[Multiple heroines + romantic comedy + light novel + galgame + two-dimensional]
Shen Cheng stayed up all night to finish a love mystery game that would lead to a bad ending no matter what choice he made.
He was so angry that he yelled at the production team, but when he opened his eyes again, he actually entered the game world.
The bad news is that he only knows the ending, not who the criminal is, or the backstory that doesn't appear in the game.
The system did not give him extraordinary fighting power, leaving only a detective agency that no one cared about, and an identity that looked like a middle-of-the-road detective.
In order to avoid being involved in the plot, Shen Cheng set several rules for himself:
Don't accept commissions, mind other people's business, don't approach the heroine, get out of school on time, and never work overtime.
However, on the first day when he transferred to another school, a certain girl who was supposed to be in misfortune sat next to him.
Immediately afterwards, incidents such as candid photography, false accusations, disappearances, and lies appeared one after another. In order to cover up why he could always detect danger in advance, Shen Cheng could only bite the bullet and continue investigating.
Just as I was investigating, things gradually became not quite right.
"Detective-kun, I'm counting on you this time too."
"You say you don't care, but you come every time, don't you?"
"This time, don't think about acting alone again."
Looking at the increasingly lively office, Shen Cheng fell into deep thought.
He obviously just wants to be quiet and mess around.
Why do these problem girls always want him to open a business?
Reader comments
The author's level of dialogue writing is quite good, and the content is acceptable. The detective's perspective is also interesting, and it's not a mindless novel. But I feel that there is something wrong with Chiharu's character development. Her attitude towards the male protagonist and others is too separate, and Qianqing always takes the male protagonist's various behaviors for granted. In my opinion, the male protagonist has no substantial relationship with her (for the time being). Qianqing said that the male protagonist does not understand her, but she does not try to understand the male protagonist while accepting help from the male protagonist. She always looks condescending and really makes people uncomfortable [Thoughts]
Large sections of language description are the most taboo in novels, except in this book.
The writing is very vivid, the timing is very accurate, and it really feels like a detective. It is not a love story disguised as a detective (although it is also a love story).
Five stars.
It's a good book, and the author's writing style has improved significantly. From the beginning of the case, readers can understand who the thief is, to the later description of the bank protagonist Luo Ji's thinking, and to the step-by-step mystery of the recording incident, which makes readers really want to follow the protagonist's reasoning and find the real culprit. Moreover, the psychological problems and suspense reasoning of teenagers, as well as the conflicts between characters and daily interactions are very well integrated. The character creation is also great. The transformation of the male protagonist, Qianqing's transformation, and the sister's transformation are all. It has a cause and effect, and is not abrupt. The argument between the male protagonist and Qianqing is also traceable. It is accumulated from daily interactions and does not appear suddenly. Moreover, although the male protagonist is involved, he is not dependent on it. His reasoning is also well-founded, unlike some detective stories. , To solve crimes only by relying on the hook, most of the male protagonist's use of the hook requires the assistance of force. Reasoning is the male protagonist's own ability. The only shortcoming is that the male protagonist has a bit of a human-machine flavor in the early stage, but it is not bad. It is to pave the way for the transformation of the male protagonist.
It's pretty good, it has the feel of a light novel, and the pace is pretty good, but not many people read it [What] Don't people like to read light novels now? [Thinking] But the author is slow to update, in short, it's not enough to read [crazy] [Cool] [Cool]
I don't know how to evaluate it, but the logic is very clear and the writing is very fluent. It's beautiful to read in series. The plot is also 100% good. The missing parts are mixed into the mystery plot and will not affect the viewing experience at all. It is very reasonable and belongs to the good work No One. [Cover face]
The author's writing is good, and the content of the story is okay, but there is a problem, that is, the timeline of their ages may be set to 19 years old due to the tomato selection, but the content of the story is around the second year of high school, and some of the age design of the characters
It's well written, the writing is not bad, and it's a light novel with a lot of feeling (but after reading it, I realized that the author is on a single player, please let more people read it [face covering], otherwise I will have to read another novel [crying])
Now Chapter 27... How to say... Exhausted [Petrochemical], I can only say that everyone's preferences are different, it's nice to lose your brain [laughs], but if you are serious, there may be some poisonous points...? [What]
The reason for giving four stars is: when you write, you have already surpassed most people.
