Zootopia: Picked up by Mr. Big at the Beginning

The friendship with Nick is better written. It is also normal to describe how cruel he is when facing someone who bullies him. It's also a bit more like a gangster. The writing is good. The protagonist is well written and the character is successfully portrayed.

It's good-looking, the plot is smoothly connected, and the characters are not OOC. It's a rare masterpiece of foreign persimmons (ﾉ*ﾟｰﾟ)ﾉ. As for cp, the book belongs to the author, and the author has the final say on how the emotional line develops. As a reader, I don't think it is necessary to impose my own ideas on others. After all, it is difficult to agree with others. If you want this, it is difficult for him to agree on what he wants. Thank you King for this interesting story. Also, please update soon! ! ! ! ! Not enough (`A´), I really want to see how the career line will develop! ! ! (Os: It feels like I am writing a review required by the teacher (◑.◑)

Okay, okay, the protagonist is adopted by Mr. Big as his own son, the plot is not frustrating, and it is refreshing The co-protagonist quickly develops his own power, reversing the tragedies and conflicts of other characters. He kills when he should kill and frightens when he should. He kills decisively, and the three views are online. The important characters are basically in the same camp as the protagonist. There are emotional lines, but I don't know if they will be handled well. I'm looking forward to it. He has a bit of a heartthrob attribute, but it is different from other doujins that lack processing. The character is not a mindlessly promoted protagonist, but the protagonist is equally good and knows how to use force and violence to deal with things. Overall, four stars for now, five stars to be determined later.

It's pretty good. It's pretty good at the moment and the writing is good. I hope I can continue to work hard. The only bad thing is that there are fewer books. I hope the author doesn't go to the palace [smile][smile][smile] Yes, it's just a little short. Another thing is that the real heroine will be Bob, Bot, and Nick. It's so hard to guess [smile][smile][smile]

This book is very nice [admiration], and the other thing is, the author, you don't have to worry about the bullshit demands of those gods [laughing and crying], just write according to your own outline, I believe you [think] [think], the most important thing is to update it quickly [angry] [angry] [angry] I have seen the ads to support you [laughing] [learned] [learned]

It looks good, but the only drawback so far is that as the heir to the Blackhand family and with a polar bear bodyguard, he was stolen several times by thieves, which feels a bit far-fetched. Other aspects are very good, looking forward to the follow-up

It's pretty good-looking, but it's not without CP, which is a pity

Needless to say, it looks good. Is Kana a passerby character? If so, it would be a bit of a pity. [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Bookshelf plus one]

It's good to watch. This genre is quite rare. It's my first time reading a Zootopia fanfic. The plot and characterization are okay. The heroine's appearance is just average. When I read this title, I wanted to read a career-related story. I also hope there will be more career and friendship lines. Big boost for the author >ᴗoಣ

It's very good, the description is very good, just read it. The highlight is that if you don't like the furry, you can leave. Don't urinate down there and pollute the Internet environment😋 Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

A very talented Zootopia fan, with a few minor flaws, but it doesn't affect its beauty. [The masterpiece of bird food] It's really good. I personally felt a little awkward in the first few chapters, but after getting over it, I felt it was really good-looking. The overall story is more daily, mixed with some overt and covert struggles between families and gangsters. In the early stage, the male protagonist's thinking has not completely changed. When there is a conflict, he is a little hesitant and prefers a "mild" approach to handling it (getting done behind the scenes) [fear]. After the Hippopotamus family was dealt with, the protagonist has completely grown up. Later, he becomes unreasonable and cruel when he can take action. (It doesn't feel like a poisonous point, it's considered a growth line) Pure love single heroine, the heroine appears in chapter 30, white wolf Karen. Her stepmother is a serious (cheese) snow leopard [laughing evilly] which leads to her not being recognized. But the protagonist's admission score was one point short of a perfect score, and her mother immediately changed her face. Then Karen felt uncomfortable and was a little hostile to the protagonist (actually a little shy). There aren't many emotional lines so far, but I'm blindly guessing that it's from a proud and rebellious girl to a cute and coquettish little wolf who is always obedient [laughing] Anyway, it's pretty good-looking. If you like to watch Fu Rui, you can try Xiandan (cross out)

In an era when AI is prevalent, the author still insists on doing it by hand. Not to mention that the author is very rigorous. It can be seen from the first few chapters. The writing style is also very good and it is not embarrassing to read. I hope the author will continue to do so and update more [Blow kiss]

