, ghost legends from various places, and some fate backgrounds. Anyway, Cthulhu, Harry Potter, these can be used for reference, and some small secret realms can be generated to diversify the main themes. Otherwise, the speed would be too slow and there would be too few elements and it would be easy for people to live in books. MC can use modules to be compatible with all things. In terms of plot, the Holy King chapter alone is a bit long. It can be seen that the author wants to write it in detail, but he can add foreshadowing in the early stage. If it is too detailed, it will be too long and people will not be able to read it. I feel like I want to continue reading. If I want it to be longer, I can list it separately, like some large-scale secret realm or something. I still like to watch the behind-the-scenes of MC, so I hope the author will keep writing more than a thousand chapters, otherwise it will be boring to read quickly. To put it simply, the plot is too flat now.
It's well written and feels great. The collision of MC and the Middle Ages. But it looks like it's behind the scenes [thinking], the protagonist has been invisible for a long time [smile]
It's actually more than 30,000? Oh, looking forward to looking forward to it
When will this jar of grain become fine wine due to sedimentation?
Let's wait and see, I hope I won't have to wait too long. Give me four epochs of time (⩌⤚⩌)
Although, what does this have to do with MC? Moreover, the equipment and weapons are realistic, and there is too little to watch. It would be okay if the protagonist was a fun person, but he is not
It's pretty good, but not suitable for those who just want to watch MC.
This book spends a lot of time describing the impact of MC items in another medieval world. There is not much description of the protagonist. More descriptions are of the natives who obtained MC items. It should be regarded as a group portrait, right? The writing is good and the look and feel is good. Those who are interested will definitely be attracted to it.
There are some shortcomings, but in Tomato it doesn't matter.
To sum up, I think four points is more fair.
Isn't there too few pig's trotter scenes? [Cover face]
It's well written, don't stop updating it! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]
Overall, it's pretty good, but unfortunately, the protagonist's sense of presence is too low. Let's see if the protagonist will appear in front of others after the death of the Holy King this time.
Very good MC module fanfic [Chigua] [Bookshelf plus one]
Why did it break when it was so good? The preparation was obviously very good [crying]
It's okay, give him a good review.
It's pretty good-looking for now
I hope the protagonist has more roles
It's okay for someone like me who doesn't really care about the protagonist.
I read the scene where the wizard beat the Holy King to death. Will MC items appear on a large scale in the future? Will there be a drunken fox behind the author? I won't insist on mechanical power that doesn't fit in with the world view. Jiuhuhu should have it [smiles]
Not bad, I'll look at it again
Come on, come on, come on! ! !
I hope the protagonist can be given more roles. [Laughing]
If it can be temporary
It's so beautiful. Come on, author.
Well written, keep up the good work.
What I want is this mouth tooth
Looks pretty good so far
I rarely see books written like this. It's well written.
For the variant creation flow or the extraordinary invasion of the Middle Ages, it is best to increase the absolute dominance a little bit, but the rest is pretty good. The overall script is a bit fast-paced, including the MC original version which has too little impact. The unit narrative is a bit slow, and the distribution of priorities is not very good. However, the Mysterious Age has received good reviews. Although I am an adventure dog at the bottom of the MC players' disdain chain, it can be seen that I am either blindly working on machines (referring to mechanical power) or I have some ideas. Overall, 4 points, +1 for encouragement. And since the painting style is magical, I recommend Root Magic [laughing]
After watching it, MC + medieval + behind the scenes + extraordinary creation. Overall, it's pretty good, but the MC's plot and ingenuity are too little, and the protagonist hasn't shown up for a long time. And as a behind-the-scenes novel, the protagonist's arrangement and intervention are too little, and things are completely allowed to grow wildly.
