[No CP, Female Protagonist's POV, Old Belial's Human Host, Cosmic Horror]
When “They” arrived as a virus called “perception,” Lin Ye Nai became the sole orphan of that universe.
The first attempt ended in utter defeat for humanity, the Ultramen, and that universe. Nothing remained except her.
She was lucky, special enough to be taken in by that dazzling light. Gradually falling silent, she set out on the same path her parents had walked.
Explore. Break through. Lock the poison known as “the unknowable” deep inside her mind.
The first attempt was called “being forced.” Her parents locked away everything she had and sent her to Earth, sacrificing an entire universe in exchange for her growth and a chance to survive.
The second attempt was called “parting.” Once again, she forced herself to say goodbye, stumbling as she shattered herself and left the land of light that had contained all her madness and loneliness. Accompanied by an Ultraman she had accidentally saved, she tried to save Earth, which had also been invaded, but failed once more.
The third attempt was called “hope.” Smiling faintly, she rested her chin in her hand and, all alone, watched the people create a third miracle.
“Look, we kept Them here.”
“Look, in the end, we still managed to save something.”
After reading it, the plot is very good and the ideas are good, but it is too big, the world view is too big, and the battlefield is also huge. It is okay to start at full level, and it is okay to intersperse in reverse order, but it is not very good when mixed with the main plot, which makes me often think about whether this paragraph is about the present, the past, or whether to remember and kill. If you want to write about memories of killing and a savior who has gone through a lot, you can read the plot slices of the Beng San Paradise Chapter or the Apokales Chapter or the Beng Tie Na Bai Kai Chapter, or separate them in the form of secret words at the beginning and end of the chapter. I still don't really understand it. In the beginning, the heroine was Lan Ao, and her parents sent people to protect the earth, and then everyone was wiped out? The second world is the main line Geed world. They pretended to be autistic for 6000 years, became black and committed suicide, walked next door and abducted Bai Bei, experienced the total destruction and collapse of the second world and drove Bai Bei back. They came to the third world Guangmei, experienced another group destruction, and returned to the Geed world line and the world line became a mess.
After reading it, the plot is very good and the ideas are good, but it is too big, the world view is too big, and the battlefield is also huge. It is okay to start at full level, and it is okay to intersperse in reverse order, but it is not very good when mixed with the main plot, which makes me often think about whether this paragraph is about the present, the past, or whether to remember and kill. If you want to write about memories of killing and a savior who has gone through a lot, you can read the plot slices of the Beng San Paradise Chapter or the Apokales Chapter or the Beng Tie Na Bai Kai Chapter, or separate them in the form of secret words at the beginning and end of the chapter. I still don't really understand it. In the beginning, the heroine was Lan Ao, and her parents sent people to protect the earth, and then everyone was wiped out? The second world is the main line Geed world. They pretended to be autistic for 6000 years, became black and committed suicide, walked next door and abducted Bai Bei, experienced the total destruction and collapse of the second world and drove Bai Bei back. They came to the third world Guangmei, experienced another group destruction, and returned to the Geed world line and the world line became a mess.