Beng Tie: I've Only Died a Few Times, How Come I've Become a Yandere?

Finally it's the part I'm most interested in. Being a girl is right, yandere is right, mid-level acting is right, and I don't like her is right [laughs]

I feel that there are no shortcomings except that Feng Jin has been changed to be a bit gloomy and not in line with the original character. However, this change is understandable. After all, if it is not like this, the second mission will probably wait until the pioneers come to Ompharos.

First of all, let me explain that I deducted one star because the protagonist was tortured so badly that I cried several times and was stabbed to death! Tears are shed with caution! Generally speaking, the writing is very detailed, and the characters' personalities are not very OOC. The focus is basically on advancement and the emotions of the characters. The plot is only a driving force, and the protagonist is weak in fighting. But I think the third generation should have some fighting ability. The first and second lives are both well written. The second life is obviously the first one in the novels I wrote before, but this time it has a lot of details and it is also a real knife. And if you look at each story individually, the protagonist is a true pure love [face covering] Pure love can be combined with the harem. I look forward to the Shura field in the future. I have only written a few chapters of the third life so far, and I feel that it should be in line with the main plot. Does this mean that this life will be the last? Or maybe there will be memories interspersed in the middle, so you can look forward to the follow-up. Finally, I would like to comment on the second life. I have read He Xiadie's novel before. The protagonist's final ending is a bit unexpected, but I feel that there is something missing in the content. I can't put it into words. There is also the interaction between the two. There are too many knives, the knife is stupid, and there is not enough candy. And since we have contact with the Golden Descent, I didn't understand what Aglaiya's divinity and golden threads were for. The protagonist nearly burped several times without reacting. Now that we all know that the protagonist is very important to Xia Die, then Aglaiya should take action, right? (Such as house arrest) Not to mention it also affects Feng Jin. Of course, it may also be because the author focuses on the emotional line and not the overall situation. It represents only my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. I hope the author will continue writing.

It's highly recommended, and overall it's well written. It's just that I may be a bit picky. I feel that the progress seems to be slow, but it's not very slow. It's just that when I wrote the third chapter, I felt it was a bit slow. The polishing is quite good, and it is a very worth watching.

It still feels familiar, but it feels a little weird in the first life. Overall, it's pretty good, but the author doesn't like it enough. [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates]

At the beginning, the story is connected and smooth, and there is no imposed setting. In addition, I am not a human or a computer, nor am I a navy soldier.

I asked why we are so familiar, but it turned out to be an old acquaintance (from Maid of Butterfly Extreme Distance Control)

It's interesting and very good-looking, but the farewell in each life is not heavy enough. It's a difficult question which of the two heroines will choose [smile][smile][smile][smile]

It feels like orange peach back then

Already looking forward to the third life