I have read 21 chapters, and I feel it is very good so far. It is suitable for old bookworms to read. I consider myself a rather harsh critic, at least on Tomato, but I can't find anything wrong with this author at the moment. If I have to say something, I have some questions about military strength: How many people are needed to support 120 knights in a territory? From some data, it can be estimated that the kingdom has at least 20,000 standing troops. However, the data in this regard are not very outrageous. The author has an idea. Compared with some hundreds of thousands of troops attacking a small town, 1,000 armored knights cannot defeat 6,000 hungry mobs. The key advantage is that the character image is very three-dimensional. Just because he is an important character, he will not be treated like a native and a modern person, nor will the old king be labeled as a good person just because he restricted the nobles from helping the common people. The prince is brave and treats his subordinates well, but he turns a blind eye to the suffering at the bottom. This is the limitation of the times. After finally seeing a living person, the protagonist jumps from the sky impatiently, which makes the plot full of vitality. Just being able to look at things from the perspective of a character and think about what kind of environment can create such a person is already a first-class online writer! The subsequent story is a bit labeled
Some personal comments The protagonist of this book is a background board, and it is a big background board. The protagonist basically has no role. It is not a clone flow. The protagonist just hands over the magic and lets the magic grow wildly. Mc is not important. The protagonist just adds a MC module. There should be arcana and Song of Ice and Fire modules in the future. Personally, I feel that there should be ice and fire modules, because the dragons should also come out. Of course, it is just a personal idea. The protagonist will not interfere with the choice of characters. It will purely grow wildly and will not play anything. For example, if you create a few avatars to play the role of seniors in the occult, it won't work. The world view of MC will be disappointing, because the MC itself has no effect. The function is limited to magic, and it can be done without MC. The protagonist is one. The background version of the protagonist is not important, but the characters inside are important. After reading so many behind-the-scenes articles, this is the first time I have seen such a protagonist, but to me, it is still very good. If it is for MC, it may be disappointing, because the core is not related to MC. The core is magic and the Middle Ages. The protagonist does not show his face at all, and will only show up a few times in the previous plot. He will not interfere with the choice of characters. Personal evaluation should be able to give it a four-star rating. Overall, it is not bad. But I really like this series. I can give it five stars. After all, this is the first time that magic was introduced in the Middle Ages.
After watching it, it was very good. It gave me the feeling of raising all human beings. It is normal for the protagonist to appear less in this kind of rhythm. The negative comment in the comment area turned out to be this, which almost made me miss it. At present, the only online reading is only one thousand. There is no problem with the quality of one hundred thousand. Come on. No, buddy, are you going to stop updating now?
At present, this book can only be said to have a bright future. Although it is behind the scenes, the speed at which the protagonist obtains new modules is still too slow to speed up. You can not release them first, but hold them in your hands first to make the world more diverse. The modules in MC can be sorted out and split into small modules. Add some elixirs from Cultivation, ghosts from Mysterious Resurrection, some rules and ghost stories, things like those from Lord of Mysteries, ghost legends from various places, and some fate backgrounds. Anyway, Cthulhu, Harry Potter, these can be used for reference, and some small secret realms can be generated to diversify the main themes. Otherwise, the speed would be too slow and there would be too few elements and it would be easy for people to live in books. MC can use modules to be compatible with all things. In terms of plot, the Holy King chapter alone is a bit long. It can be seen that the author wants to write it in detail, but he can add foreshadowing in the early stage. If it is too detailed, it will be too long and people will not be able to read it. I feel like I want to continue reading. If I want it to be longer, I can list it separately, like some large-scale secret realm or something. I still like to watch the behind-the-scenes of MC, so I hope the author will keep writing more than a thousand chapters, otherwise it will be boring to read quickly. To put it simply, the plot is too flat now.
It's well written and feels great. The collision of MC and the Middle Ages. But it looks like it's behind the scenes [thinking], the protagonist has been invisible for a long time [smile]
It's actually more than 30,000? Oh, looking forward to looking forward to it When will this jar of grain become fine wine due to sedimentation? Let's wait and see, I hope I won't have to wait too long. Give me four epochs of time (⩌⤚⩌)
Although, what does this have to do with MC? Moreover, the equipment and weapons are realistic, and there is too little to watch. It would be okay if the protagonist was a fun person, but he is not
It's pretty good, but not suitable for those who just want to watch MC. This book spends a lot of time describing the impact of MC items in another medieval world. There is not much description of the protagonist. More descriptions are of the natives who obtained MC items. It should be regarded as a group portrait, right? The writing is good and the look and feel is good. Those who are interested will definitely be attracted to it. There are some shortcomings, but in Tomato it doesn't matter. To sum up, I think four points is more fair.
Isn't there too few pig's trotter scenes? [Cover face]
It's well written, don't stop updating it! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]
Overall, it's pretty good, but unfortunately, the protagonist's sense of presence is too low. Let's see if the protagonist will appear in front of others after the death of the Holy King this time.
Very good MC module fanfic [Chigua] [Bookshelf plus one] Why did it break when it was so good? The preparation was obviously very good [crying]
It's okay, give him a good review.
It's pretty good-looking for now
I hope the protagonist has more roles
It's okay for someone like me who doesn't really care about the protagonist.
I read the scene where the wizard beat the Holy King to death. Will MC items appear on a large scale in the future? Will there be a drunken fox behind the author? I won't insist on mechanical power that doesn't fit in with the world view. Jiuhuhu should have it [smiles]
Not bad, I'll look at it again
Come on, come on, come on! ! !
I hope the protagonist can be given more roles. [Laughing]
If it can be temporary
It's so beautiful. Come on, author.
Well written, keep up the good work.
What I want is this mouth tooth
Looks pretty good so far
I rarely see books written like this. It's well written.
Good
Fine! Come on, come on, come on, come on!