The detective work and plot of this book are both pretty good. It's not a romance novel that just pretends to be a detective. It has the feel of a Japanese light novel. But there are too many conversations, which may make people feel a little uncomfortable (you need to judge by yourself)
It's nice to read, and it's more to the reader's taste. The characters have a lot of continuous dialogue. If you are not interested in or can't accept Nikolai, it probably won't be suitable. The first big chapter is a bit like a short story I saw in Hyouka before, but I can't accept the fight between the male and female protagonists. They undermine each other and attack each other in a cultured way. It's a couple who fights each other. If the relationship between the male and female protagonists can be written better, it will definitely become a masterpiece (according to the previous level) and I hope the author can work hard.
It has a very pure Japanese light flavor. If you like reading Japanese light novels, you may get used to it, but if you are not used to it, it may feel awkward. The plot and character arrangement are very good. I like this awkward and pully atmosphere. I hope that the relationship between men and women will be further developed and that there will be more Shura fields [blowing kisses].
I've finished reading the first 40 chapters. The writing is awesome and the atmosphere is incredible.
I've finished reading them all now. This book has some explanations. It's just that a large section of character dialogue and some details were not handled well, but I'm sure you won't lose anything after reading it.
After reading the first volume so far, I feel that it is quite enjoyable. The plot advances reasonably and the interactions between the characters are reasonable.
Not bad, easy to like.
Good light novel style
Not bad, the writing is quite interesting.
Looks good, feels great
Very interesting to watch, the interactions between the characters are very interesting
Highly recommended, it's a bit boring at the beginning and the content is mainly dialogue-based, but it's fun to watch for a long time.
Slow pace, emotional foreshadowing, step by step, not for those who like to read cool stories, the description of the character's personality will be more distorted (Japanese taste)
It's an excellent detective novel. Although the murderer in the end is a bit obvious (at least in the first part), I really like the character of the protagonist and the reasoning process.
It's good. I hope you don't stop updating.
Very delicate, very twisted, very youthful
It has a bit of a radio-type feel. As long as you are in tune with the radio waves or your taste, it is worth a look.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Come on author, it looks great
You can wait for me to take a closer look
Short but rich conversations
It's okay. Why is no one watching it? Comments [Thinking]
I would like to give some suggestions. There are too many dialogues. You can adjust it to a psychological description where the male protagonist investigates the case alone. There are too many dialogues, which makes me tired from reading. At the same time, I can't tell who said each sentence.
Very nice. The three-no male protagonist rescues the female protagonist with a pleasing personality
The author's level of dialogue writing is quite good, and the content is acceptable. The detective's perspective is also interesting, and it's not a mindless novel. But I feel that there is something wrong with Chiharu's character development. Her attitude towards the male protagonist and others is too separate, and Qianqing always takes the male protagonist's various behaviors for granted. In my opinion, the male protagonist has no substantial relationship with her (for the time being). Qianqing said that the male protagonist does not understand her, but she does not try to understand the male protagonist while accepting help from the male protagonist. She always looks condescending and really makes people uncomfortable [Thoughts]
Large sections of language description are the most taboo in novels, except in this book. The writing is very vivid, the timing is very accurate, and it really feels like a detective. It is not a love story disguised as a detective (although it is also a love story). Five stars.
It's a good book, and the author's writing style has improved significantly. From the beginning of the case, readers can understand who the thief is, to the later description of the bank protagonist Luo Ji's thinking, and to the step-by-step mystery of the recording incident, which makes readers really want to follow the protagonist's reasoning and find the real culprit. Moreover, the psychological problems and suspense reasoning of teenagers, as well as the conflicts between characters and daily interactions are very well integrated. The character creation is also great. The transformation of the male protagonist, Qianqing's transformation, and the sister's transformation are all. It has a cause and effect, and is not abrupt. The argument between the male protagonist and Qianqing is also traceable. It is accumulated from daily interactions and does not appear suddenly. Moreover, although the male protagonist is involved, he is not dependent on it. His reasoning is also well-founded, unlike some detective stories. , To solve crimes only by relying on the hook, most of the male protagonist's use of the hook requires the assistance of force. Reasoning is the male protagonist's own ability. The only shortcoming is that the male protagonist has a bit of a human-machine flavor in the early stage, but it is not bad. It is to pave the way for the transformation of the male protagonist.
