Mephisto from the Start, Eight-Point Light Wheel Right Off the Bat!

It's quite satisfactory. My objective evaluation is that I listened to the book and my perception may be different from yours. There is no big problem with the theme of the novel. There are also detailed descriptions of emotional descriptions, but there are almost no descriptions of the environment and the inner world. It is like a running account. Secondly, I am the protagonist of the book. Shi Da Chicken Legs doesn't stop you from reading because there are no descriptions or details of battles, and the plot is also quite dragging. It's not a pleasant read, but it's not sadistic. The emotional line is not emotional, and the growth line doesn't show any growth. It may be a slow-burning novel. There may be miracles in the future. The whole thing has no bad points. You can read it. Rather than refuting readers and admitting their own shortcomings, you may be able to improve your writing habits. Although I have never written a novel, I have read it for 20,000 hours on several platforms.

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your Brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character descriptions are very detailed.

Just for the end of Chapter 6, I give my five-star praise to the author. The author is so classy! Be more precise, it looks good and I love watching it! If the description was more detailed, it would be even more wonderful 👍

Looks good, but the quantity is a bit small Ding Deng ↗ Ding Deng ↘ Ding Deng ↗ Ding Deng ↘ Ding Deng ↗ Deng Deng↗Deng Deng↘Deng Deng↘ Ding Deng ↗ Ding Deng ↘ Ding Deng ↗ Ding Deng ↘ Ding Deng ↗ Deng Deng↗Deng Deng↘Deng Deng↘ (~~~) They sell hope 🤩 and create panic 😱 I sell my dignity at a low price 😢 but I can't get a tael of gold 💵 Bravery and magnanimity 😃 Soul and kindness 🥰 are not worth a beautiful skin anyway 😶🌫 Numb blood and tears are scratched 😶 The end of my life 😔 I was in a hurry 😨 Watching ghosts selling stolen goods in the daytime 🤗 Tragic resistance 😡 Don't laugh at my madness 🤫 I don't want this flesh and blood to become painless and itchy 💉 It gave me the kind of pain that makes me worse than death 😫 But I can only have one The empty space with nothing ✉️Looking at those so-called righteous and noble ones 😈The ugly ones are cursing me for being sick🤯He gave me the kind of pain that makes me worse than death, but I only have the empty space with nothing😥Looking at those so-called righteous ones The righteous and noble people are cursing each other🗣He gave me the kind of madness that laughs and calls deer a horse, but I can only have the dream of dying generously😌Looking at those so-called civilization and victory🤐Thousands of people are judging me and I am sick😤 (ᗜ ˰ ᗜ) Dear big brother: Seeing words is like meeting each other, showing trust and comfort. Liking your article is probably the most arbitrary and unreasonable thing in the world. It is not about weighing the pros and cons, or being motivated by sex, but suddenly there is a piece of your article that makes me worried and unable to let go. You are the extraneous branch in my stable years, and the sun, moon and stars in my ordinary life. Whether it's the sunrise in the morning, a nap at noon, or a night filled with stars, I want to spend it with you. Don't doubt why I like you, just like fish fall in love with the sea, birds fall in love with the sky, I don't quite understand what this means, I think it's like breathing, no need to practice, just because it's you. If you have any more articles, remember to post them. 😊 Reader: They say that if there is an end to the urge to update, I will be the savior. Reader: But why is there no one behind me now... Reader 1: After the end? Write your own book Reader: It's not bad to write your own favorite stories. Reader 2: I want to be a normal person. Reader: This cannot be called a wish. Reader 3: It's time to tell the difference. Reader: Then stand up and compete with me to see who can rush more! ...(Reader 3 has run away) Reader: Why… Reader: Why… Reader: It was you who took them away from me! Reader 4: I hope there will be no more interruptions in this world. Author: Reader, why are you working so hard? Reader: It turns out... I just want—"█████" ? : If, this is not the last chapter. ? : It's up to me to continue writing. ? : Until I finish writing all the chapters by myself. This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu and Sun Wukong Tutu for Diao Chan. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on!.

