Western Fantasy Lord: Starting from the Contract Original Sin Girl

The plot is a bit old-fashioned, but it can avoid lightning, collect and push quickly, and can be given a punch.

It's a very good novel, the writing is smooth, and the pacing has been controlled so far. The description of the relationship with the heroine is a bit rough (there are also literal meanings), but it is a harem novel after all, and the heroine's image is actually quite three-dimensional. The author often writes about some psychological activities of ladies. So far, the plot concept and some of the plans implemented by the hero seem to be very logical (I haven't done much research on the actual situation), and it gives a good impression.

What retro? For me, who only came into contact with online writing in the 1920s, it can be considered a novelty. Besides, the author's writing is not bad, it's fun to eat meat, and the character creation is also okay, but the dialogue between the characters is a bit galgame style [Thinking]

They say the plot is cliche, but I think it's okay. It can tell the story clearly, which is much better than many books that don't know what they are called.

I just eat meat in the first few chapters, the plot is retro, it's okay to watch as a little emperor's uncle

Come on, it's interesting to write

Liangcao, I read the latest chapter in one go, it's not enough. The plot is okay, not that cliche, and there are still some novelties in the middle plot. It was very enjoyable to read, like watching an anime. I hope the story will become more and more exciting in the future.

It's pretty good, good luck to the author

Why does the comment section say retro? What does it mean [laughing][laughing]

He is a pure royal uncle, good-looking!

I always feel like I'm going to be menaced if I fly too fast.

Wow, quite an interesting plot.

Not bad, delicious, you must live [shy] What a fairy [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I can read the writing, which is pretty good. After a few days of brushing, the tomatoes were almost poisoned. There are too many AI articles recently.

God within God, ram within ram

The author is also an old foodie

Eat fast and eat a lot. I have eaten three so far. I didn't see any poisonous spots either.

A pretty good book

Is this the type to let go of that witch?

It's okay. I haven't seen the genre before. They are all succubi.

Anbenar, this is [blowing kiss]

Come on, write about Liu Bei's big brother [Adoration]

Very pretty. Eat the pig's feet as you should, without stains or stress.

It's a pretty good handmade work. The plot is smooth and the theme is smooth. I can give it four points. However, it lacks story and conflict. It's a bit bland to read. The characters' dialogues account for slightly more. In addition, it's purely handmade.

It's very good, and it has clear priorities. It should be written carefully and shouldn't be written too fast and excessively. It surpasses 98% of the authors.

Updated once a day. I can watch it again in half a year [face covering]

Come on, the work is beautiful

The reincarnation of the ninth-level and eighth-level alien demon is very comfortable to read.