Hogwarts: I Became Invincible by Eating Fantastic Beasts

The subject matter is quite novel, but it is probably the first time for a fan to write this kind of Western novel, so the writing has a flavor of dialect, which may be a bit strange when read. Also, be sure to use double quotation marks when speaking in some local languages, otherwise the reading will not be very good. Compared to the fan of Western novels, I feel that the author is more suitable for writing local novels. But I don't think there's any big problem with the plot, it's just that the names are easily confused. However, the author writes that his cooking skills are very skillful, nothing to say. Not mate, not Hermione Granger? Lily Evans😦 Have you really seen it?

Good book, good to read, the only flaw is that there are no dialogue boxes in some chapters, which always makes me feel like I am watching a narration, and the sense of immersion is not enough. I forgot to add that there is a problem with names. There are many wrong names. There is a problem with currency. Prices are not very reasonable, but you should be able to figure it out if you throw away your brain.

The description is very good, although the protagonist is a bit philandering, and although I like the single female protagonist, I think it is okay for readers, but there are too few words. And although the book is written in a Chinese dialect style, which is easy to understand, there are too many Chinese pronunciations, which will cause subtle disgust. And for British books like Harry Potter, this opposition between Chinese style and Western style also makes me feel very disconnected.

The book itself is quite well written, but there is one thing I don't understand. What is the protagonist's name? Now it's Cedric, now it's Alan Cecil's.

What is the protagonist's name? Two or three cards are exchanged for the same name. Two or three cards are exchanged for the same name.

I'm going to check in during the holidays. It's cool. It's Sister Ejiao. Don't you remember the holidays? I'm so confused.

Why does the protagonist's name keep changing?

The writing is okay, just don't keep changing the main character's name.

It looks okay, but the name keeps changing.

The writing is quite creative and interesting, but there are still some problems.