System+Multiple Female Protagonists+Teacher and Disciple+No Green+Refreshing Article+Cover Is Master
As a disciple of the leader of Hanyun Sword Sect, Jun Yi has a very good habit...
"I, Jun Yi, don't like wasting anything. I often eat every grain of rice in the bowl."
Unexpectedly, his good habit was discovered!
Jun Yi just wants to say...
I'm already paralyzed!
Fortunately, Jun Yi awakened the system at the critical moment.
The system told him:
[Tonight, the Yin Yang Pavilion monks will sneak into the Hanyun Sword Sect to commit evil acts, but they will be discovered by their master.
[Master accidentally fell into the poison of the ninth level of love. At that time, his cultivation level will fall and his consciousness will become blurred.
Jun Yi immediately realized that his opportunity had come.
"Good Master, as your beloved disciple, I naturally cannot have any reservations. I will definitely..."
"Teach everything you have."
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(The introduction is too weak, please move to the text)
Reader comments
Jun Yi glanced at him meaningfully, patted his shoulder, and the smile on his lips became wider.
"Okay, you go first, I'll be behind you."
666[Smile][smile][smile][smile]666
The plot is good, and the relationship with the master is reasonably deep, but the title is multiple heroines. The author can introduce a new heroine appropriately to deepen the relationship. After all, the master is arrogant and cold, so she must clearly understand her feelings for the protagonist and further deepen the relationship between the two. Great support for the author [please update] [top post] [bird food masterpiece] [plus one on bookshelf]
[Laughing evilly] The interaction between master and disciple in this book is very good. The description of the relationship between master and disciple is the best among the many master-disciple books I have read. Why, because many books actually develop feelings over time, from coercion to attachment. This book can be considered the same, but the one difference is that the master originally had feelings for the protagonist. There is a plot in the middle where it is said that the master looked at the protagonist's Pure Yang Holy Body and sealed it because he was afraid that he could not bear to eat it. This is not a so-called coincidence between two people who were originally unrelated, but a breaking of the emotional ice between master and disciple. The protagonist's daily care and maintenance, as well as the fact that he almost died in order to help the master suppress a breakthrough, were all seen by the master. Even if the love poison was gone, the protagonist never used the master-servant contract again. The details here are really perfect. Oh yes, and the handling of the so-called "protagonist" Xiao Chen is also very perfect. I thought I would let him go, and then watch the default heroine interact with him. It is not disgusting, but the times are too long and it is poisonous. I didn't expect that after dealing with the master's affairs, he killed Yan Ji on the spot in the dungeon, and then subdued Yan Ji. Really, a lot of the author's handling of this book was written in my heart. Then after praising me, I also talked about my expectations. One is that I hope that future heroines will not be second-hand, and the second is that I hope that the author can maintain his awareness of lightning protection. Come on
First reward yourself with a 5 star. [Smile][smile]
Welcome all foster parents to comment. If you have any shortcomings, feel free to point them out. The author will learn lessons and gradually improve [Salute][Salute][Send heart][Send heart]
Yes, yes, yes, it's just that the work can be updated ten times a day [salute] [face covering]
If there is a lot of interaction between master and disciple, it will look good [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
If the author wants to score points, by the way, is there any metaphor behind eating every grain of rice in the introduction?
The characters are bad and the plot is old-fashioned
Why is it similar to the one by Mu Yuyunjian? What's the relationship between you two? [Smile]
The author's writing is very to my liking, keep it up [sending my heart][sending my heart]
Not much to say, exciting [laughs evilly]. But the protagonist feels like he will be trampled to death at any time. I still need to strengthen it [laughs evilly]
Good book, but you have to drive at a steady speed
Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle
Good-looking authors should never be eunuchs
Hahahahahaha
Damn, it's really good, but there are too few of them. The author should update it quickly, it's really good!
The plot is fast-paced and super interesting
The plot at the beginning was too frustrating, but later on it was okay [please update]
It's very beautiful, with rustling, plot, and emotions.
Okay, okay, the author's writing is very good [blowing kiss], but if it can be updated ten times a day, it's not enough [I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend]
Jun Yi glanced at him meaningfully, patted his shoulder, and the smile on his lips became wider. "Okay, you go first, I'll be behind you." 666[Smile][smile][smile][smile]666
The plot is good, and the relationship with the master is reasonably deep, but the title is multiple heroines. The author can introduce a new heroine appropriately to deepen the relationship. After all, the master is arrogant and cold, so she must clearly understand her feelings for the protagonist and further deepen the relationship between the two. Great support for the author [please update] [top post] [bird food masterpiece] [plus one on bookshelf]
[Laughing evilly] The interaction between master and disciple in this book is very good. The description of the relationship between master and disciple is the best among the many master-disciple books I have read. Why, because many books actually develop feelings over time, from coercion to attachment. This book can be considered the same, but the one difference is that the master originally had feelings for the protagonist. There is a plot in the middle where it is said that the master looked at the protagonist's Pure Yang Holy Body and sealed it because he was afraid that he could not bear to eat it. This is not a so-called coincidence between two people who were originally unrelated, but a breaking of the emotional ice between master and disciple. The protagonist's daily care and maintenance, as well as the fact that he almost died in order to help the master suppress a breakthrough, were all seen by the master. Even if the love poison was gone, the protagonist never used the master-servant contract again. The details here are really perfect. Oh yes, and the handling of the so-called "protagonist" Xiao Chen is also very perfect. I thought I would let him go, and then watch the default heroine interact with him. It is not disgusting, but the times are too long and it is poisonous. I didn't expect that after dealing with the master's affairs, he killed Yan Ji on the spot in the dungeon, and then subdued Yan Ji. Really, a lot of the author's handling of this book was written in my heart. Then after praising me, I also talked about my expectations. One is that I hope that future heroines will not be second-hand, and the second is that I hope that the author can maintain his awareness of lightning protection. Come on
First reward yourself with a 5 star. [Smile][smile] Welcome all foster parents to comment. If you have any shortcomings, feel free to point them out. The author will learn lessons and gradually improve [Salute][Salute][Send heart][Send heart]
Yes, yes, yes, it's just that the work can be updated ten times a day [salute] [face covering]
If there is a lot of interaction between master and disciple, it will look good [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
If the author wants to score points, by the way, is there any metaphor behind eating every grain of rice in the introduction? The characters are bad and the plot is old-fashioned
Why is it similar to the one by Mu Yuyunjian? What's the relationship between you two? [Smile]
The author's writing is very to my liking, keep it up [sending my heart][sending my heart]
Not much to say, exciting [laughs evilly]. But the protagonist feels like he will be trampled to death at any time. I still need to strengthen it [laughs evilly]
Good book, but you have to drive at a steady speed
Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle
Good-looking authors should never be eunuchs
Hahahahahaha
Damn, it's really good, but there are too few of them. The author should update it quickly, it's really good!
The plot is fast-paced and super interesting
The plot at the beginning was too frustrating, but later on it was okay [please update]
It's very beautiful, with rustling, plot, and emotions.
Okay, okay, the author's writing is very good [blowing kiss], but if it can be updated ten times a day, it's not enough [I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend]