My family was about to go bankrupt, so I got drunk at a bar and was approached by Lu Yan, the largest tycoon in the region. "Stay with me. I'll take care of the Su family's affairs." I thought it was just a deal where everyone gets what they need, but he put on a positioning bracelet that couldn't be removed and locked it in a gold cage. Later I discovered that he wanted to trap not only my people, but also my rebellious heart.
Reader comments
The storyline is very smooth, there are no obvious problems with typos, both of them talk about some things, it is not embarrassing to lose control of emotions or unspeakable embarrassment, it makes people feel very comfortable, and the male protagonist has an IQ, not stupid, and the writing is not so blunt. The forced love is not visible so far. Overall, it gives me a comfortable feeling that I want to read and watch.
The writing is very delicate, and the overall look is very smooth. The first part is sour, and the second part is sweet. The plot is well connected. Some plots have loopholes. The introduction can be optimized and some tags added. Reading the introduction gave me a very vague feeling, which made me feel unsure😢I was especially afraid that the plot related to my thunder would fly into my face😶
The writing is very good, the introduction is too concise and there are no reviews. I really hesitated before reading it. The writing is very good, the characters are also good, and the plot has an inexplicable sense of a long and flowing stream. However, now that I see it, I still don't know why Mr. Lu did this. It feels like it is a big secret [Thoughts]
I feel that the writing is quite good, the emotions are delicate, and the plot is not cliché. I hope that the next direction of the story will not disappoint.
It's really well written, highly recommended
Not bad, wait for the update
Looks great, looking forward to updates
I found another treasure!
It's very delicately written, and it's different from many I've seen before. It's very nice.
The storyline is very smooth, there are no obvious problems with typos, both of them talk about some things, it is not embarrassing to lose control of emotions or unspeakable embarrassment, it makes people feel very comfortable, and the male protagonist has an IQ, not stupid, and the writing is not so blunt. The forced love is not visible so far. Overall, it gives me a comfortable feeling that I want to read and watch.
The writing is very delicate, and the overall look is very smooth. The first part is sour, and the second part is sweet. The plot is well connected. Some plots have loopholes. The introduction can be optimized and some tags added. Reading the introduction gave me a very vague feeling, which made me feel unsure😢I was especially afraid that the plot related to my thunder would fly into my face😶
The writing is very good, the introduction is too concise and there are no reviews. I really hesitated before reading it. The writing is very good, the characters are also good, and the plot has an inexplicable sense of a long and flowing stream. However, now that I see it, I still don't know why Mr. Lu did this. It feels like it is a big secret [Thoughts]
I feel that the writing is quite good, the emotions are delicate, and the plot is not cliché. I hope that the next direction of the story will not disappoint. It's really well written, highly recommended
Not bad, wait for the update
Looks great, looking forward to updates
I found another treasure!
It's very delicately written, and it's different from many I've seen before. It's very nice.