Reading this Ultraman fanfic, I would like to call it the most philosophically dialectical masterpiece since Heisei - the protagonist's memory can be called a cosmic Schrödinger switch: one second he swears that he "saw it when I was a child", and the next second he accurately loses his memory when faced with the classic plot. This "seen but forgotten" setting perfectly explains the limitations of human cognition, and is more advanced than any amnesia joke. The 22-year-old ace pilot could not find a single colleague of the opposite sex in the Kingdom of Light. His extreme persistence in the "pure comrade-in-arms relationship" might not even melt the light of Zoffie's M87. It is recommended that he be directly listed in the Ultra Encyclopedia as a "steel straight man specimen". What's even better is that when Mephistopheles tried his best to seize the body, Noah hung up the whole time and remained motionless. The silence was deeper than the stone statue of King Ultra. It turns out that the supreme being's attitude towards the dark forces is "you are busy, I will sleep for a while." This kind of Buddhist awakening flow really creates a new dimension to fight against evil. After reading the whole article, the logical loopholes are as bright as the dust of the Milky Way, and the density of writing is comparable to the redundant radiation of a plasma spark tower. However, it is this kind of chaotic aesthetics that is contradictory and self-contained, which made me deeply understand: the highest state of fan creation is to let readers see the author's courage to let himself go in every groove. Please keep it, really, don't change it.

The plot is really good. The reaction of ordinary people facing monsters is very realistic. This is the first Ultra fanfic that makes me want to read the follow-up. I highly recommend it. The author must continue to update it.

I give you the most direct, truthful, thorough, naked, harshest, sharpest, most profound, most realistic, most unmodified, least roundabout, least circuitous, least tortuous, most heart-piercing, most hard-core, The most straightforward, the neatest, the most refreshing, the most decisive, the least ink-stained, the least procrastinating, the least sloppy, the most poignant, the most ruthless, the least humane, the least showy, the least concerned about dignity, the most to the point, and the most straight to the point. , The most straightforward, the most direct to the point, the most direct to the core, the most tearing apart the appearance, the least pretense, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least polite, the least flattering, the least hypocritical, the least sensational, the least pretentious, the least artificial, the least Internal friction, the least nonsense, the least elaboration, the least redundant, the least empty, the least roundabout, the least detour, the least obtrusive, the least coy, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious answer I almost gave it five stars. 𪠽𪠽𪠽𪠽𪠽𪠽

Full marks, it's been a long time since I've seen a single-female story that I could read. The heroine is Xiaoya, a girl who is 155cm tall, cute and passionate (towards the hero). The heroine is not a perfect character. Although she has shortcomings, such as being timid, this is normal. Xiaoya is just a native after all. The plot is quite normal, and it also allows Dark Mephistopheles to enjoy the treatment of Nexus, haha, but the male protagonist does not directly fight back. If you want to see a cool story where the male protagonist is invincible and must take revenge, you can go, but it is not a very aggrieved one. Overall, the descriptions of women are quite normal, except that I remember one chapter said that a girl's legs were very white, but it was just a little bit there, not very poisonous. Update soon!!!!! Not enough!!!!!!!!! (⑉°з°)-♡ (´ε` ) ♡ㄟ(≧◇≦)ㄏ

I have read a lot of Ouwen, and this one definitely ranks as one of the best-looking novels with a single female protagonist. Moreover, the experience of the male protagonist is very close to reality. After being possessed by Mephistopheles, two souls, one black and one white, are involved in each other. The distortion and complexity of human nature are well polished. It is definitely a high-quality single female protagonist Ultra fanfic.

The author should write well and strive for a high rating. I like Ultraman Ace from the Showa era. My first entry into the Ultra series was Ultraman Ace, and I later added the other Ultra brothers. Even now that I'm working, sometimes I dream about myself transforming into Ultraman Ace at night. 🤭