(Western Fantasy) (Sword and Sorcery) (Seven Deadly Sins) (Dragon) (Elves) (Slow Burn) (Multiple Heroines)
A young boy, Joey, fell off a cliff from the battlefield. He thought he would die, but he was saved by a mysterious blue-haired witch.
His right arm is sealed with an unpredictable power, but his own magic power is only one-tenth of that of ordinary people.
After practicing hard day and night in a mountain courtyard, he finally awakened his talent for recasting the magic sword, but with this power, he could only activate one breath.
By chance, I glimpsed the witch's manuscript, and the secret of killing the gods was revealed.
The witch died to save him. The road to killing the gods was long and arduous, and his companions were accompanied by heavy pain.
So what if the magic power is meager?
Swinging the sword with a mortal body, in one breath, the rules are cut, and the sword points at the gods!
Reader comments
The writing style is very delicate. The emotional drama between Chloe and Joey is well written, but it takes up too little space. I hope to write more emotional lines. This style of writing feels like a traditional novel and not like an online novel.
The supporting characters all have their own independent thoughts, and each one is shrouded in the shadow of war. The female character does not fall in love with the male protagonist as soon as she sees it. There is a process of mutual trust, which is good.
The western fantasy system constructed is pretty good. There is no god template that is too popular. I hope we don't follow the old routine of turning the protagonist into the God of Annihilation.
And it's the first time I've seen Goldfinger reject the protagonist. It feels a bit like Ultraman.
Also, the early stage is too long, the pace is slow, and a bit boring, especially when the Silver Oath Alliance goes back, I don't feel like I'm back to the main line until I go north. The fight against the Knights later is a bit messy, mainly because I can't tell who is who with Roman numerals.
Overall, it's pretty good. It's only chapter 40. I hope the author can continue writing.
The author has written more emotional dramas, and the emotions are described delicately. Starting from meeting Delekina, the author's writing has obviously improved, and the main and branch plots have not jumped around.
I especially like the scene where the three of us are spinning around the fire with the snow falling in the sky. Only you can see through my forced smile and understand my loneliness...
The bond between the three people is restrained and poignant. They redeem each other in desperate situations, understand each other's hidden pain, and the complicated inner tug is delicate and real. It is very immersive to read.
Later, the God Envoy and the Illusion Demon are a bit depressing. The protagonist is not invincible, will be fragile, will collapse, and will doubt himself. Fortunately, Delekina and Eluna heal him.
Although I like Delekina very much, I still hope Eluna has more roles. Compared with Joey's introversion and Delekina's tsundere, she plays more of a communication bridge and resolves conflicts. But when Delekina and Joey quarreled, she was caught in the middle, which made me feel bad.
Eluna has changed from an ignorant princess to a companion who can stand alone. She should also like Joey.
And what about Chloe? She still doesn't know that Joey has lost his memory. She hopes that the author will be able to come to his senses later and everyone will be happy!
Maybe it's because I don't read much Western fantasy novels, and I can't remember some of the names, especially those about gods.
There is also the author's description of the emotional line, which prefers to express it through actions and rarely uses language and psychological description. It feels a bit uncomfortable to read (it may also be due to my own reasons and I am not used to it)
Furthermore, the description of the story that happened is very shallow, and it feels like it is very "floating" to read, and it has that profound feeling, so it feels a bit "messy" to me.
The writing style is very delicate. The emotional drama between Chloe and Joey is well written, but it takes up too little space. I hope to write more emotional lines. This style of writing feels like a traditional novel and not like an online novel. The supporting characters all have their own independent thoughts, and each one is shrouded in the shadow of war. The female character does not fall in love with the male protagonist as soon as she sees it. There is a process of mutual trust, which is good. The western fantasy system constructed is pretty good. There is no god template that is too popular. I hope we don't follow the old routine of turning the protagonist into the God of Annihilation. And it's the first time I've seen Goldfinger reject the protagonist. It feels a bit like Ultraman. Also, the early stage is too long, the pace is slow, and a bit boring, especially when the Silver Oath Alliance goes back, I don't feel like I'm back to the main line until I go north. The fight against the Knights later is a bit messy, mainly because I can't tell who is who with Roman numerals. Overall, it's pretty good. It's only chapter 40. I hope the author can continue writing. The author has written more emotional dramas, and the emotions are described delicately. Starting from meeting Delekina, the author's writing has obviously improved, and the main and branch plots have not jumped around. I especially like the scene where the three of us are spinning around the fire with the snow falling in the sky. Only you can see through my forced smile and understand my loneliness... The bond between the three people is restrained and poignant. They redeem each other in desperate situations, understand each other's hidden pain, and the complicated inner tug is delicate and real. It is very immersive to read. Later, the God Envoy and the Illusion Demon are a bit depressing. The protagonist is not invincible, will be fragile, will collapse, and will doubt himself. Fortunately, Delekina and Eluna heal him. Although I like Delekina very much, I still hope Eluna has more roles. Compared with Joey's introversion and Delekina's tsundere, she plays more of a communication bridge and resolves conflicts. But when Delekina and Joey quarreled, she was caught in the middle, which made me feel bad. Eluna has changed from an ignorant princess to a companion who can stand alone. She should also like Joey. And what about Chloe? She still doesn't know that Joey has lost his memory. She hopes that the author will be able to come to his senses later and everyone will be happy!
Maybe it's because I don't read much Western fantasy novels, and I can't remember some of the names, especially those about gods. There is also the author's description of the emotional line, which prefers to express it through actions and rarely uses language and psychological description. It feels a bit uncomfortable to read (it may also be due to my own reasons and I am not used to it) Furthermore, the description of the story that happened is very shallow, and it feels like it is very "floating" to read, and it has that profound feeling, so it feels a bit "messy" to me.