Comic Readers Always Think That the Host Is the Villain

The character design of the protagonist is okay. He is cold on the surface but complains on the inside. He is a bit salty and is still a white-haired person. But I feel that the relationship between the protagonist and the original protagonist, um, developed a bit quickly and they became friends very quickly. I prefer to take it slow. The system can also open cheats, which is good, and it is a regular channel. I can see that the author has written it very carefully.

It's good to watch, it's tied in one go, but it's too small. It's only chapter 35 so far, and it feels like there are foreshadowings everywhere. Xiao Wen's identity is also very fascinating. The little system mentioned that the ability level rises very fast even if it's cheating, and that strange jade pendant. My wife's "no CP" probably means that everyone has no CP, it seems to have a CP flavor. I still think that Shen Chuan's feelings for Xiao Wen came very suddenly. If there is a little sun, shouldn't normal people be very gloomy when encountering that kind of thing? Why did he directly become the Little Sun? Of course, my wife may have her own intentions, so I will just wait and see. The last link is a symbolic reminder, oh oh oh he is still a baby [crying]

It's so beautiful🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women look crazy💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock of vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘It's God, it's my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I'm on the 20th floor The tango danced on the balcony😮 made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression😋 is an alarm clock for vegetative people😨It was so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River. It sounded so good🥰It is God, my rose, which illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful. It's tied. In fact, after reading it, you can feel that the author's writing style is not very good. I feel very contradictory in some places. For example, some key points are not written in place, or some very passionate places feel very bland and have no feeling to me. There was also the place where they were injured, and they were rescued later, but how did the protagonist stay intact in a few days (it gave me the feeling, and other original protagonists) and sat in the dessert shop chatting with the teacher. He was on the verge of death. No matter how fast people with super powers can recover, they can't recover so quickly. This is a very contradictory point.

Xiao Wen is really cute, like a salted fish who is forced to go to work. Moreover, the bond between Xiao Wen and the protagonist group is very deep. I didn't expect that the protagonist group would come up with such a method to form a team with Xiao Wen. Then the latest chapter describes Xiao Wen's exposed necklace and the actions of the woman in black robe. I feel that Xiao Wen's identity should not be simple. It should have a lot to do with this divine descent. Combined with the name God General, I can speculate that this Xiao Wen may be the god that God General is waiting for. Finally, I think this book is very good-looking. The author should not abandon the article and keep reading. [Love][love][love]

I don't know how to put it, but it's a little uncomfortable to watch, and it may be my own fault. I feel that the author's writing style has room for improvement. The development between the protagonist and the protagonist group is a bit fast, and the image of the protagonist is also a bit fast, but I feel that it is okay if it is fast. I don't know how to describe this feeling (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

Let me give you five stars first to encourage the author to fight. After all, I am a novice🥰 I've seen chapter thirteen. Next is the problem I feel: the relationship between the protagonist and the original protagonist group develops too quickly. In just thirteen chapters, the relationship goes from being emotionless to "must save them". It's too fast... And the chatting between the characters also feels very stiff. "Laughing loudly" and "laughing so hard that the screen is full of laughter" should not appear in the book. It will have a very stiff feeling. Then there is the battle. The battle of the original protagonist group is a bit sloppy and general, and there is no impression. You can write down some details and write it down in detail, or you can find some battle clips from good works to learn from. Also, if you are a novice author, don't write too many characters in the protagonist group. Generally, two or three original protagonists are enough. For novice authors, writing too many characters will make it difficult to describe, and often cannot describe their characteristics. Generally, the configuration of the original protagonist team is: upright little sun + cold and careful + team think tank. If there is one more, it will be awkward and strange, and it may become a background board, which will worsen the reader's perception. I won't comment on the rest yet because I haven't finished reading them yet. But you are a novice and you can learn the above. I am very optimistic about you! Come on come on! 🥰😋

This little Wen is so cute that it makes me cry. The contrast is awesome, the cold face is so cute, and the knife-mouthed tofu heart is this one. Xiao Wen: I really want to show it off. . Xiao Wen is a cute salted fish (I hope you can add names when writing about other people's experiences)

