[Gender Swap] + [Girls’ Love] + [A touch of System] + [Lighthearted]
There’s no career plotline. There’s a secondary couple, and a tiny bit of yandere behavior, but it’s very mild.
Just before sophomore year began, an unforeseen event caused Su Che, a boy with a feminine appearance, to become a girl through and through.
From his perspective, he kept hiding the truth and testing the waters, waiting for the right moment to come clean.
But what he didn’t know was that one evening
Roommate: “Old Su, did you turn into a girl?”
Su: “What are you talking about? I don’t understand.”
Smack, a chart was slapped against his face, documenting all the changes.
Su: “How am I supposed to live with a bust?”
The day before his childhood sweetheart’s birthday
His childhood sweetheart gazed up at him from his arms, tears in her eyes. “Su, is there something you’re hiding from me?”
“N-no, of course not. How could I hide anything from you?”
His childhood sweetheart immediately lifted his outer shirt. “Then what’s this?”
Su: “??? How am I supposed to live with a chest like this???”
“Su~ I learned a new hairstyle. Let me do your hair.”
“Su~ My cat just learned to do a backflip. Come see!”
“Su~ I learned something new from a novel. Hehe~~~~”
Su: “Where’s the quiet, sweet childhood friend I used to know?”
“Don’t come any closer, damn it!!!”
I still have to be pretty and give myself a five-star rating (⃔ *`꒳´ * )⃕↝ I will talk about this book later, so you can use this to avoid lightning. This is my first novel in the true sense. The short stories I wrote in high school do not count, because they are just novels. The plot may be different from the quick training of other transformation novels. I prefer to go step by step and write the self-righteous pull. I want to try to create some characters (maybe I am more suitable for romance novels.). The overall pace is fast or slow. In fact, I don't know yet. There is no career line or villain. I just want to write a couple of CPs. I didn't expect this book to have any success. The two girls of Tomato are not popular, let alone the transformation. I wrote it at first to satisfy my own xp. Later, I found that there are people who have been reading it and urging me to update it. Gradually, I continued to write it not just for myself. I hope readers who have been reading it can leave a message if they have any questions. As long as it can be modified, I will definitely change it. Thank you everyone.~\(≧▽≦)/~
It's a classic white text. It can be seen that the author has quite some ideas, but the overall rhythm is too confusing. Say it here, say it there, and one thing will become the next thing before it is finished. Here are my little suggestions. Those descriptions of the environment you wrote, people The description of the character is very good, you can keep it appropriately and treat it as your own characteristics, but this is a web article. If you describe it too much, it will make people feel very draggy. There is also the pair of deputy CPs of Xi Yue. After just talking about it for a while, it goes to another scene, and the protagonist is dressed as a woman, and then The paragraph that the two deputy CPs watched, too much description was given to the deputy CP, and it seemed too delayed. This paragraph should be a turning point in the physical and mental transformation of the protagonist. It is best to mainly write about the protagonist. If you want to write about the deputy CP, I think it is best to wait for the protagonist's plot. Start writing when it is completely finished. It is best to mention only one or two words at the beginning. In addition, don't always think about what to express. Think more about how to make readers understand your expression. Read it twice after each chapter is written. It seems to me that this book of yours is very laborious. Finally, come on, give me five stars for encouragement. The new author has done a great job writing like this.
So pretty and so red😋😋😋
It looks good, cheers, author^0^~
I found a good book, it's really good
Hit all the XP 🧐🧐
There are also classic men's dormitories 🙂🙂
It looks great😁 but can the author add punctuation? It really affects the viewing experience. There are no punctuation marks and I have no idea what it is about. I have to read it several times. Thanks
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