It's pretty good, it has the feel of a light novel, and the pace is pretty good, but not many people read it [What] Don't people like to read light novels now? [Thinking] But the author is slow to update, in short, it's not enough to read [crazy] [Cool] [Cool]
I don't know how to evaluate it, but the logic is very clear and the writing is very fluent. It's beautiful to read in series. The plot is also 100% good. The missing parts are mixed into the mystery plot and will not affect the viewing experience at all. It is very reasonable and belongs to the good work No One. [Cover face]
The author's writing is good, and the content of the story is okay, but there is a problem, that is, the timeline of their ages may be set to 19 years old due to the tomato selection, but the content of the story is around the second year of high school, and some of the age design of the characters
It's well written, the writing is not bad, and it's a light novel with a lot of feeling (but after reading it, I realized that the author is on a single player, please let more people read it [face covering], otherwise I will have to read another novel [crying])
Now Chapter 27... How to say... Exhausted [Petrochemical], I can only say that everyone's preferences are different, it's nice to lose your brain [laughs], but if you are serious, there may be some poisonous points...? [What] The reason for giving four stars is: when you write, you have already surpassed most people.
The detective work and plot of this book are both pretty good. It's not a romance novel that just pretends to be a detective. It has the feel of a Japanese light novel. But there are too many conversations, which may make people feel a little uncomfortable (you need to judge by yourself)
It's nice to read, and it's more to the reader's taste. The characters have a lot of continuous dialogue. If you are not interested in or can't accept Nikolai, it probably won't be suitable. The first big chapter is a bit like a short story I saw in Hyouka before, but I can't accept the fight between the male and female protagonists. They undermine each other and attack each other in a cultured way. It's a couple who fights each other. If the relationship between the male and female protagonists can be written better, it will definitely become a masterpiece (according to the previous level) and I hope the author can work hard.
It has a very pure Japanese light flavor. If you like reading Japanese light novels, you may get used to it, but if you are not used to it, it may feel awkward. The plot and character arrangement are very good. I like this awkward and pully atmosphere. I hope that the relationship between men and women will be further developed and that there will be more Shura fields [blowing kisses].
I've finished reading the first 40 chapters. The writing is awesome and the atmosphere is incredible. I've finished reading them all now. This book has some explanations. It's just that a large section of character dialogue and some details were not handled well, but I'm sure you won't lose anything after reading it.
After reading the first volume so far, I feel that it is quite enjoyable. The plot advances reasonably and the interactions between the characters are reasonable.
Not bad, easy to like.
Good light novel style
Not bad, the writing is quite interesting.
Looks good, feels great
Very interesting to watch, the interactions between the characters are very interesting
Highly recommended, it's a bit boring at the beginning and the content is mainly dialogue-based, but it's fun to watch for a long time.
Slow pace, emotional foreshadowing, step by step, not for those who like to read cool stories, the description of the character's personality will be more distorted (Japanese taste)
It's an excellent detective novel. Although the murderer in the end is a bit obvious (at least in the first part), I really like the character of the protagonist and the reasoning process.
It's good. I hope you don't stop updating.
Very delicate, very twisted, very youthful
It has a bit of a radio-type feel. As long as you are in tune with the radio waves or your taste, it is worth a look.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Come on author, it looks great
You can wait for me to take a closer look
Short but rich conversations
It's okay. Why is no one watching it? Comments [Thinking] I would like to give some suggestions. There are too many dialogues. You can adjust it to a psychological description where the male protagonist investigates the case alone. There are too many dialogues, which makes me tired from reading. At the same time, I can't tell who said each sentence.
Very nice. The three-no male protagonist rescues the female protagonist with a pleasing personality