It's okay, I quite like this setting. But there are a lot of nonsense and inner thoughts, so I prefer concise ones. New writers can first learn how to write interesting novels in a concise and easy-to-understand way. In today's fast-paced era, we don't recommend talking too much. It would be much better to delete what is in your heart and give the results directly. Most people have a sense of immersion when reading novels. Too much nonsense will reduce their interest in the book. Even if the author deletes the psychological words, it will not affect the plot. If you want to describe the cold-faced cuteness of the protagonist, the most important thing is the core characteristics: indifferent character, sparse expression, movements and contrast. It is recommended to improve the writing style. Although it is fast-paced, the pace should not be too fast, otherwise the writing will not be long. You know how to write essays when you're in school, right? Onomatopoeia, metaphor, and reversal are the main ones. The rest are distant shots, close shots, middle shots, and perspective switching. There are too many so I won't go into them. You can search them yourself. But it's great for a new author to be able to write to this level. Come on. [Grass has been planted] I've only watched it for less than 30 minutes now, so I don't know the follow-up yet. I'll add another review after I finish watching it. I originally wanted to circle it and post a picture, but I couldn't post it, so I had to say it in text. [Send heart][Grass has been planted]

It's so beautiful🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women look crazy💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock of vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘It's God, it's my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I'm on the 20th floor The tango danced on the balcony😮 made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression😋 is an alarm clock for vegetative people😨It was so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River. It sounded so good🥰It is God, my rose, which illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful.

I am sure that this is one of the top comic novels on my bookshelf for both writing and plot. The plot descriptions of the characters in this novel are very good, the characters have their own stories, the protagonist's personality is also very outstanding, each character has its own characteristics, and the small system description in the business card is also very cute. Although the author's writing style is very delicate, the descriptions are delicate and interesting. The author herself is a very, very, very cute girl. I will swear allegiance to this book until it is finished (personal review)୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨(•̀⌄•́)

The quantity is so small. I always feel that his pace is so fast and a bit fragmented. I think It's mainly about the inner portrayal of each of the protagonists. I think what's more prominent is the relationship between the two, I guess. As a four-person group, unlike other three-person and five-person groups, there is a triangle or something connected. There is very little interaction between the four people, really very little. Moreover, although Ayu's early warning and their experiences were discussed for a long time, they were not written down. Then the progress between them was rapid. Also entering the abcd group of that competition, two new characters suddenly appeared, and there was no subsequent characterization¿ It is said that there are three teams, but there is no other team at all. There is a faint feeling of death. I write whatever comes to my mind. It feels a bit stereotyped and follows the previous personal chapter. But they are a group, and I don't know exactly how long the four of them have known each other. How do the women's group and the men's group recognize each other? It's also a problem. The four of them are living together as a team. In addition, Ayu's interaction with the protagonist does not have any outstanding personality. It seems that he accepts it with a push and pull, and then clicks Ayu to accept soft things or not. A lot of them are talking about the system, but the small system does not have much expansion, it is a bit limited. Although the system seems to be limited to Ayu alone, he tied Ayu very well. Ayu did not interact with other people, which was a bit less (in fact, in the end, I just felt that there was very little) I feel that I read this book to see the author. The author's emojis behind the chapters indicate that the author is a nurturing person. Next, is there a little suggestion for people who are going to read this book? I think reading a book is worse than reading the author This book is a more traditional hot-blooded boy comic with a rescue oriented story. The world setting is relatively dangerous and everyone knows each other equally. However, there is not much description about ordinary people for the time being, but the relevant world setting has been mentioned. If you are more concerned about this aspect of the two-way world, it may be a bit disappointing. If you pay more attention to the characters of the protagonist group, if there is a single Xiao Zhang, you can watch that one first. Regarding the protagonist of this book, Ayu, she is gentle on the surface (I think she is actually very gentle), but is actually very dark. Maybe due to the limit of the number of chapters, I think it is a bit unbalanced. The main reason is that there is no foreshadowing. I feel that the vest is of no use. It is beautiful and strong. Anyway, I plan to stock up first, and then run away if it doesn't work, because I am currently at chapter 46, and I think that in the first 50 chapters, at least one person's character needs to be clearer, but I think everyone is a bit stereotyped. Mainly because there are not many details. For example, some small actions or the original protagonist likes to tell cold jokes. This setting is something that comes out of the blue. There is nothing in it before. I will continue to observe, sixty or seventy pictures¿ Then talk about it

It's very, very good-looking, and the protagonist's character is clear, especially the waistcoat is so striking. The original protagonists also have their own characteristics, and the author will not lack characterization just because they are supporting characters. Especially this system is so good!

