Twelve Talismans, My Machine Girl Has Nothing Missing.

Personally, I like it a lot, but I hope that the arrangement behind the talisman is that the protagonist is relatively fragile. It would be better if the dog talisman is left to him, and the horse talisman can be given to the machine girl. After all, the original work can repair the cruise ship, so the machine girl should also be able to repair it. Also, I hope the protagonist's growth curve is more obvious, as he can be quite reckless sometimes. It would be better if there were more interactions. Currently my favorite is Grandma Himeko😋, but I won't accept a character who feels like a family member.

Looks good. Is there only one mecha? Can the spell be taken back? The settings and ideas are good. I suggest you make a patch. For example, you can use the talisman yourself. The talisman is given to the mecha by yourself. This will make the protagonist look awesome and readers will feel better. In this way, there is no need to make major changes. Was it so frustrating to write this early stage? Will this really retain readers? To be honest, I can't stand it anymore. I slipped away.

Did the author not write this book? [Shocked]

Okay, thank you, teacher.

Why aren't there the greenskins and stars displayed on the phone, as well as the evil gods from Warhammer 40,000? ?

The characteristic I'm familiar with is that when Carl arrives, he activates the robot.

So far, it's okay. It's also pretty good except for the daily lines of spell-themed robot girls.