Time is really an emotional thing. In the blink of an eye, the author has written the fifth book (actually the sixth one). Watching the author grow up little by little, it feels like developing a game. Watching the author's writing become smoother and smoother, and the plot becoming more and more transparent, it is so rewarding. From Yongyao Star at the beginning, to Reacher later, and now Kevin, reading the author's book is like what happened yesterday. Nick and Judy's scenes appear just right, there are scenes but not too much. Just when you were thinking about when these two characters would appear again, they appeared, without letting these two characters take up too much space, and the main perspective was still kept with Kevin. The father-son relationship with Mr. Da is also quite satisfying, he is like both a father and a godfather. (The original prototype of Mr. Big has something to do with that.) And Mr. Big did not over-control the protagonist, allowing the protagonist to freely choose most things, and proposed some small details at critical times. Through Mr. Big's movements and expressions, we can also see that he cares about Kevin, and after Kevin was injured, the feeling of Mr. Big destroying a city with Kevin's tears. Kevin knows how not to let kindness become cheap, knows how to remove the root of the grass, take revenge when revenge is needed, be kind when it is time to be kind, and keep grudges clear. Of course, this place still did not escape the fate of the skunk butt carpet, but fortunately, this time Kevin stopped him and added some details. Nick was also deceived. In the end, Kevin also made the carpet seller pay the price (a price that only comes once in a lifetime) and helped Nick, himself and Mr. Big get justice.

I really love this type, and I feel that the author's writing style is also great. I don't have the ability to appreciate AI, but the position I see so far is hand rub [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

Personally, I think it's pretty good-looking. The only drawback is that there are too many gods. The author said several times that it's pure love. However, many gods said they wanted two male protagonists-_-||

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The writing is okay, it's the way a normal person would write. The most powerful and latest one is called a weight to stop a bullet [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

Highly recommended, the plot is not procrastinating, the characters are rich and delicate, and the emotions are sincere. Among the Zootopia fics I've seen, it's one of the most delicious, in my opinion. There is no plot promotion for the sake of promoting the plot, it is all foreshadowing, step by step, I am not very good at writing book reviews, Aba Aba Finally, I will update a lot more and feed me to my fullest.

This book is very interesting. I hope the author can keep the style and continue writing. This book is a good read, but the plot is reasonable and not brainless. It is a very good fan work in Zootopia.

It's very good, quite innovative, and makes people look forward to the follow-up stories. But I hope the typos can be corrected and some sentences can be polished to make them smoother. Overall it's very good

Not bad, the writing is very delicate and the plot is very coherent. I recommend giving it a look.

At present, it seems that it can be online both in terms of setting and logic. It is also very considerate for readers like me who have not watched Zootopia. It can be read as a small refreshing article. However, I have a question. Will the protagonist develop into a technology giant in the later stage? [What]

This is the first Zootopia fanfic I've read, and I've only read about 20 chapters so far. To be honest, it's pretty good-looking. [Bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one] Note: I still don't know if there is a female protagonist. If you don't like reading, don't insult the author. The author has worked very hard [Salute][Salute][Salute]

It's okay. I've never seen this type of book before. This book made my eyes shine. Okay, this book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xu Baochai was really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowing fighting scenes that make you feel like you are actually there, and the character descriptions are also spot-on! M250 general machine gun-Fenghuodi With-6KM35M0018HCRG65TH74F

This is the gold content of 7.1 Points for 110,000 words. Try to knock down the 🐢 above. The ratings have gone up again in the past few days. Come on, author.

It's very beautiful. There's nothing poisonous about it so far. It's consistent with the introduction. Five-star praise is encouraging.

The days of catching up are so long, and joy and pain always accompany me. I am happy to find such a good book, but I also hate why I found it at this time. I still have more to say and can't stop! Alas, alas! ｡ﾟ(ﾟ´ω`ﾟ)ﾟ｡

Super good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking, what do I want this for? Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

To be honest, it's really good. This is one of Tomato's rare Zootopia fics, and the plot is also good. I met several important characters when they were young and then changed their personalities. As the sole heir of Mr. Big, it's a pure underworld. Those who can be solved with guns will never take action.

A very good white-haired furry that doesn't get sluggish. The hippopotamus family that offends the protagonist will sink into the river in the next chapter. The author doesn't care about those people's outrageous claims and just follows his own pace [Like]