[No cp, female protagonist's perspective, Lao Bei's human body, restrained system]
When a certain virus called "cognition" came, Lin Yenai became the only orphan in the universe.
In the first attempt, humans, Ultraman and the universe were defeated, and there was nothing left except her.
She was lucky enough and special enough to be taken in by that bright light and gradually silently walked on the path her parents had walked.
Explore, break, and lock the "poison" called the unknown in your mind.
The first attempt was called Forced. She was locked away by her parents and thrown to the earth, using a piece of the universe as a sacrifice in exchange for her growth, experimentation and survival.
The second attempt was called farewell. She once again forced herself to say goodbye, staggered to pieces, and left the country called light that housed all her madness and loneliness. She was accompanied by a certain Ultraman who was accidentally rescued by her. She tried to save the earth that had also come to Earth, but it still ended in failure.
The third attempt was called hope. She chuckled and held her chin, witnessing alone as people recreated the third miracle.
—Look, we left Him behind.
——Look, we saved something after all.
Reader comments
After reading it, the plot is very good and the ideas are good, but it is too big, the world view is too big, and the battlefield is also huge. It is okay to start at full level, and it is okay to intersperse in reverse order, but it is not very good when mixed with the main plot, which makes me often think about whether this paragraph is about the present, the past, or whether to remember and kill. If you want to write about memories of killing and a savior who has gone through a lot, you can read the plot slices of the Beng San Paradise Chapter or the Apokales Chapter or the Beng Tie Na Bai Kai Chapter, or separate them in the form of secret words at the beginning and end of the chapter. I still don't really understand it. In the beginning, the heroine was Lan Ao, and her parents sent people to protect the earth, and then everyone was wiped out? The second world is the main line Geed world. They pretended to be autistic for 6000 years, became black and committed suicide, walked next door and abducted Bai Bei, experienced the total destruction and collapse of the second world and drove Bai Bei back. They came to the third world Guangmei, experienced another group destruction, and returned to the Geed world line and the world line became a mess.
After reading it, the plot is very good and the ideas are good, but it is too big, the world view is too big, and the battlefield is also huge. It is okay to start at full level, and it is okay to intersperse in reverse order, but it is not very good when mixed with the main plot, which makes me often think about whether this paragraph is about the present, the past, or whether to remember and kill. If you want to write about memories of killing and a savior who has gone through a lot, you can read the plot slices of the Beng San Paradise Chapter or the Apokales Chapter or the Beng Tie Na Bai Kai Chapter, or separate them in the form of secret words at the beginning and end of the chapter. I still don't really understand it. In the beginning, the heroine was Lan Ao, and her parents sent people to protect the earth, and then everyone was wiped out? The second world is the main line Geed world. They pretended to be autistic for 6000 years, became black and committed suicide, walked next door and abducted Bai Bei, experienced the total destruction and collapse of the second world and drove Bai Bei back. They came to the third world Guangmei, experienced another group destruction, and returned to the Geed world line and the world line became a mess.