There are twenty-eight turns in Xuanqing Mountain.
It is said that if you can climb up, you will live like a god in the sky.
Song Xiaoman crawled all his life.
As a result, we climbed to the first turn.
In this life, she decided to crawl behind others.
Because someone told her that girls shouldn't be heads.
Not only was it tiring, it was also dangerous.
But she didn't listen.
Later, when she felt she had to listen, she didn't have the chance.
At that time, she was floating in the air, and she thought if she could do it again.
She must listen.
Reader comments
Let's comment on one first, the introduction doesn't seem too uncomfortable.
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It is said that if you can climb up, you will live like a god in the sky.
Song Xiaoman crawled all his life.
As a result, we climbed to the first turn.
In this life, she decided to crawl behind others.
Because someone told her that girls shouldn't be heads.
Not only was it tiring, it was also dangerous.
But she didn't listen.
Later, when she felt she had to listen, she didn't have the chance.
At that time, she was floating in the air, and she thought if she could do it again.
She must listen. //
？ After failure and rebirth, there is a feeling of "you really shouldn't do it". If you can succeed just by not being a head goose, that would be very strange. If the heroine is capable, she can say that the method was used wrongly, or for other reasons, instead of just saying this in the introduction. It looks like the protagonist is an incompetent person who was reborn and compromised. The semantics I feel after reading the introduction: Only those who fail because they are the first goose, the pioneer, and the first to eat crabs
It's very interesting, although the introduction may be ambiguous (I think the original text in the introduction should be saying that the heroine's abilities were not fully developed in the previous life, resulting in a small part of the abilities being known by interested people, and then being raised and exploited. The heroine should not be such a person in this life, or the heroine is living in her own fledgling state. I have long exposed my specialness, attracted others to covet me, and was exploited in captivity. In this life, I have to be steady and steady, and take my time), but the text is still very good, and I don't hold back any grievances. It is quite enjoyable. Hahahaha, the author's writing is very good, and the language is gentle and smart, but there are too few. I hope I can keep updating~
It's very interesting. Why isn't it the end? When I was most excited, I discovered the word "urge for update".
Author, your article setting is very good and your imagination is very big. But can you change the introduction? It can easily arouse the disgust of female readers. 😘😘
Coming from the previous book, I like this style of writing.
The author's imagination is really unimaginable, it's so wonderful
It's from the last book. Can you please go back and make some extras [please update]
Support every book, the author should write more quickly
This book is amazing. I look forward to the follow-up. Why is it unfinished? The author of 555 is so creative.
The introduction is good, and the text is even better. There are more than forty chapters with no waste, and the chapters are endlessly exciting. I really like the worldview and the imaginative writing is excellent.
Let's comment on one first, the introduction doesn't seem too uncomfortable. ----// It is said that if you can climb up, you will live like a god in the sky. Song Xiaoman crawled all his life. As a result, we climbed to the first turn. In this life, she decided to crawl behind others. Because someone told her that girls shouldn't be heads. Not only was it tiring, it was also dangerous. But she didn't listen. Later, when she felt she had to listen, she didn't have the chance. At that time, she was floating in the air, and she thought if she could do it again. She must listen. // ？ After failure and rebirth, there is a feeling of "you really shouldn't do it". If you can succeed just by not being a head goose, that would be very strange. If the heroine is capable, she can say that the method was used wrongly, or for other reasons, instead of just saying this in the introduction. It looks like the protagonist is an incompetent person who was reborn and compromised. The semantics I feel after reading the introduction: Only those who fail because they are the first goose, the pioneer, and the first to eat crabs
It's very interesting, although the introduction may be ambiguous (I think the original text in the introduction should be saying that the heroine's abilities were not fully developed in the previous life, resulting in a small part of the abilities being known by interested people, and then being raised and exploited. The heroine should not be such a person in this life, or the heroine is living in her own fledgling state. I have long exposed my specialness, attracted others to covet me, and was exploited in captivity. In this life, I have to be steady and steady, and take my time), but the text is still very good, and I don't hold back any grievances. It is quite enjoyable. Hahahaha, the author's writing is very good, and the language is gentle and smart, but there are too few. I hope I can keep updating~
It's very interesting. Why isn't it the end? When I was most excited, I discovered the word "urge for update".
Author, your article setting is very good and your imagination is very big. But can you change the introduction? It can easily arouse the disgust of female readers. 😘😘
Coming from the previous book, I like this style of writing.
The author's imagination is really unimaginable, it's so wonderful
It's from the last book. Can you please go back and make some extras [please update]
Support every book, the author should write more quickly
This book is amazing. I look forward to the follow-up. Why is it unfinished? The author of 555 is so creative.
The introduction is good, and the text is even better. There are more than forty chapters with no waste, and the chapters are endlessly exciting. I really like the worldview and the imaginative writing is excellent.