Type-Moon: The French Demon Swordsman

The writing is too messy. I understand that the author wants to leave suspense, but since this is a novel, not an anime, or a TV series, interspersing it like this will not enhance the perception! It just makes people feel very baffled. One second the protagonist is still doing housework, and the next second he goes into memories... Why? Just go into memories? And either write down the reason why the protagonist starts to reminisce, or write these things in the prologue or something like that, and then run away to reminisce inexplicably, going here and there, and the people who read it are confused.

Come on, author, keep writing.

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Beautiful, Smecta.