Hou Ji traveled through Douluo and became the grandson of Sword Douluo Chenxin. He had been training outside since childhood. When he returned to the Killing City, he happened to catch up with the conflict between his childhood sweetheart Ning Rongrong and Dai Mubai...
Reader comments
I feel that the plot of this book is well written. This is my feeling after reading the latest chapter. And it can be seen that the author has really read, or read the novel Douluo Dalu, and there is no mention of the situation where the names are not right and the characters are wrong. And seeing it now, what I want to say is that he should be the single heroine Ning Rongrong. I'm not sure about this either. Besides, it's okay to push the love lines, but not that much. Maybe there are fewer love lines. I suggest the author add more love lines. It may also be because I have read so many novels and he prefers the female protagonist to the male protagonist. He is very possessive of the male protagonist, but he has not written that kind of feeling. There is a bit of mutual affection, and I feel that the male protagonist has not been there so far. , There is no love between men and women for the heroine, it feels like only the heroine likes the hero, but I feel that this is not all bad, from another perspective, it may not be very important. And I think the whole book is very worth reading. The male protagonist has the best personality among the many novels I have read. He has a very youthful spirit. Finally, I hope that if the author can add eroticism, I hope to add a little emotional line. If I can't add it, don't force it. I write it according to the author's ideas. I feel that it is already very good.
I feel that the plot of this book is well written. This is my feeling after reading the latest chapter. And it can be seen that the author has really read, or read the novel Douluo Dalu, and there is no mention of the situation where the names are not right and the characters are wrong. And seeing it now, what I want to say is that he should be the single heroine Ning Rongrong. I'm not sure about this either. Besides, it's okay to push the love lines, but not that much. Maybe there are fewer love lines. I suggest the author add more love lines. It may also be because I have read so many novels and he prefers the female protagonist to the male protagonist. He is very possessive of the male protagonist, but he has not written that kind of feeling. There is a bit of mutual affection, and I feel that the male protagonist has not been there so far. , There is no love between men and women for the heroine, it feels like only the heroine likes the hero, but I feel that this is not all bad, from another perspective, it may not be very important. And I think the whole book is very worth reading. The male protagonist has the best personality among the many novels I have read. He has a very youthful spirit. Finally, I hope that if the author can add eroticism, I hope to add a little emotional line. If I can't add it, don't force it. I write it according to the author's ideas. I feel that it is already very good.