
My Little Pony: The First Step to Becoming a Palworld Master!
小马宝莉:第一步成为帕鲁大师!
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 428k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
133Chapters
5.9kReads
8.0Score
798Shelves
857Listens
36.7kReads · all time
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There's a Huge Gap in the My Little Pony Section
How has no one written about centaurs? Setting aside the main elements, the centaur plot and character designs are outstanding, and even the writing is excellent. Is this really such a niche subject in the horse-girl community? I've searched several places and found nothing about centaurs. This is infuriating!
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My Little Pony: Male Protagonist, Transmigrator, and No Dropped Updates
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Tomato's My Little Pony Stories Are Dead
New writers really do have lots of inspiration, but there's just too much dross among it. Recommend some good My Little Pony fanfics by new writers.
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Are There Any My Little Pony Stories With a Male Protagonist?
Looking for book recommendations.
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Anyone Have My Little Pony: From the Start, Shocking Ponyville? I Can't Find It Anywhere Lately
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Any Good My Little Pony Fanfiction? (இωஇ )
Looking for books similar to "My Little Pony: I'm Just an Ordinary Pony".
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Reader comments 47
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It feels much better than the previous two books. Sure enough, after slowing down the pace of the plot, the characters become more vivid and full [I learned] More plots involving humans interacting with ponies, Hermes likes to see this 🥰
As of Chapter 15, it is undoubtedly the top grade fairy grass. From the run-in with Applejack at the beginning, to the presentation of various characters, and the problems the griffins will face in the future, the ponies are all working hard for life, being vigilant, and having little thoughts in order to make more money. It doesn't feel OOC, but it has a down-to-earth sense of reality, which makes me feel that they are alive and living, rather than a character on a stage play. Regarding the protagonist's ability, I like it very much. This ensures that m6 will not become a "vase" and everything will be solved by the protagonist. If possible, I even hope that the protagonist is just a weak trainer, relying more on Pokémon, interacting more with M6, and the protagonist can assist in releasing skills. People are probably more willing to see m6 work together to show their initiative. Moreover, the skill brings a sense of anticipation, and I have already started to think about where Pinkamina will use it. The rhythm is not tight, allowing me to feel the laughter, but it is not lacking in urgency and is too "joyful" to be real. It is a comfortable state. In short, it may be affected by personal taste, but if the level can be maintained, it is a good book.
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Children, I want to watch education and training [Chigua]
Yes, regardless of whether it is AI or not, the subject matter is novel and the writing is not bad, especially the aspects that are different from other fan fictions. For example, the protagonist insists on reviving mankind and uses the contrast of the paru ball, which makes me enjoy watching it.
It feels very good, but there are a few small problems. The first is that there are too few, and the second is that the updates are slow. There are only a few new books, and they are updated every day. Although there are occasional bursts of updates, they will occasionally stop updating. It's not enough to watch at all. Currently, so many photos of Applejack have almost reached the point of increasing my favorability. I don't know when I'm going to put them in my mouth.
Recommended, but I still don't understand the world view. It's the first time I've seen this type of pony novel. Is it considered a combination of collecting and cultivating, territory management, and horse riding and slashing? If it is true, the potential is really great.
It feels quite good, but it may not look good at the beginning, because the protagonist seems not that good at the beginning, but it gradually gets better later. It is just a process of growth. It's okay. I hope the author can continue to update it. [Bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one]🥰🥰 That's the baby dragon. I don't like that baby dragon very much. The author must not be confused and write randomly. 🤦 I think it's still very good-looking, but it's just not enough. I feel like I finished it again in one go. It's really good [Thoughts]
The overall content is good. For most of the bad reviews in the comment area, I actually think they don't have much impact, because there are good explanations in the article, and it doesn't seem too obtrusive. The reasons for the content are reasonable and not too far-fetched. However, the first few chapters are a bit boring. You can consider skipping the first few chapters. The rest of the book is basically very good.
The special Pony Story is refreshing. It is different from the many previous ones that simply wrote anime stories. I incorporated my own ideas, modified the plot, incorporated it, and created my own story. People will not be bored when seeing familiar things, and they will not directly think of the latter. The plot of the anime was not modified according to the plot of the anime. It is always good hay, and all ponies can come and taste it together.