[System] + [Multiple Heroines] + [Rebellious Disciple Who Seduces His Master] + [No NTR] + [Feel-Good Story] + [The Master Is on the Cover]
Jun Yi, disciple of the head of the Hanyun Sword Sect, has a very good habit...
“I, Jun Yi, hate wasting things. I always make sure to finish every last grain of rice in my bowl.”
He never expected anyone to discover this good habit of his!
All Jun Yi can say is...
I'm already numb to it!
Fortunately, at the critical moment, Jun Yi awakens a System.
The System tells him:
[Tonight, cultivators from the Yin-Yang Pavilion will sneak into the Hanyun Sword Sect to commit misdeeds, but your master will discover them.]
[Your master will be caught off guard and poisoned with the Nine-Turn Love Poison. Her cultivation will fall, and her mind will become clouded.]
Jun Yi immediately realizes his chance has come.
“Dear Master, as your beloved disciple, I naturally have nothing to hold back. I shall...”
“...teach you everything I know.”
(The blurb doesn't do it justice. Please read the story.)
Jun Yi glanced at him meaningfully, patted his shoulder, and the smile on his lips became wider. "Okay, you go first, I'll be behind you." 666 🙂 🙂 🙂 666
The plot is good, and the relationship with the master is reasonably deep, but the title is multiple heroines. The author can introduce a new heroine appropriately to deepen the relationship. After all, the master is arrogant and cold, so she must clearly understand her feelings for the protagonist and further deepen the relationship between the two. Great support for the author [please update] [top post] [bird food masterpiece] [plus one on bookshelf]
😏 The interaction between master and disciple in this book is very good. The description of the relationship between master and disciple is the best among the many master-disciple books I have read. Why, because many books actually develop feelings over time, from coercion to attachment. This book can be considered the same, but the one difference is that the master originally had feelings for the protagonist. There is a plot in the middle where it is said that the master looked at the protagonist's Pure Yang Holy Body and sealed it because he was afraid that he could not bear to eat it. This is not a so-called coincidence between two people who were originally unrelated, but a breaking of the emotional ice between master and disciple. The protagonist's daily care and maintenance, as well as the fact that he almost died in order to help the master suppress a breakthrough, were all seen by the master. Even if the love poison was gone, the protagonist never used the master-servant contract again. The details here are really perfect. Oh yes, and the handling of the so-called "protagonist" Xiao Chen is also very perfect. I thought I would let him go, and then watch the default heroine interact with him. It is not disgusting, but the times are too long and it is poisonous. I didn't expect that after dealing with the master's affairs, he killed Yan Ji on the spot in the dungeon, and then subdued Yan Ji. Really, a lot of the author's handling of this book was written in my heart. Then after praising me, I also talked about my expectations. One is that I hope that future heroines will not be second-hand, and the second is that I hope that the author can maintain his awareness of lightning protection. Come on
First reward yourself with a 5 star. 🙂🙂 Welcome all foster parents' comments. If you have any deficiencies, feel free to point them out. The author will learn lessons and gradually improve [Salute][Salute]💕💕
Not much to say, exciting [laughs evilly]. But the protagonist feels like he will be trampled to death at any time. I still need to strengthen it [laughs evilly]
If there is a lot of interaction between master and disciple, it will look good 😘😘
Yes, yes, yes, it's just that the work can be updated ten times a day [salute] 🤦
If the author wants to score points, by the way, is there any metaphor behind eating every grain of rice in the introduction? The characters are bad and the plot is old-fashioned
Okay, okay, the author's writing is very good 😘, but if it can be updated ten times a day, it's not enough [I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend]
Why is it similar to the one by Mu Yuyunjian? What's the relationship between you two? 🙂