This book is quite cute. Well, it's also a comic book, right? I didn't read too much But there are no surprises so far The author is also very cute It can be seen that he put his heart into it Including some characters with special abilities and so on, how should I say, well, they all have their own creativity. The teacher is really attentive Oops, I'm here now, so let's leave a comment to show off~ [Sending Hearts][Love]

It's great. I've been following your updates every day (I hope you'll update more every day, and I hope you'll have a good rest and just write a few chapters). I really like the articles you wrote. The character of the protagonist is very good (cold on the outside and soft on the inside), and it's all written in my heart. Finally, I hope that more people will see your stories. It will slowly become popular. I also hope that you will always keep your love for creation and be happy every day🥰I will always be with you😘

I lost it! This system is a little different from what I saw before! I keep getting kickbacks secretly like this [what] [what] [what] But the host is still very reliable when he is in danger [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] The system is a bit at odds with the way of heaven [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] Jinyu is really a good person. He seems cold but is actually gentle at heart, and his second identity is also easy to relate to.

There is something wrong with the system. The emotions are created with a special sense of arrogance. There is a kind of arrogance that is vague. Maybe the author didn't notice it when he wrote it, and there is a feeling of being unreasonable. It makes me feel... I have to say something in a place where I can talk well. Maybe I am too sensitive. But the author's plot arrangement is very good, and every foreshadowing is very exciting. Overall, it is good. This is the problem with the system. I will subconsciously lower my favorable impression. Of course, the author can also write according to his own thinking, but I hope the author can change the way the system speaks and his personality. Because I'm not sure if I'm the only one like this. I feel that if I change it, more people might come to see it. The warm summary they leave after every quarrel makes me feel a little contradictory. But the author's writing is still good. I hope the author can work harder to create a complete character for each character.

I really like the setting and everything, and the character creation is pretty good. I want to be a fan of it. When it comes to saving Xia Yan, will this system be too useless and too lovable? . . (Spoilers below) The system helps teammates who are in danger. If possible, please pay the inquiry fee. After that, the system borrowed enough energy to help the goldfish and fight the villains, but it soon ran out. I feel that in the early stage of the system, I selected a few powerful skills for the lottery, thinking that the system was particularly useful and powerful. However, I was a bit disappointed when it fell apart later. But I still really like this novel.

Pressure points Author, this article you wrote is really good, don't deny yourself (I feel like the author, you don't need to care too much about the opinions of our readers, it feels too flattering, just follow your own outline)

This author is very cute. I think this book is very good-looking. The plot is logical, the writing is very good, and it interacts a lot with readers. The author currently says that the protagonist has more vests on the back, which I like very much. If you like to read Ma Jiawen, you can read it. You can also read similar books that like to read about the protagonists in comics and time travel into comics. I really recommend this book (*^ω^*).

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I hope you won't stop updating [exploration]

It's very interesting to watch, with a lot of foreshadowing in the early stages, so it's worth watching. I hope the author can become the donkey of the production team~~~(>▽<)

Very pretty!

It suits my taste and looks good😍

It looks great. Can the author suddenly update Chapter 100 and scare me to death?

Can the system stop talking so much? I feel quite touched every time after watching the protagonists talk too much. But every time the system talks in a sensational moment, it immediately makes a scene [exploration]

It looks good, I must give it a five-star rating!

It's my favorite character and character! The author's writing is very nice : D

The whole thing is super nice, but there are a lot of typos in people's names. I don't know which one is the correct one for a while, which kind of affects the reading. Everything else is pretty good, the characters and plot are pretty good.

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