[Girls' Love? Girls' Love!][Pure][Writing Whatever I Dream About][Battle-Focused][Spellcasting Crazy Girl/Magical Girl][1v1]
[The quality of Volume 3 is lower because, after working solo for too long, I considered switching to a different book. Volumes 1, 2, and 3 make up the first run; Volume 4 onward is the second run.]
[The rating has just appeared and may drop further. Read with caution.]
As a self-destructive anime girl, Kujo Chiyuki had always wanted to enjoy a beautiful romance during her youth.
Little did she know that after her dearest friend, Rukawa Mahiru, became a magical girl for her sake, Mahiru would unexpectedly grow distant.
After day upon day of anguish, just before she finally broke, Chiyuki chose to fake her death and disappear for a million years.
“But why do I still want to be by your side...”
She wanted to go back, but then she realized...
She was already drifting further and further away.
Amid the suffering caused by her illness, she fell alone into the abyss.
Until that moment...
“I'm sorry, my friend... I can only die in such a wretched state...”
That day, the girl wept bitterly amid the ruins.
Then, in her madness...
She embarked on a cycle that would happen only once, but demanded that she save as many people as she possibly could.
“I'm sorry. This time... I won't leave. I'll protect you...”
“Then why did you keep it from me?”
“Don't you have things you're hiding from me, too?”
“At least... now I'm yours.”
“We'll belong to each other...”
“So... my friend... become a hero... carry on with what I couldn't do... and keep moving forward.”
“I can't accept a future without you! Even if I become a hero, I want you by my side!”
I love you. It's been a long, long time since I've read a magical girl novel with such a positive taste. For me, it's really to my liking. The twisted emotions in front of it are so delicious, it's not even a harem. It's so sweet. I'm full.
It's an interesting book, but it feels too AI-heavy. If you have time, I suggest you reset the paragraphs. For example, "It's not... It's..." And other descriptions can be changed. The classic AI writing method, once or twice is fine, but in some chapters or more chapters, this kind of description is too much in the text. Even if it is a spoken word description, it will not be used so much, which will affect the perception. 👍
The front is better, and the middle is okay, but I am really, really curious about the fact that Chiyuki and Mizuki are the same person and have the same consciousness. Mahiru later confirmed it to Chiyuki, so I don't think there is any problem with Mahiru having close contact with Mio. But Mahiru saw Mizuki again at the second week. Mahiru believed that Mizuki was a separate person with a separate consciousness. After Mian and Mahiru told Mahiru that Mahiru was overdrafted, Mahiru had been avoiding Chiyuki and asked Mio for what he wanted. The author said that something went wrong with Mahiru, so I will continue to read it later. But in my opinion, Mahiru's behavior can be considered a poisonous point, with both emotional and physical problems. Even if Chiyuki Nisume and Mizuki are the same person, from Mahiru's perspective, they are two people who look similar. After reading a new chapter, Mio's description becomes more and more like an independent consciousness [Petrification]. As for Mahiru's behavior and thoughts in these two chapters, it seems to be influenced by something similar to the "original work". It may be related to the multi-world line or the system. I have reservations and hope that the author can come back. But I still feel disgusted by Mahiru's behavior. Stay on the 15th, [Petrochemical] and the masters, now tell me that Chiyuki peeked at Mio and Mahiru CCB, I have no choice.
The twisting and twisting emotions in the early stage are delicious. Although the fourth volume has changed, I still love reading this chapter. The author is complex and has a lot of jokes, but some of them are a bit abrupt. Why have all the barrages at the back disappeared? I still want to see their words of gods and gods.
Broken touch keys, hand shake, accidental touch, low frame rate, high latency, bottleneck period, no feel or mentality, no state, just woke up, no stand, tired, no radiator, frame freeze, dropped frames, cold hands, sweaty hands, too noisy, delivery arrived, hands frozen, going to the toilet, misjudgment, casual play, I didn't wear finger gloves in class, didn't wear headphones, the screen was too slippery, the phone was too hot, I had tenosynovitis, the weather was too cold, the opponent cheated I haven't played for a long time. My mother called me. The headset is out of battery. The low battery prompt has not changed. The sensitivity has not changed. I am the first to go online. I just returned and can't play. There is a problem with the buttons. I can't hear the sound on the phone. The skin feels bad. Charging affects my performance. Someone called me. Someone sent me a message and accidentally clicked on it. I am not familiar with the new keys. I typed while eating. I was just replying to a message. I am so noisy here and have shoulder pain after sitting for a long time. My phone is not as easy to use as a tablet. A hacker just called me and broke the touch button. My hands are shaking. Accidental touch, low frame rate, high latency
The book is very good, and the love story of the two heroines is also very good. I rarely comment, but now I comment to support the author's great creation. A book ends easily, but a good story never ends. I hope the story can be complete and the two heroines can have a beautiful future and love❤️ Heehee❍⩊❍
I have spent a serious day reading this book. Personally, I feel that it is very awkward. I still prefer the first three volumes. I thought it was good before the fourth volume, but I didn't want to read it at the beginning. Although there are many daily emotions, it always felt a bit awkward. After reading the fourth volume, I felt that the separation between the protagonists in the front and the back was really big. It felt much worse than the next one. However, it can maintain continuous updates. It is barely feasible to use it as a meal replacement without that update. Then Afterwards, after the barrage and live streaming disappeared, I felt that the taste had gone down a notch. If it had stayed the same as the first three volumes, I could still watch it even if the plot was repeated. Maybe it was because the writing quality of Death Return Next Door was a little too high, and I am a bit picky when reading books now. Although it is indeed a plot that normal people would do, it always feels like something is missing. So what are the names of the author's other platforms? There is a shortage of books, and I want to taste some high-quality books.
Any Chiyuki will be miserable because of Mahiru, and any Mahiru will be miserable because of Chiyuki. This kind of scene is very common in this world, and you may be next, unless you can prove to Qianxue that you have deep love for her. So join the book club and enjoy this delicious food.
It's very beautiful, but I have a little ingenious idea whether I can make Mahiru correct it. I feel a little guilty, and then the flames will burn me, thinking I am atonement😋😋😋😋
The plot line needs to be optimized and the time correlation is not strong. It can even be said that a new good book can be produced by changing the name. However, the writing style is very sweet, the emotional line is appropriate and soft, the two little characters interact pleasantly in the second part, the theme is novel, there are many jokes interspersed in the first part, and the second part is exciting. All in all, the dps is high, the rotation is fast, the mechanism is hard to say, the survival can be maxed out, and the super big cup is given.